Don't Mess with ******
别惹******
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 884k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
23.4kReads
5.8Score
5.6kShelves
401Chapters
4.1kListens
736.1kReads · all time
别惹******
I watched the comic skit and thought it was a female channel. After reading the original work, I realized it was a male channel. It feels very good, very good. The author's style seems to be that of a pair of people who support each other for a lifetime and have a long-lasting relationship. It's not like having a harem, it's rare in male videos. The character of the heroine is also very good, she is the kind of redeeming little sun. She may seem weak but the heroine is not annoying. Very tough cattails. Then the other male protagonist, the prince, is in trouble and there is a secret guard and a dead soldier beside him. This one is really as low as the dust. There is no golden finger or Long Aotian's open eye in the whole process. Although the pace is not fast and it is not a cool story, it is delicate. Then I hope everyone will support me! Let's all go watch the short play! You and I support the second season of the short drama, okay?
From the perspective of martial arts, it is a pretty good novel, but it is full of female characters: no hardship, frustration, and logical flaws are all filled with the whole book. It is really painful and happy to read [laughing and crying]
No system, no time travel, single female protagonist, good writing, great book! !
It's from a short play. The short play portrays Klaas very well. After reading the original work, I realized that it's not Shuang Jie (the male protagonist has liked someone else), which is a bit awkward. Putting this aside, I can only say that the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the two little bitter gourds is very touching.
I read 👀 and read the comments from book friends. Some people couldn't stand it in the early stage. You can jump back a little bit. Well... The emotional line is really well written and delicate, and the sad atmosphere is also well created. In some places, my eyes are sore after reading it~
I only learned about this novel through the AI comics. I think this novel has the characteristics of long-lasting and simple. Li Si saw through the love of his so-called sweetheart and chose to leave in anger and become a suspected drunken beggar in Qinghe Town. When Mrs. Xu often gave food to such beggars and prevented her so-called "fiancé" from beating Li Si, I fell in love with the kind and brave Mrs. Xu before Li Si did. The author is also unambiguous about the depiction of people being oppressed. Especially the Wang family's attitude towards human life was deeply troubled. What kind of person will Li Chengqi become under the education and influence of Concubine Wang? Such a person cannot be an emperor. Water can carry a boat, but it can also overturn it. What the people want is the foundation for an emperor to stand on the world. Zhang Xingsu thinks that Li Sita attaches too much importance to love and justice. But if it weren't for Li Si's love and righteousness, how could he dare to follow him? Especially the character creation of Wang Guifei is particularly three-dimensional. Through Li Xuanming's words, he told why the Concubine Wang Guifei fought and plotted. In the later period, he often looked back on Li Xuanming's death and felt regretful and made practical changes. I really thought it was very interesting (*/∇\*) The days in the tavern were also written in great detail, which shows that the author also had good intentions when writing about the tavern.
The water flows slowly, and the market lights up It is a novel with a very strong emotional line. If you can't eat fine chaff, you will turn left when you go out. Without a foundation of knowledge, reading novels will only ruin your outlook on life. Encourage each other The pace slowed down later on, and it felt like there was no main plot to follow.
The previous writing is quite good and compact. It looks very plain but it hides a lot of warmth and is close to real life. It is a normal novel in Tomato. But after reading it, it felt a bit like a running novel, with many sentences being pieced together repeatedly. When I saw Weiyang, the author wrote that Weiyang's feelings for Li Si were very similar to Xu Wanning's feelings for Li Si, which made me feel similar. Still watching... I hope there will be surprises later
It's pure and refreshing, the plot is interlocking, and the protagonist's portrayal is also very clear. He is the kind of person who doesn't say many ruthless words, but there is a touch of tenderness in the details. The genre matches the martial arts theme.
The writing style is mature and steady, and the sense of story has ups and downs in an orderly manner, but I just don't understand why the score is so low. According to the author's writing style, it should be impossible to run with a score of 8.9 Or above. In terms of plot, it is speculated that there are still two lines going hand in hand. On the one hand, it is a martial arts competition, and on the other hand, it is a battle for the throne? I feel like the protagonist recovers from his illness too quickly, and the various martial arts factions are not clearly written. In the future, the author may still write about routines for the protagonist to improve his military strength, secrets, skills, etc. - The future direction will be a watershed, and the success or failure of the book will depend on this. After all, the origin of the main character has been basically dug out, and writing about daily assassinations is just a waste of time. The shortcoming of this article is that the main plot line is blurred, and what the couple should write has been written. To put it bluntly, the wife and children have everything they want, and they have nothing to look forward to in the future. I hope the author will use his imagination. If there is no clever idea, he may not be able to retain readers. The guess is that the emperor is coming, his wife and relatives appear, the adopted girl is the young master of the demon sect, the various sects are going to cause trouble, the protagonist has been on the frontier for ten years and so on - don't write it like this [face covering] is too cliche. Come on, author, it's totally different.
It's very interesting. It's a bit poisonous at the front, but it's okay. I've read too many cool articles that I can't resist even a little bit of poison.
I came from a short drama and thought it was a female video [face covering] I didn't have the patience to read some parts, but I still think it's good, the writing is good, and the characters of the supporting characters are all unique, not brainless, and really enjoyable. I'm happy to support this novel.
The writing is smooth and graceful, and the writing is full of talent and talent. The flow of literary thoughts is like a rushing river; the flow of witty words is like the dazzling stars. The words are exquisitely carved, and the layout of the chapters is ingenious, which is amazing!
I like it very much. The writing style is very delicate. The rating should not be so low. I can only say that such a good article is not suitable for Tomato's environment of refreshing articles. What a pity...
I finally found gold in my shit [crying][crying] Liu Rumei's scenes were short. It's almost like a complete failure at the beginning. Although it wasn't done by the male protagonist, it's not bad at all. The writing feels above average, and the plot progresses well. Come on, bro.
I saw yesterday that I just added a bookshelf this afternoon. Why? Tomato's writing has a special characteristic for me, that is, as soon as I add it to my bookshelf, I find that I have been deceived and can no longer read it. Now I read Tomato articles before adding them to my bookshelf until at least forty or fifty chapters. I carefully screened this article and thought it was a good article. Of course, the story is very vulgar. The down-and-out daughter saves the troubled prince, and there is a two-way redemption. Although it is vulgar, it has a good point of view. It is not from the perspective of the male protagonist or It is the perspective of the heroine, more of a group character. The author has a strong writing skills, is not pretentious or procrastinating, and does not have that sweet and flamboyant feeling, but there is a kind of profound emotion of promising a thousand pieces of gold. Having read martial arts novels since I was a child, I vaguely saw a bit of Jianghu in this article. Also, I never follow trends when reading articles. I only believe in my own eyes. Come on, author!
Read it slowly, and when you see that the second and third children are dead, you don't need to read anymore. There is nothing to write about later. The writing is delicate, the concept is okay, and there are some loopholes in the plot, but it is still a small masterpiece. In terms of Tomato, the overall score is 7.5 Points, four stars.
I came from short plays. The quality of the short plays is quite good, the writing style of the novel is average, but the story is okay, overall it is not bad, and it is not particularly bad! It's a short story!
It's very interesting to watch and I like it very much. The emotions are described very delicately. I found it through a short video. It was really touching and very exciting in the early stage. If you don't have the patience before, you can watch the short drama together. It's really well written [Sending my heart]
It can be seen that the author is carefully polishing the sentences. Although there will be small flaws in the middle, the overall style is calm and steady. After 90 chapters, the male protagonist's poison has been cured, and his father and three brothers have also come. In the process of pushing the main plot, it is both strategic and daily, and the way the several people get along is very much like the Lao Zhu family, with a bit of gangsterism in them, haha. The author's plot writing is getting better and better, and I have received five-star reviews. I must finish this book well.
For those who have watched the show, the book is even more exciting, the writing is excellent, and a good book.
Overall it's pretty good, I think it should be rated eight or nine, but why is it not rated high? [Why] The writing is delicate, the pace is not fast, but the plot is eye-catching. It has the desolate feeling of the wild and wild sketches of the rivers and lakes and the strange and surging clouds in the court. But when I first read this article, I thought it was a female-channeled romance series, but after reading it later, I found that it was a male-channeled martial arts series. [What] weird? [Laughs] There are also some small flaws in the plot logic, and the writing style is a bit immature.
True evaluation: The language used in this article is very delicate. Although the story is not full of ups and downs, it has a unique charm. There are not many dialogues between the male and female protagonists in the previous article, but every sentence contains emotions... [Exploration] It's so beautiful.
It's nice to watch. Come on, the author, don't be affected by the bad comments [Love] [Love]
The concept is very special and the plot is touching. However, some descriptions are too detailed, but generally speaking, it is OK. The characterization of the characters is also relatively realistic and delicate, which well demonstrates the style characteristics of the characters. [Cool]
The quality of this book is quite good. The first few dozen chapters are more to my liking. I didn't kill the woman in the front, which is really uncomfortable, but the overall article is very good, and it feels like cold wine. However, the author updates a little every day, so I will give it four stars.
It comes from a short play. The short play is very detailed, so I came to read the novel. I usually read women's videos, but this is the first time I read a men's video in Tomato. It's a bit beyond my expectation. It's very delicately written. Although the pace is slow, it's still very interesting [shy]
Such a good book, the rating is too low, please give it a higher rating. The logic is self-consistent and the content is novel. I came here from the comic series next door to read it.
I came from comics, and to be honest, this score is very low, but I want to know the general plot of Liu Rumei, because I looked at the catalog and found that she has a lot of roles [what], is there any kind person who can tell me after watching it [OK]
I watched the short drama. The plot is very good and the writing is also very good. Can the AI short drama be updated soon?