Tenmaku: Starting with a Critical Review of the Third Generation, the Ninja World Is All Stupid

It's okay. I like this kind of article divided into multiple parallel world timelines. It's much better than the kind of "Haxi Hot Mom" and "Madala" who hold a live broadcast room [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss] Later on, the hydrology started. I don't know if it's because of the low rating. It's a pity. I shouldn't have written the footing chapter.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a compact Naruto live-streaming novel. The characters are also very online and interlocking, and there won't be any surprises like other live-streaming novels. The key points of other live-streaming novels: conspiracy theories, jokes, random ramblings, lack of character perception, fast plot...

It's okay. Except for the first dozen or so chapters, which are a bit watery, it's very interesting to watch from the beginning of the plot. It's not as funny as other review articles. It's funny, passionate, and sensational. It's not bad. I feel that if it continues, it will get a high score of 9.5. Hmm, I forgot that it was too watery at the beginning, I insist on writing 9 points, it should be there, It also started to get confusing later on, it was quite boring, and some of the information written by the author was wrong. I'll give it an 8:

It's very interesting and worth watching. Fortunately, the time and space are set at only a few points in time, rather than at all points in time, so that it makes people feel confused. Hope to keep holding on I don't know if part of the plot is intentional or true. Sarutobi didn't give in when Hinata made the decision. Hinata made the decision first, and other people's characters are not people who would threaten or hint at others. Can you stop comparing combat power and talk about super shadows, stacking methods or stacking boxes, one level is greater than the other, one person can split the moon, and another person who is more powerful than him can also split the moon?

It's great. There are a lot of AIs in Naruto Tenmaku at present, and the quality is hard to describe. This is a rare good work. I hope it doesn't become a eunuch.

The rhythm is very good and not confusing. The audience's shock reaction after watching the movie was well described, and there was no one person saying a single word in the pleasant description, and a lot of verbal comments were accumulated. The details that changed after everyone watched were reasonable. If you keep this rhythm, it will be a masterpiece.

There is no OOC, let the characters make those embarrassing remarks, there are no spoof videos that you think are interesting, there are not too many conspiracy theories, there is no "Ding, congratulations to the host for binding the ninja world live broadcast system, now starting to invite the entire ninja world to join the live broadcast, who are pulling people from the Pure Land, and people who are pulling the moon." It's really hard to find an inventory article without these.

It's great, surpassing most Naruto fans. It is not the kind of short video show that is as step-by-step as an assembly line and like an anime, but is more in line with the content of Naruto short videos.

The review is excellent. There is no main character, no messy chat room where everyone is messing around together, and the timeline is a bit messy and there are a lot of things to read. There are no major flaws. The analysis of the inventory content is written very rationally and logically, without overly exaggerating or criticizing the characters, making it quite relaxing and comfortable to watch.

More than 80% of Naruto fandoms have no protagonist, or for those of you who are watching TikTok, one star is missing because I don't like to see wry smiles. As a bookworm of more than ten years, I really get stressed when I see wry smiles. After Sarutobi smiled wryly, Jiraiya smiled wryly, and Jiraiya finished smiling wryly, Kakashi smiled wryly [laughs] Overall, it's a novel that can pass the time.

Good book. There aren't a lot of bad memes, and the storyline is pretty good. Everyone's reactions are in line with expectations, and there's no particular criticism of anyone. Well, some content may trigger some people's faults. For example, it's about the stinky feet of female ninjas. So far, there's only one joke. It is a good article among live broadcast articles.

From the point of view of the spoilers, the author has arranged it well. What is commendable is that the characters are restored to a relatively high degree and there are no outrageous OOCs. It is more optimized than the previous book. It is considered to be the main world of Konoha 60 at the beginning of the comic, and other eras are divided into sub-worlds. From the current point of view, it may be that the rhythm needs to be further optimized to balance the plot between the world deduction and the sky spoiler. And I'm curious if there will be plots from Boruto in the future. The overall evaluation is good, and it is worth reading among the recent Naruto fanfics. (Herbaceous grass>Food and grass>Water grass>Poisonous weed)

It's really super good-looking. The most important thing is that the reactions of each character are very consistent with the original work. They are more like a group of real people, rather than like a group of netizens watching the conversation. The plot design is also very well done and very attractive.

The writing style is really good. I am a little dazzled after reading each period. Also, I hate people and things in the wood industry. In my opinion, most of them are CS, but the author's writing is very good. It is worth recommending. I'd better read my cool articles. Kill them all [laughing and crying]

It's unexpectedly good-looking. The serious review of the main plot is interspersed with various funny reviews. It neither goes from dark to dark nor mindless fun. It seems relaxed and relaxed, making it easy and enjoyable to watch. It's excellent!

It's pretty good. I usually give negative reviews to people who buy the third generation. This book writes about the advantages and disadvantages of the third generation, focusing on explaining the background at the time and describing the helplessness at the time. The most important thing is that it is not like those disgusting novels where it is written that Naruto drank expired milk because he spent all the relief money on paint. . .

Os: I really want to see the author write about Bentetsu's Sunday ideal, which is similar to Uchiha Madara's: it makes all mankind dream, but the dream becomes reality. Then I particularly want to read the sentence "If the power and wealth of the strong can cover up their crimes, who can judge them? If the weak need to survive at any cost, who can guarantee it for them? If even the most pure and good souls make mistakes, who can comfort them? If... The strong supports the weak, it is indeed the foundation of paradise. Who will leave them to mourn in the suffering world..." Then after posting it, I want to see the reaction of your ninja audience! Yes, yes

It looks good so far. It is written based on the timeline before the Chunin Exams, and then is heavily interspersed with other timelines. Although most of the perspectives are before the Chunin Exams, the stories in other timelines that were changed after hearing the future revelations only changed the beginning, and only some places specifically described the subsequent impact. It is understandable that the timeline is laid out too much and takes up the number of words, but it affects part of the perception, so I will deduct one star. There are a lot of high-profile moments. Although it is based on the part about Emperor Kai vs. Madara, the description length is quite satisfactory. The feedback from the audience does not seem to be as exciting as expected. It is also because Kai's strength was revealed in advance, but it is also another regrettable point. The rest of the article is a relatively fair and objective evaluation, which is unfailingly popular among passers-by.

Yes, it's very exciting. The most anticipated thing about Naruto fandom is to save the regret. This not only saves the regret, but also gives a shocking feeling. Although there is no logic to things like the sky curtain, it is fun to watch. Finally, update soon!

I originally wanted to give a negative review because the traces of AI in the first few chapters were too obvious, but when I read the later chapters, I felt that it must be the most satisfying Naruto Tenmaku manga I've seen recently. There are basically no conspiracy theories and magic changes, and the writing style is relatively serious. Of course, this may vary from person to person. Some people just like magic changes. In addition, I personally think that the most important thing about a canopy story is the content of the canopy and the audience's reaction, especially the discussion about watching the movie. I think this book is very good.

At least the plot of the sky screen corresponds to the characters' reactions, and there are no surprises. What is commendable is that there is a foot odor ranking list, which can effectively eliminate some siege fairies and make the environment clear.

Yes, but I think we can add some original parallel worlds. It's too monotonous to keep looking at the original ones. For example, we can add the parallel worlds of Wandering and Shadow from mobile games, or write our own fake future or something.

It's pretty good, it's quite refreshing to watch. It's just that the foot odor aspect is a bit embarrassing. You can take stock of some interesting things, such as who has been in office the longest. Or take stock of whose movie has the best looks in each village. It's better than taking stock of smelly feet, at least it's not a social death. [Laughing]

In fact, it's quite enjoyable when I'm reading it, but as I follow up, I'll find that the amount of content in each chapter is not much, and maybe there are too many parallel time points. I understand the author's desire to make fun of it, but you can still read it once every two or three days, which will make you feel a lot better; In addition, he is indeed more diligent and has a hard-working personality, which deserves a five-star [blowing kiss]

Characters don't have OOC, characters don't have OOC, characters don't have OOC. There is no OOC so far, it is very strong. When reading fan fiction, what I like to see is the interaction and new interpretation of the original characters in different scenes and plots. [No OOC] It is very important to maintain the original character and dialogue deduction! The plot is a classic movie, I like this recommendation. Hope it doesn't collapse later.

It's not easy. Naruto Tenmaku is one of the best works in Tomato with good results. Recommended, but everyone has their own ambitions or differences. Although this book is a bit confusing, it is still considered excellent on Tomato. [Like][Like][Like]

Interesting, very interesting. I just happened to see the section "Who has the smelliest feet". It made me laugh so hard. Hahaha, especially Tsunade's comment. At the end, Danzo sneered in his heart: The guy with smelly feet deserves to be the Fifth Hokage? He laughed so hard.

The pacing is pretty good among Naruto Tenmaku stories, and it's quite comfortable to watch. I hope there will be more

This novel has reached the pinnacle of the text. It is well written and very logical. The editing is indeed editing, rather than taking out fragments of the original work to count the words like other novels. Other novels are detached editing and directly play the original content without editing at all. And this novel is real, all useful things, no parallel imports

It can be read as a novel to relieve boredom, whether it is handwritten or AI, it is not that bad at the moment. Some parts are indeed uncomfortable to read, but it is not very long and only two or three chapters can be switched quickly. Anyway, I feel that it is better than similar reviews, which are too slow. As for personal emotions, I can only say that the inventory type cannot be impersonal, just don't be too ridiculous.