Douluo: Wuhun Frozen Bird, Huo Yuhao Is My Brother

The emotions are very delicate, and the emotional pull between the brothers is well written, but sometimes the plot makes me feel like I have seen it before, and there are some things that I feel I didn't feel when I wrote it the second time... (I can't explain clearly) but the author is great~🥰 (Can I ask who is 0)👉🏻👈🏻🥺 (Is he the younger brother) The progress of the story is too slow, and there are many repetitive plots. It feels like if there are too many repetitions, you will lose the emotion while watching it.

The two brothers are very interesting, but the author forgets some things while writing (for example, Huo Yuhao's height is sometimes taller and sometimes shorter than the protagonist), and there are even repeated texts (not emphasized by repeated descriptions). Overall it's to my liking.

Good looking, with a bit of a knife. Well, it's a new book that you can keep up with, but please don't stop updating it, I beg you. Well, there is a bit of sadness in the knife, and there is thunder in the sadness. Oh, I'm not wrong, it should be abstract. So it's Klass who is awesome in orthopedics, Klass is awesome in orthopedics, wish you a long time.

It's not bad, but some parts need to be changed. It feels a bit like writing a rough plot and then using AI to continue it. For example, Huo Yuhao will be at level 16 and then at level 11. There is also Dai Huabin, who has more than 20 levels at one time and more than 30 levels at another time. There are many inconsistencies, but overall the plot is still good.

The writing is very good, and the mood is very artistic. I paired it with some more soothing pure music (Hua End), and it's really great. Press and share. It has the feel of a redemption text, which is nice to read.

Tasty! Just ask, is he the younger brother or younger brother?

The writing is very good, but the shortcoming is that the plot progresses slowly, which makes me anxious [laughs]

It's not bad. The relationship and interaction between the protagonists are very interesting and interesting, but some chapters are repetitive and confusing. If you don't look carefully, you won't be able to tell. If you look carefully, it will affect the reading experience and the reader will be discouraged. The author can probably take a look at it after typing and make some modifications. It's okay if the update is slow. Don't just give up if you don't update. Try not to have duplication, just confusing categories will be fine. Come on, the author~[Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting. Author, can you write a single male protagonist?

It's okay, but there are a lot of repetitions in some places.

It's beautiful, and each chapter has a lot of words. The author has done a lot of hard work

The characters were well developed in the early stages, but I haven't read the rest yet.

The writing style is very delicate, but despite the delicateness, there is inevitably procrastination. I can simplify it a bit when I have time. It's not bad.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

As I watched from the front, a line of clear tears silently flowed down my cheeks [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's so nice, I just love watching this kind of thing

Why didn't I read this book earlier? Ah, the author will update soon

It's okay. Is the AI ​​writing so slow? It's a bit buggy. If you are interested, you can take a look.

A very nice novel about Douluo Dalu

Not bad, pretty good (Quick, quack, quack [blowing kiss])

I don't know if it's up or down.

Super invincible and great.

I like it very much, very beautiful!

Incredibly beautiful, highly recommended

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author💪

A bit of plot conflict

He's just a pretty cool Klass, really.

I hope we can be together soon, not just for the last few chapters, and then don't stop updating! ! ! ! !

Okay, but the details are: one is a bear and one is a fox, who fights whom?

Can you write more battle scenes? Every time, they burn out halfway [crying][crying][crying]