Steel******

Maybe I have a bit of a savior mentality. Every time I see the protagonist's work saving others, I feel very happy (personally, I feel happy). The author writes very well. The protagonist is a very sincere protagonist, and some of his thoughts or actions are very sincere. And the characters here are basically not facial expressions (emphasis!) Some characters really moved me and made me cry or smile for them. So far, I have seen the protagonist come back from France to attend a state banquet, and I feel quite warm. It is not the kind of banquet where he writes poems to cause outrage or there are people who are not clear-headed, but it is just an ordinary meal. Everyone encourages the protagonist and likes this heart-warming story. I just want to ask if the girl named Su is the CP of the protagonist, and whether the protagonist has no CP or has CP. I feel that it is more interesting for the protagonist to pursue a career. I don't really want to see the protagonist fall in love. I feel like, well... I am the kind of child who wants to go to Tsinghua and Peking University to drive an excavator with Huang Mao. I don't mean to discriminate against people who drive excavators (not a guide, just asking! Please don't get me wrong!) I love this story, so I give the author five stars. That's it for now. I'll see if the author changes his style of writing later or the writing is no longer the type I like, and decide whether to change the rating.

First, let me give my evaluation Advantages: This book creates an independent and special world, and at the same time writes about a literary inheritor who breaks the chain. It has an independent story and diverse personalities. Being conservative does not mean opposition. It has an independent personality and creates a flesh-and-blood person, of course in thought. The shortcoming is that the characters are single, not in thought, but in words and life. Except for the protagonist, the words and deeds of others are too one-sided and lack the vitality of daily life. For the protagonist, the character's behavior is single. The text is not just about the book, but the experience behind it is equally important. It is lived by the people at the bottom, so you can add a travel-loving character to the protagonist, as well as other people's stories, and the thoughts of book fans, to describe a person's thoughts on reading. I have read several manuscript novels, and I was deeply impressed by Li Liwen's novel. The reason is that the rhythm is well grasped. The author can also learn from it. The rhythm must be controlled well. At this point, I present this book to the author, come on

When the hot pot of words is booming When the smoke fills the mind, The blue sea stirs up a gust of wind Gently dissipate the blur of the world When a young traveler walks into the desert The air is filled with hot sorrow The distant oasis stretches out a hand Gently erase the island of life

It's okay, the plot is not very interesting, but after reading it, I suddenly became interested in modern poetry. The author has read a lot of modern poetry, and I can understand a lot of modern poetry while reading. Moreover, if you read it in the context of the plot, you can appreciate the beauty and emotion of the poem faster than reading the poem alone.

It's quite good. At a time when the literary genre is becoming more and more degenerate into purely vulgar pretentious themes and is becoming more and more boring, writing like this is still somewhat interesting. In fact, the flow of writing should have such an atmosphere, where communication and collision, incomprehension and empathy all coexist.

It's okay. The background is quite interesting, but I don't really like the subsequent development. It's a bit too bland, but keep writing! [Laughing]

This is the first book I have written. I give it five stars.

The first part is really good and powerful. It is a sudden clarion call in an era of silent writing. I don't know what happened next, so I read it and commented.

This article is quite rare. The meaning of literature is to touch the soul. Although it is a copy, the occasional originality is not a childish inheritance. Come on, author.

Pretty good, I have my own ideas

Woc, what an awesome new book.

The front part is pretty good, but I haven't read the back part yet. I should write some articles.

Come on, the author writes very well and is very touching.

I think the writing is good, and I hope the author can maintain the power conveyed before: P, come on, author!

A masterpiece among masterpieces. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist still deceived himself, but this is the fate of every copywriter If the literary environment of China in the book is described as making people angry, then the literary environment of Europe in the book is-cold. It makes you sweat and feel horrifying. (I am exaggerating to express it) The backwaters of China in the book at least contain the oppression and pain of steel. The protagonist's slap in the face makes people feel like their chests are on fire (actually it feels good). The backwaters of Europa are nothing but coldness and nothingness, and the protagonist's fame makes people feel like the sun is shining on them (actually it's just another feeling of refreshment). But the core is the excitement of glory and fame. The world in the book seems to still be in the Great Ice Age. Chinese literature is painfully suppressed on the ice, running people over, and is in the inertia of advancing by any means necessary. The literature of Europa has been frozen to death, which is more terrifying than running someone over. The vast white area is so clean that there is still a little "something" left, but this is really nothing. I just don't know what the literary environment of the American people was like when the map of the United States was created. How is it different from Europa? Europa is death and nothingness. From the description, America is not Cthulhu cyberpsychotic, right?