After Kuaipuan's Appearance Explodes

When I first read the title of this article, I thought it was a good-looking article. Then I looked at it and found that it was. Then I read the introduction, and it was very similar to the introduction of the article I read before. Then, I read the first plot, and I felt that it was quite similar to the plot of that article, but the plot was longer, but the writing style was a little inferior, but the character setting of the protagonist was different, and then the second one, the content was not like the others, and the way of being a heartthrob was different, because the article was written a long time ago, because I read it A while ago, I found that it was discontinued. I stopped reading it halfway through, but it's almost finished. I can only say that each has its own merit, and the second story is better than the first. I still prefer the second story written by the author, because it attracts me more. Maybe it's because the first world is a bit cowardly, and because I'm not smart, maybe I hate purity, and the protagonist in this world doesn't have that feeling. I also like this theme better. I didn't realize much about the comments made in the comment section when I was reading the article, because I read them quickly, and I only read some key points. The protagonist is sometimes too stupid, so I don't care too much. The main reason is that I just prefer this setting and this type of heartthrob who is getting better and better in appearance. I remember that the reason why the protagonist is too heavy is that the author seems to have written that it is because his IQ is a bit low, um, he is mentally retarded. Then why does he always invite people to kidnap and be unlucky? The reason is because his luck value is too low, so he is more susceptible to... Dangerous injuries, I remember it was all written about, so it's normal to feel aggrieved. You can't let a person with low luck value die and don't have an IQ to resist, so the protagonist does some stupid operations, and later uses her beauty to confuse people, and then kills his father. I think this is a very smart thing done by a mentally retarded person.

It's really beautiful! Those of you who have clicked in, don't leave just because the author's punctuation is weird (I was almost persuaded to quit by this, but I endured and read a few chapters, and it didn't matter once I got used to it), the plot is very interesting!

The good-looking protagonist is not a boss, but a slowly growing type, and it is a bit realistic. The protagonist only has improved appearance, not a heartthrob! Moreover, the protagonist in the first world has no power and power, and was just an ordinary person before entering the world, so there will be some people who want to force the protagonist, and they will be kidnapped and other very real problems that the protagonist cannot solve, but the protagonist will slowly grow up and work hard to learn and improve his abilities in order to protect himself. The changes in personality are also well written and very contagious. The ability is also gradually improving. It is not the type of getting stronger quickly. It is not a cool article. People who like this kind of growth type and more realistic can read it. The character's personality is not monotonous and boring, but will change with the experience. Other characters are also vividly created. It is recommended that people who like to read heartthrobs, cool articles, and have a strong sense of empathy should not read [Face Covering]. Don't make repeated references to other books in this book (you can say it elsewhere). This behavior is offensive to most authors [blowing kisses]. Then the author cheers [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Dear babies, I saw a lot of people in the comment area saying that my book was plagiarized. It was not plagiarized. It was all written by myself. The results will be different if the content is different, and the same thing will be written differently by different authors. Interested babies can continue reading to see my story.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I really like this topic, but there are very few authors who write well. Finally, I met another one. I would like to express my gratitude to you, the author! 🥰🥰🥰

I finally understand why there are so few comments in the last dozen or so chapters of the first world. Did someone complain about the protagonist and then go back and delete it after seeing it [laughs][laughs], yes, I am one of them [laughs][laughs]

The author's writing has improved so fast. It has become logical since the second world. It's so interesting that I love reading it. Don't stop updating it like the last novel I followed that had a more beautiful appearance! ! !

The author is really getting better and better as he writes. The first world is average, but the writing style of the second world has really made a qualitative leap. I hope the author can continue to create more and better small worlds [Sending Hearts]

The author has an interesting soul, the articles are humorous and the characters are vivid

Author, please continue writing. I really like this heartthrob novel you wrote. In the last story, the middle part didn't feel like a heartthrob at first and I almost quit, but after listening to the rest, I understood. The protagonist's first world. The special issue on the state of mind. The change of personality is very well written. This is the right way. Becoming indifferent is something that needs to be experienced. It is very well written [shy][shy][shy]

It's a bit sparse. I haven't found any poisonous points yet. There's still a lot of room for improvement. I'll give it a four-star rating first and I'll take a look later.

It's okay. When I first read it, I could tell that the author was a novice, and many of the words expressed in the plot were not smooth. The further you read, the more you can feel the progress, which is great. The various supporting characters in the small world of the plot have distinct and vivid personalities, showing the complex multi-faceted nature of human nature. It is very interesting. I can also see the protagonist's growth step by step. It is very fulfilling. I am catching up on the update. I hope the author will not finish it.

It's quite good-looking. It's not a brainless novel, but the characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. It's logical based on the original plot setting, and it also has a small charm of being beautiful and charming. There are some problems with punctuation, but it doesn't affect reading very much. Thank you to the author! [Shy]

It's really well written, I really enjoyed reading it. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Come on, kid, the first world is a bit too bland and the second one is much better [blowing kiss] It can actually be seen that the author kind of writes like the protagonist going through hardships and then growing up, but now because there are not so many chapters in the update (maybe also because of the writing), it seems like he is abusing the protagonist. From a pertinent perspective, Ayan is a growth potential stock. I have read another book with a plot that actually has a lot of differences, but since it is the same genre, the differences don't seem that big. Believe me, author, as long as you keep writing for a longer time and make progress gradually, there will be great scholars who can argue for you. Author Baobao The advantage of a heartthrob is that he is surrounded by stars and allows others to give everything for him. It is best to understand his feelings better; he is not superstitious about love, but still enjoys the flow of emotions. In fact, Ayan's way of handling the emotions of people who are obsessed with him is not very good. He can write a more detailed description of how others can give a "reward" accordingly. Another point is that the original male and female protagonists in the article have too little sense of existence. A proper sense of interaction can be added to enhance the charm of the protagonist. The main line outline is also a bit unclear, and there is no clear world scope. The author Bao Baobao [sending heart] (if the protagonist meets the heroine in the first world, the original world outline will come out. Is the sister in the second world the heroine?) You can add to the title that the protagonist is a growth type, which will make people easier to accept. I see that the author is also trying, trying hard to break through himself and make the protagonist perform well in the article. The author should work hard slowly. Writing novels is not about making like-minded friends and improving one's own vision (of course, the author can follow his own pace)

Super pretty [blowing kiss] Actually, you don't have to worry about small details, as long as they look good.

It's good to watch. The male protagonist will slowly learn to use his power to take revenge. This is very good. The biggest fear is that he will be blamed.

So far it looks pretty good, I hope it's no cp

Please update the teacher more, it's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Not bad, not bad, good, very nice [Learned]

This book is very good, and the books I have read before are also good. I hope the author can add more chapters [Sending my heart]

Curious about the follow-up development

Good looking, not fast paced

Super super super pretty

Okay, okay, not bad

Looks good, good luck

It's very pretty. [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration]

Okay, but not crazy enough

Looks good, looks good

It looks good. Please write it quickly.