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The overall feeling is pretty good, but Yan Sheng's personality is a bit broken. He should be strategic and courageous. Except for his strength, which is not as good as Yuanyi, he is top-notch. He shouldn't be so hesitant. Misanmi loves you as always, and the poisonous tongue character he created is quite successful.

Well, the writing is good, but I think the author could have written Yan Sheng a little better. What is his equivalent in the original work? Hexagon Warrior, well, his extended IQ and talents are all very high, so even if he doesn't have Muzan, he can handle this kind of finance alone. Teacher, you can write it down appropriately. This is one of my suggestions, but the teacher writes Muzan so cute, a duplicitous arrogant ghost, I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Very good The misfortune strikes hard, the happiness of the step country twins depends on you.

Nice! ! You bastard, scold that stupid old man to death! !

It's very good-looking and worthy of being a psychiatrist. Let's have a good relationship with our step brothers and Wuhan from now on.

It was very enjoyable to write, no need to hurt others, love yourself, the weak step-brothers ushered in their real boss and top substitute.

The three very cute little ones, the owner Yan Sheng, the red milk dragon Yuanyi and the bold thief Yueyan are all very cute babies🥹 The sun is dark at 99, Yueyan still loves you, old friend😋

I'm serious. The writing of Wu Pai is so awesome. The aura of an arrogant superior was written so well. It made me so happy to watch it. The last time I saw this was the last time. Well, I almost forgot that it was Hidden after I saw it. . . Don't scold me if I'm wrong (kneel down) The image of Wu Mei is so well portrayed, so mean, so dismissive, so arrogant, so domineering, it makes me so happy to see you. Ugh, you are like a goddess. . . Be worshiped by me! Make a wish and don't stop updating. Even if you stop updating, I will keep waiting. 🆘Come on, boss, I will ask my whole family to give you likes. In the Aite family tree...

It's so beautiful. Men see menstruation, and women get nervous. It's the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of vegetative people. It helps me see the longing and love of the five-guaranteed households in the village for the widow. I see tears flowing from the corners of my mouth and flooding into the Qiantang River. The teacher's book is so beautiful. It's God. It's my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world come alive. I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I burst into tears because of the teacher's book. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

I felt very comfortable reading this book. Although the text is not that gorgeous, it can even be considered a bit rough, but it is better than the original story line. It is a bit like a refreshing novel but not completely. The reason why I feel warm in my heart is because Yanshang did not "turn against each other" because of swordsmanship, but each took a different path. Wumei also looked arrogant and domineering, but he gave me the feeling of being a knife with a mouth and a heart.

The writing is very good, it's so exciting👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻, but Iwakatsu was so cut that he became an ordinary person.

I think the author should take a closer look. There is something wrong with the portrayal of this boss. "It's just for fun" does not serve as an excuse for your illogical logic (●°u°●) " (Sorry ಥ_ಥ for being overly verbal) It's a bit OOC, that is, Wu Ke, an old nobleman who has lived for more than 1,000 years, his language um... Should be quite elegant. I think this is a bit logically wrong. In fact, you can think about it before writing. In fact, it feels very good (≧∇≦*) and it looks good (๑•.•๑) Well, from what I saw, it doesn't look like the Yagami Yue trio. All three of them are a little OOC, which means I really can't stand it. The characters are very simple. To put it bluntly, they are wearing leather cases with simple settings (can you say this [face covering]) Of course, I hope the author gets better and better [blowing kiss]

The numbers are very good, but it would be nice if Iwakatsu had some opinions

Overall, it's good. It's all about family or friendship. I like it very much. Wuhanmi is originally a tough-talking person. I think Wuhanmi disliked Yuanyi in the early stage, but because of his black eyes, he wanted to get close to Yuanyi and treat him as a pawn. What follows is a love that the poor girls never felt in their previous lives, so the three girls live a happy life together. ˊᵒ̴̶̷̤ꇴᵒ̴̶̷̤ˋ

[Adoration] "Use Fu" I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll my scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste my time eating and forget about it. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the new chapter coming out soon, just like the drought-stricken seedlings looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the masterpiece to come.

It's really beautiful! Hahahahaha, love it so much! The author writes very well! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Why stop updating? [Interrogation] [Smile] [Smile] [Smile]

I really like it. Little Moon should be treated sincerely. Just keep hitting hard, Little Bear. Little Bear is my brother's sharpest knife! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] (I can't express my love in words. The teacher is so awesome, I want to follow you!)

The writing is really good, the plot is not too slow, and there are no surprises at the moment. I hope the three of them can continue to redeem themselves (=^^=)

Actually, I'm not here for Hihei. It's really good that the Yagami and Moon group are all happy together. And this book is very comfortable to write, and Wumei's vocabulary is very good. Yuanyi has been watching the ants move, Yan Sheng has been counting the money losses, and the ants have been moving. In short, everything is very dull at the moment, and in the end everyone is happy, right?

Ah, I have never seen such a beautiful book from beginning to end. My author can update 10 chapters in one day. I have never fought such a rich battle. Please, please, please, please, please, please update 10 chapters in one day. @Pickle. The author will update it quickly. I have a small request. Shushu will update 20 chapters a day, then in the morning and in the evening. If you finish updating, you can give me an extra chapter.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, the author must write down [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

A very nice and easy-to-read daily article. Rihei has a strong sense of fate and misery. God assists. You should know just by looking at this title. It is very good. Those who dare not read abuse or newcomers can join in. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The bestie group is locked, and the CP group is also locked. This trio has a lot of bugs, but it's really cool to be able to operate normally. Don't you know? [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

A very nice fanfic! Yue Yanmeng, Yuan Yimeng, Yan Shengmeng, not OOC at all. We like poisonous tongues. We have a reason to live every day. When will the update be updated? I'm so scared when I see the two characters in the break [blowing kiss]

OMG! ! It's so touching! A milk dragon and a spirit bead were preached by a magic pill! ! So touching! !

It's okay, except Yan Sheng is a bit OOC. I hope the teacher can portray him more in the future. The other three little ones are really cute.

It's very well written [shy][shy][shy] Indeed, the ending would be different if Wuxian were in the country.

The combination of Ye Yueshen is so interesting! Nice

It looks good, but I think it would be better if Yan Sheng could be more stable [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. I will follow the author to my death forever (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ