I Asked You to Open a Brothel, So Why Are You Leading the Girls in a Rebellion?

The idea is really good, but the system is too big, the so-called constraints are too small, the protagonist's desires are too ordinary, and the character cannot be established at all. Because the desires are ordinary, the early operations will be weird and unpleasant, which will easily be marked. Give it 8 stars.

It's pretty good. You can even watch it with your head in mind. I really like the setting of the knife in the middle. I thought the system was brainless at first, but later I found out that it actually has a big picture. It's not bad [Love] I hope it will always be of high quality.

I have read more than 70 chapters so far. I personally think this subject matter is very interesting and everyone is very smart. However, in terms of plot, there are similarities such as Sanniang falling twice and being in a latrine twice in the conference. The repetition is a bit confusing. I was confused while reading it. I wonder if I am too sleepy and confused. However, this book is really good so far, but some small details are not enough. I have only read part of it. I hope that it will get better and better in the future.

It's so imaginative and interesting. The male protagonist has very upright views. The female protagonists are also good, but they don't appear much. It's okay to watch it with your brain. You don't have to abandon your brain.

Very good. The characters are portrayed with flesh and blood. They are not artificial or bloody. This is rare. It looks good, but it's too slow.

First, I would like to give five-star encouragement to the book that competes with Shen He for wits and courage, and then I want to talk about the so-called "knife" - taking Wanwan Shuangyue as an example. Their death by the prince is of great significance to the plot. Without this plot, the protagonist would not have such a strong motive to take revenge on the prince for supporting Lao Jiu. But in this kind of book with an overall tone that favors a happy ending, the weight of the dead is very important. In addition to bringing strong emotional motivation to the author, it must also be accompanied by changes in behavioral patterns - for example, starting to cautiously overprotect the girls, or being more reluctant to let the girls take risks - these should be reflected in more detailed action choices, rather than just a macro desire to protect all subordinate girls. But in fact, apart from taking the initiative to change the environment, the protagonist has not actually grown more in terms of behavioral patterns. Overall, he still prefers to rely on his own abilities to act boldly. Only strengthening motivation, without behavioral psychological stress, will cause the "knife" plot to appear to be only functional. Later, other girls will still encounter dangers that the male protagonist is too late to save, but they will not die - which will make readers feel that the first two can also experience very serious things but not die - this is the tone of the whole book that constantly gives readers hints. If this sense of security is to be subverted, it must be supplemented by major changes or growth of the protagonist. This impact involves all aspects and requires more consideration. Then let's talk about the mother-in-law. She was marginalized a bit after the death of her daughter. It also seems that the death of her daughter was just a functional plot to bring her home. There was even a high-ranking replacement like Lin Miaoyin, which was too much of a blow to a golden legendary talent. Her ability itself can be more integrated into the plot (although she may face more confrontations with Shen He), and for the protagonist who has no father or mother, she is one of the few elder characters, and she still deserves more presence. I have said so much because I quite like the tone of this book. When I saw some related discussions in the comment area, I wanted to share my thoughts. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write works that meet my expectations! (I also hope to have the opportunity to see the deleted parts [laughing])

Not bad, except for a few typos, everything else is pretty good. I hope it will last longer and not end badly.

Chapter 24: Bai Bai also talked to the NPC?

Give yourself a five-star encouragement! The first part may not be rigorous because I started the book too casually at the time. I will make some serious adjustments when I have time. Please believe me in the following content, you will not be disappointed! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Shennong Tasted Herbs, rated so that everyone can see it and don't mind it, listened to the book for 4 hours, and wrote an AI article with a thimble in one ear,