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The writing is good. I think it would be better to remove the harem label. It is too easy to be blocked. Leave one to become a hundred. The rest of the emotional scenes are obviously the main palace, and other ambiguous ones are fine. But now the heroine should be the senior sister. In this time-travelling novel, the plot is basically concentrated in the main world, and the object world is mainly used as a golden finger, with less plot. The current combat power is normal, the logic is normal, no poison points, and can be eaten.

The look and feel is okay, it's the same as the current flow, but the plot is an ancient cultivation style, and some sentences are a bit obscure to read, but I really admire the author. The protagonist is basically a woman, and it is usually unfolded from her perspective, but the label is really bold, Lily Harem 200,000 words must die, there is obviously no such trend, why add this label I can't read some of them anymore. In many cases, the plot is just for the sake of the plot. The viewing experience is slightly poor. What should I do if the protagonist feels like a waste? I should obviously avoid writing this, as it will make the viewing experience poor. The front part is all about the protagonist's gradual process. There is too much writing and it seems very watery. In some places, it feels like it has been polished by AI, giving it a human-machine feel.

I personally feel that this book has great potential [Blow Kiss]. After reading the author's previous books, I can be considered an experienced author of Bianwen. There is nothing wrong with this book in Bianbaili. I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, so you can read it with confidence. The two main characters currently appearing are Ji Wanqing, a cold senior sister who is turned over by the protagonist, and Ren Wumian, an Edo robber with a thousand faces. The characters are all okay, and the author has provided pictures for several female characters who have appeared. Judging from the plot, there should be a lot of scenes behind them, and they should all be considered potential heroines [Thinking] It would be quite good if other Suyus also become female in the later stage, such as the group narcissus + becoming a hundred 😎, but there are too few scenes of other Suyus in the same costume 😔 Isn't that what the pseudo-commons and fan abbreviations in the introduction mean? It feels very interesting, and it would be a pity if it were, and I feel that this book is a bit slow to gain popularity, but other than this, everything else is pretty good, I look forward to the follow-up plot [Eating Melon]

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, there is almost no description of women's clothing and female bodies, and there is zero description of female abortion. Gao Wuwen is set in the old Shanghai of the Republic of China. It has a very strange setting. The heroine's cheats are different versions of herself in parallel worlds, including the ability to set various world views. The character of the second female lead is good, lovable, and the shy royal sister is gentle and reliable. Gee, I can only say that the heroine has no emotional intelligence, and indeed the emotional line is a bit slow, but the main theme of this book is to increase strength. I look forward to more interactions and emotional line descriptions in the subsequent plots, otherwise it will be too boring ~ a writing worth collecting.

The same flow itself is equivalent to acquiring the power system of other worlds in one's own world, which is equivalent to an alternative system. However, in the context of the Qing Dynasty, the power system of the main world is domestic ancient martial arts and foreign potions and machinery, and the protagonist, as a game-breaker, brings third-party variables that are different from the contemporary world. The collision with the power system of his own different worlds blooms into new effects. In addition, the author's own writing fluency is good, and the protagonist's rapid growth is not overwhelming. The only drawback is that 2000 words a day is too few [face covering]

Looks good, I like it better

Not bad, but was put off by the title of the book

Not bad, suitable for making grain and grass. Although the quantity is a bit small, the taste is okay.

It's really good. If you say you want to cut the chicken, then cut the chicken.

It's great. It's great to read. I'm reading it for a few days. I'm reading more than ten chapters.

It's not like it's just like a mouth!

It's very beautiful to have a wide range of imagination

A good book [Chigua]

The author wrote it down in a big way

It's pretty cool, the protagonist transforms

I don't know why it hasn't been updated. The writing is quite good, but I can obviously feel that the combat power has dropped a bit.

Author, why haven't you come back yet?

It's interesting [eating melons] Let's keep it for a while, it's not enough to see

This book explains martial arts in great detail, has a relatively complete worldview, and a pretty good story. Of course, it also has my favorite stickers.

This is the first time I've seen a novel of this type, and I think it's pretty good.

It's very interesting. I haven't read it yet. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. The writing is good and the story progress is reasonable.

Not bad. Although there is a lot of content, it is smooth and the priorities are clear.

Although the emotional line is quite slow or even non-existent, the plot to enhance the strength is still ok. Five-star praise is given to the author. Where is the author? Why is it not being updated? One star will be deducted if updates are discontinued [angry]

It's okay. Although some plots are really embarrassing, it's overall quite interesting and quite enjoyable.

It's nice to watch, it's a story about a good brother helping me [laughing evilly]

Not bad, quite interesting, and different from what I saw before

This book is pretty good. The subject matter and plot content are very exciting.