Pokémon: the Biography of Yunxiu

So far it looks okay. They said there are too many elves talking, but I think this kind of plot is better. Increased the relationship between the protagonist and the elves. Rather than a tool. There is also the Gongsha Naido they are talking about. If you read a few more chapters, you will know that he evolved into Eluredo. But I really can't hold back that big rhizome of Gardevoir. [Like] No, at first I thought the protagonist had such a good relationship with Izumi, why would he have a harem? It was the dull protagonist Izumi who suggested it, and it was the male protagonist who was in trouble and was rescued by other female protagonists, and got Izumi's consent. In the end, an elf gave me a hint to the male protagonist, asking him to take the initiative to find a female role, and also found some reasons to comfort himself [covering his face]. This does not take Izumi seriously at all, and makes excuses by saying that she is weak and the male protagonist is strong [Like]

In terms of plot, the character design is pretty good, but I came here to see Gardevoir, so I can only stop here.

A very good book, with rigorous logic and comfortable plot. The most important thing is the brilliant writing. The wording is just right. I really like the author's literary talent. This is the first time I give five stars, and it may be the last time. I hope the author will update it well. As my role model, I also hope to have more exchanges and reference with you [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] @ Gray Gray Fish

New author, readers please give me some advice! There is no male Gardevoir, but Aluredo. As long as the heroine in this article is a heroine, it will be clearly written below the paragraph review. Training the heroine is to train the protagonist himself. Male and female Pokémon are not separated. If you can't accept it, don't read this book. Regarding the issue of blunt Pokémon dialogue in the early stage, the author has made corrections in subsequent chapters of this article after receiving feedback. Long dialogues have been reduced and descriptions of movements and expressions have been increased. If I did not persist in the previous chapters, the author would like to apologize here. Don't be a human being, just love Pokémon, not a love affair across races; don't be a wife, just respect the role of a mother [OK]

So can you give Koga Ninja an exclusive skill? Doesn't Koga Ninja have an ice attribute skill? Let Koga Ninja rub two ice blades with his hands and use them for two days. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [OK]

It's okay, I hope it doesn't stop

It looks pretty good, and it's a fine piece of writing.

Give me a good review. It's also the first book written by Ha Ji. The quality is quite good. Come on [smile]

High-quality Pokémon novels [laughs]

It's pretty good. It's a rare Pokémon article, and it's already very good, but it feels a bit boring at the end.

Can we add a female protagonist, Kona?

The front is good, but there is one drawback. When Izumi comes. The protagonist only has one elf.

Looks good, I hope you stick with it

Good looking. Cheers, author.

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Why did it stop updating? Is there too much foreshadowing? Exploded?

This is the first time I see a heroine who is Izumi.

Give the author a big boost and keep writing

It's relatively good among Pokémon novels.

Come on, author, at least I think you deserve five stars so far.

It's okay and I can watch it, thank you to the author😊😊😊

This book definitely has potential. Whether it's the emotional line or the bond with Pokémon, it makes my heart throb.

It's pretty good. When you encounter good fan fiction, you must support it.

Finally, there is a Pokémon novel with a heroine who is a villain. Will the author add Huoyan later?

Not bad, it's pretty good-looking. I don't know why the score is so low [what]

Needs improvement, but not bad

The strength of the elves increased too quickly

Why not today?

Pretty good Pokémon fanfic

Very good keep up the good work