Laolan**

The plot development is very good and I like it very much, and the writing is good, the characters are vivid and vivid, the number of words in each part is quite large, and the updates are very frequent. If you like to work hard, you can check it out!

After reading for a few days, I know what the problem is. In this novel, many characters are written in Xiaolan's tone, except Xiaohei, who fits Danzai's character very well, but there is no obvious difference between the two characters Xiaohuang and Xiaobai. However, it is best for different people in the novel to have different personalities. Overall, this book is very delicately written, well written, and has potential.

Awesome Klass, I would like to ask if I can draw pictures for the plot (can be deleted if it touches mine🌸💐🌷🌹✨🎁🎊🎉🌸

The content is clear and organized, and the characters are lifelike. Those who like Lao Lan can take a look.

I have only read the first few, but they are very well written and read, and I highly recommend them [laughs]