[The heroine is adored by everyone without realizing it + not a strong heroine + multiple male leads + all male leads are devoted to her + plenty of rivalry among them]
Qin Junzhi was frail and often ill from childhood, and grew up sheltered and pampered.
When her best friend invited her to try a new romance game, it opened the door to a whole new world
Princess Duanyang had grown up in Jiangnan with her father, the prince, but every year countless rare treasures were sent to her from the capital.
When she came of age, she was summoned back to the capital for the Empress Dowager’s birthday banquet.
The aloof prime minister, the dashing young heir, her gentle and considerate fiancé, and the flamboyant young lord of the Miao borderlands...
Why were they looking at her so frighteningly?
The usually aloof prime minister grabbed Princess Duanyang by the wrist and knelt before her with reverence, while she stared at him in terror.
The young heir, who was disliked by everyone, offered the princess a lock of his hair and begged her to bully him in return.
Her gentle and considerate fiancé only ever wiped her hands attentively after she came home and made sure every aspect of her life was perfectly taken care of.
The young lord of the Miao borderlands loved to bare his chest and tempt the young princess’s gaze with his bells.
When the uncle who loved her most asked whom she liked best,
Princess Duanyang hurriedly waved her hands in fright. She was face-blind! She just wanted to go home!
The line of men behind her kept smiling, but in reality they were so jealous they gritted their back teeth.
If the mountain won’t come to us, then we’ll go to the mountain
The male leads appear harmonious on the surface, but undercurrents keep churning beneath!
[In ancient times, girls came of age at fifteen. In this story, they come of age at eighteen, and all the leads are adults.]
The relationship line is very fast, most of the male protagonists fall in love at first sight, and the female protagonists also accept it well. It should be that allin, the male protagonist, has not run away. The male protagonist himself does not have much of a highlight (currently). The protagonists also talk a lot when they have misunderstandings. The heroine's baby has a calm personality, not a lively little sunshine. If you don't know that the heroine has traveled through time, it would be difficult to see the difference between the heroine and ancient people. The plot is quite mind-numbing, with interlocking links, including house fights and detective cases. Each character has his or her own interests, and the whole story does not revolve around the love between the male and female protagonists. Points of interest: There are palace fights, house fights, female rivalries, and reversals. At present, there should also be secondary CPs, and some characters have bigger slots.
I feel like there is a problem with the pacing or something. The character of the female protagonist is not interesting at all. She is not moved when she meets the male protagonist. There is also a face-blind mode and a number on her head. There are too many elements. With so many elements, it does not even show the basic heartbeat.
Looking at it so far, some parts are a bit illogical. If there are some problems with careful reading and understanding, I feel that the female protagonist should be the emperor in the end. And why does the female protagonist think that the numbers above the male protagonists are irritability levels? I don't understand it a little bit…
It's really hard to write. Please practice again.
The emotional line is so awkwardly written, the heroine is like a puppet, her psychological activities are not as much as others, and the author is more comfortable writing supporting characters than the heroine.