
Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is Articuno, and Huo Yuhao Is My Brother
斗罗:武魂急冻鸟,霍雨浩是我哥
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 534k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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In booklists 20
Looking for Soul Land Fanfiction, Preferably Starting With The Unrivaled Tang Sect
Looking for The Unrivaled Tang Sect. Don't Recommend Douluo Dalu Unless You Want Me to Cuss You Out. I Don't Want to Read About Tang San
Douluo Dalu: No Fighting Tang San, Joins the Shrek Seven Devils, and Comes from a Great Family
Looking for Fanfiction Where the Protagonist Transmigrates to Douluo Dalu
A wonderful story about the male protagonist transmigrating into Douluo Dalu and joining Tang San.
Harem, Fanfiction, Male Protagonist
Please, please, I really want to read this! OTZ Preferably Genshin Impact, Detective Conan, Hunter x Hunter, Bungou Stray Dogs, or Harry Potter. No female lead! No female lead!! NO FEMALE LEAD!!! (Repeating it three times because it's important QVQ)
Any Stories Set in Soul Land II?
Looking for The Unrivaled Tang Sect and The Legend of the Dragon King Fanfiction, Bring Them On!
Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect or The Legend of the Dragon King, No Douluo Dalu 1
Douluo Dalu 1–4 Fanfiction, No Harem and No Bashing the Original Characters
Douluo Dalu Fanfiction
Does anyone have any Douluo fanfiction? Please send some my way.
Any Douluo Stories with Two Male Leads? Two Male Leads, Two Male Leads, Two Male Leads!
Douluo Dalu Fanfiction
Looking for stories similar to Douluo 2: The Difficulty of Winning Over Tang Wutong. Douluo Dalu fan fiction, but no harem. I'd like something that feels like it was written by an actual Douluo fan. Please don't bash Tang San.
Douluo Dalu with Two Male Leads
Any Fanfiction for The Unrivaled Tang Sect?
I'm looking for a story where Huo Yuhao's upperclassmen weren't hurt by evil soul masters and still went on to compete.
Any Soul Land II or III Stories?
Personally, I don't like Tang San, but I do quite like Tang Wulin and Huo Yuhao.
Two Male Leads, Soul Land, the Main Cast, and a Harem of Admirers. No Female Lead!
Pure Douluo, and He Only Takes Qian Renxue.
Douluo Stories With Two Male Leads
I'm looking for stories with two male leads set in Douluo Dalu. Any good recommendations? (✪▽✪)
Paired with Tang San in Douluo Dalu
Looking for a story where a guy transmigrates into Douluo Dalu and gets together with Tang San.
Douluo Dalu as Everyone's Crush
Reader comments 47
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The emotions are very delicate, and the emotional pull between the brothers is well written, but sometimes the plot makes me feel like I have seen it before, and there are some things that I feel I didn't feel when I wrote it the second time... (I can't explain clearly) but the author is great~🥰 (Can I ask who is 0)👉🏻👈🏻🥺 (Is he the younger brother) The progress of the story is too slow, and there are many repetitive plots. It feels like if there are too many repetitions, you will lose the emotion while watching it.
The two brothers are very interesting, but the author forgets some things while writing (for example, Huo Yuhao's height is sometimes taller than the protagonist and sometimes shorter than the protagonist), and there are even repeated texts (not emphasized by repeated descriptions). Overall it's to my taste.
Good looking, with a bit of a knife. Well, it's a new book that you can keep up with, but please don't stop updating it, I beg you. Well, there is a bit of sadness in the knife, and there is thunder in the sadness. Oh, I'm not wrong, it should be abstract. So it's Klass who is awesome in orthopedics, Klass is awesome in orthopedics, wish you a long time.
It's not bad, but some parts need to be changed. It feels a bit like writing a rough plot and then using AI to continue it. For example, Huo Yuhao will be at level 16 and then at level 11. There is also Dai Huabin, who has more than 20 levels at one time and more than 30 levels at another time. There are many inconsistencies, but overall the plot is still good.
The writing is very good, and the mood is very artistic. I paired it with some more soothing pure music (Hua End), and it's really great. Press and share. It has the feel of a redemption text, which is nice to read.
Tasty! Just ask, is he the younger brother or younger brother?
The writing is very good, but the shortcoming is that the plot progresses slowly, which makes me anxious 😄
It's not bad. The relationship and interaction between the protagonists are very interesting and interesting, but some chapters are repetitive and confusing. If you don't look carefully, you won't be able to tell. If you look carefully, it will affect the reading experience and the reader will be discouraged. The author can probably take a look at it after typing and make some modifications. It's okay to update slowly. Don't just give up if you don't update. Try not to have duplication, just confusing categories will be fine. Big cheers for the author~👍👍👍
The characters were well developed in the early stages, but I haven't read the rest yet.
The writing style is very delicate, but despite the delicateness, there is inevitably procrastination. I can simplify it a bit when I have time. It's not bad.