HP: How Can Yao Die's Shattered Soul Be Rescued?

Oh my gosh! This Snape fanfic is really amazing. I read it in one sitting and couldn't stop at all. I must write it down for my sisters! Let's talk about the heroine Alida first, a medicine girl from the Nosbia family. She has a miserable life experience, but she has a great sense of humor! On the surface, he was a quirky, soft and cute little girl. When Snape was around, he was extremely well-behaved, but when he turned around, he was madly criticizing the beauty and killing her decisively. She is really "soft for one person and sharp for another", and she is not the kind of person who talks about being strong, but the kind who can really shoulder the burden of things with Snape. I slapped my thigh when I saw her. Snape's character is even more reassuring and not OOC at all. There are a lot of words when he should be mean, and the formula of being hard-spoken and soft-hearted is original, but the author understands it very well. Through the interaction between Alida and him, he pries open the shell of this old bat little by little, so that he finally has the right to be loved and protected without losing his personality. The husband-protector scenes were one after another, and the clumsy and affectionate confessions made my eyes heat up. The proportion of sweetness and abuse was perfectly mastered. The most exciting thing is that there is no misunderstanding about the two-way redemption. Both protagonists have mouths, sisters! To put it bluntly, there is no sad plot of bloody fights. Everyone redeems HE. All the regrets in the original book that made me swallow the knife for many years have been sewn back in this book. The man who had walked alone in the darkness for his whole life finally had a ray of sunshine that belonged only to him in this life. Really, highly recommended. The reading experience is so smooth that I accidentally turned to the end. Snape fans are really at a loss if they don't read this!

The author uses the medicine girl of the Northbian family as a guide to create a strong heroine who is "soft for one person and sharp for another". She is not only the sunshine that illuminates Snape's gloomy life, but also a strong person who can stand side by side with him in the wind and rain. The story has no OOC characters. While respecting Snape's forbearing background, it also gives him the right to be loved and protected. The plot of sweetness and abuse is delicate and moving, and the scenes of the guardian's name and clumsy confessions are heart-wrenching. It makes up for all the regrets of the original work with its firm HE that redeems all members, allowing the man who has walked alone in the darkness his whole life to finally have a warm home of his own. It is a healing work not to be missed by Snape fans.

It was so beautiful, I watched it all afternoon. The author's writing style is really good, giving me the feeling that even the heaviest fate can find an outlet in love and understanding. This may be what fan creation means

The characters are not OOC. Snape's meanness, hard-tongued and soft-hearted character is still the familiar one. At the same time, through his interaction with Alida, his unknown side is slowly revealed, and his image becomes fuller. The original heroine Alida has a brilliant setting, she is capable and thoughtful, and the plot revolves around the bond between the two, interweaving family lines and daily life at Hogwarts. The logic is smooth and there is no messy plot. The more I watch it, the more I like it.

Emotions are handled very delicately, the heroine and Si Si really redeem each other [I almost cried] The pace is very fast, the plot logic is very good, there is a lot of foreshadowing in the front [Thinking] There is a sense of follow-up in the back, and you can suddenly realize it after you feel it It's sweet on the surface, but it looks like broken glass when you look at it later [I'm about to cry] The two poor little guys are clinging to each other.

The writing is very good, the writing style is delicate, and the sense of substitution is very strong!

It is a very, very personal and very delicate article. The author has an excellent grasp of the male protagonist's emotions. I scratched my head and wished I could transform into a head-buttoning team (no). There are glass shards throughout the text, but the details are very sweet. Those who love this are in luck [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Good news for those who like to read redemption stories. The two protagonists in this article both have very miserable life experiences, the beautiful and the strong are miserable. Belonging is a two-way salvation. Both of them are very talkative, there is no misunderstanding, they are a very sweet couple. The author's writing style is also very good and the description is very detailed. That is to say, the language function is lacking and it just looks good.

The plot is very good! The sense of immersion is very strong!

It's super good-looking. It's just that the two characters are so cool. The heroine is so cute. [Adoration] [Adoration] The plot is fast-paced and not laggy at all. It's very interesting to read in Shuhuang. I will love to read more.

Read it in one sitting, very exciting!

I read it in one go and the plot was really enjoyable!

The pulling feeling is really strong! The sense of immersion is very strong!

The world view integrates nature, and magic and emotion are intertwined without being obtrusive.

It's very well written and the plot is great!

The setting of two powerful people can bear the storm together and redeem each other. The happy ending of the two people is really good!

It perfectly fulfilled my wish! Snape's life is written in a gentle and powerful way, with two-way healing and redemption for everyone. The HE ending is so comfortable, and the writing is good, so it's worth it!

The male and female protagonists are very, very pure in love. From the beginning to the end, they choose each other firmly without any hesitation. They have no resistance to this kind of feeling, which makes them explode. This kind of whole-hearted trust is really a rare feeling, especially in the setting of two powerful people, it is even more rare to have no reservations about each other.

Alida's words "My soul is only born for you" directly touched the tears, and the pure love party was ecstatic

The details are well laid out, the foreshadowing is cleverly recycled, and the logical closed loop is complete!

The writing is vivid and the scenes and characters are picturesque!

The plot has a tight rhythm, the emotions are well drawn, and the reading experience is good.

I have read a lot of fanfics recently, and I think this one is the best in terms of plot rhythm. The timeline and story lines are all well arranged.

It's a treasure trove in the fanfiction. It's moderately exciting in the early stage, but it's crazy sweet in the later stage!

The contrast between the characters is full, and the switch between the cute girl and the strong one is very exciting!

The writing is delicate, the portrayal of the characters' psychology is accurate, and the sense of substitution is strong!

The author's writing is smooth and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. It is worth appreciating.

The heroine is also very domineering when protecting her husband. She is a bit crazy sometimes, but she is really good, affectionate and dedicated!

The writing is gentle and powerful, and healing and story tension coexist!

The characters are vivid, the plot is gripping, and the story is heartwarming! Recommend