My Phone Connects to All Worlds, and the Otherworldly Beauties Are Very Welcoming

It's a pornographic type, and I drive it so much that I can check it out with the moderator. At present, I still like the structure of more than 100 chapters, but the combat power can be gradually improved. The main story is a bit slow. I hope the author can work hard and look forward to updates. There are few authors who update four times a day, but it still has great potential.

They all came to see it, I couldn't eat it alone. I couldn't stand the realistic plot of Pig's Foot summoning a girl. The character of Pig's Foot is hard to describe. They all came to see it. It's so beautiful 🙂

The author's writing is quite good. I read the revised version. I don't know what it looked like before the revision. Anyway, it's pretty good now. That is, so far, the protagonist has cultivated to the 6th level of Qi Refining. It feels like there is no real sense. It is no different from ordinary people. It seems that he has not cultivated at all, but just approved a piece of skin.

I think the characterizations are quite good, each has their own personality, and there are also some descriptions from a female perspective. If you read a novel on Tomato, you cannot read the rating. The ones with a score of 5 to 9 are all good to watch, but I only watch the ones on the list occasionally. But it won't last long.

This book has several problems, both good and bad. First, the article has a certain amount of psychological description of the characters, which is more than the average mindless cool article. This is a matter of opinion. I quite like a certain amount of psychological description. Second, it is a joke that the protagonist has the clear stupidity of a college student. He also has good and bad qualities. It is true that Shuangwen must be decisive in killing, but it can't just be killing. As for the protagonist, I feel that he is a bit sheepish and not wolf enough. He will be a bit out of place for a Tomato platform that likes brainless and fast-paced articles. I think the author should pay attention. Third, the overall pacing is good, but it still feels lacking. I haven't looked too far back to give a rough review. For example, after the protagonist travels to another world, he has clear mission goals, such as cultivation requirements and survival time requirements. But the real world feels like there is no main line. I don't know what "tasks" or "goals" there are in the real world. Of course, I have read more than 30 chapters now, so maybe the author has not yet laid out the world view. Finally, I think the descriptive coherence of the author's writing style is very good. I don't think some authors have serious lags. At least one thing can be described clearly and then smoothly connected to the next thing. I think Tomato can do this. Like this book, the overall pacing is not fast, and it may not score high on the tomato scale, but it doesn't matter. Writing books is still a minority as the main job, and I quite like it. Come on, author.

The awesome Liu Bei, Dai Qun and Lily

Give it four points. Give it five points to avoid being proud of yourself.

After reading more than ten chapters, I decided to follow the book. There are currently no brainless villains around the protagonist, and he is strong and surrounded by good people. Finally, it is not a cliché of pretending to be a slap in the face 😄

Not bad. Although the front is not good. I read the rest of it hard. True emperor! I'm watching now that I've gained weight.

The emotional scenes are very rich, and it feels like they are all flesh-and-blood people. There are currently no poisonous points or flaws.