The American Kill Line? My Cultivation Makes Me Untouchable

We're recruiting, and the pay is good. Package travel, package rebirth, package delivery system. Due to the excessive number of new small worlds, there is a serious shortage of time travellers, so time travelers are now being recruited, regardless of gender, old or young, on a first-come, first-served basis. Like 👍🏻 and you will get the system (try them all, it's free anyway)

Meiliruan is the most suitable place for demonic cultivators and evil cultivators to survive. Monsters and monsters are dancing around. Why does Meiliruan's population not grow all year round? Please take a closer look [sneaky smile] A demonic cultivator who doesn't dare to kill anyone, and he's still in the United States. It's really embarrassing for the demonic cultivator.

The latest 27 chapters are basically old-school urban cultivation harem novels with a foreign background. The characters are simple and routine, but the level of enjoyment is pretty good. Currently, it's a one-man show. However, previous cultivation novels often wrote about Nanyang wizards from ancient martial arts families popping up, so it's hard to say. Four stars first. ☕

The writing skills are very good, the plot is gradually developing, and there are no ups and downs so far. I feel that the biggest plug-in in the system is omniscient and omnipotent. When someone targets the protagonist or an opportunity comes, he will issue a task. By relying on this, he can completely avoid risks and plan ahead. ,,, After watching it, it turned into a missionary film [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

I have read more than 2,000 books, and this book can make me read it. It is a fine novel. There is no procrastination, the shots are decisive, and the details are described vividly. The description of the first female protagonist is very successful. If you keep writing, it will become a fine novel.

I feel that the writing is good, and I can see that the author is really writing seriously. However, there are two problems: ①The common question of soul penetration Speaking of traveling to a parallel world, since you know how to "patch", why don't you just wear it? No matter how you patch it, your soul will wear it, and you will still be in trouble with others. ②I feel that the author has not set the tone of the novel well. Although it is not necessarily necessary to write a mindless and cool article, the content and title written by the author are a bit different from the introduction. Since what I want to write is normal values, why should I create a demon cultivator? It will make people feel extremely disconnected (whose demon cultivator is harmonious, friendly, and willing to help others), and there is no such thing as "lawlessness". I think the protagonist is more disciplined than Americans themselves. Moreover, talking about invincibility and slow growth does not mean that the protagonist is worried about this and scruples before taking action. The growth flow is the growth flow. If you insist on labeling yourself invincible, it will cause trouble for yourself. Also, cheers to the author👍🏻

It has just been updated to Chapter 32. After reading it, it is not laggy in every aspect, there is no nonsense, the plot is also very comfortable, the characters are well created, and there are no inexplicable poisonous points. It will depend on how the updates are done in the future. I read a book of the same type before. The protagonist took on a subordinate who was similar to a priest. There was no problem at first. However, the priest character was involved in all kinds of things and used leaves and other gadgets to control many people. In order to take over that person, the author of the book had been laying the groundwork for a long time and made the priest look like he had no choice. I hope that if the author wants to take someone in, he must shape the subsequent characters in advance and not do such weird and poisonous things.

Cheers, author. [Sending my heart] It's a very good and refreshing article. At least it's a very refreshing article. It doesn't try to trick the main character into being tortured. Secondly, it also has some brains. It's not too brainless. The development of the plot makes people want to read on.

Overall, it's quite satisfactory, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a single female protagonist. I feel that one female protagonist, Su Qingyao, is enough. If there are more others, it feels a bit homogeneous, but it falls behind. A single female protagonist may have a better look and feel, but it's a pity that there are multiple female protagonists. I'm a little confused. I'm obviously just telling what I saw and felt in the article. It's just my personal feelings and thoughts. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit unfamiliar, and maybe the author can't portray it well. Then I gave my personal suggestions. There seems to be no radical or offensive remarks in my first paragraph of comments. It is purely based on personal suggestions. I don't understand why there are so many people in the comment area who are anxious. Is there something in my first paragraph of comments that hurts you? [What]

Good-looking, Mo Xiu is most suitable for modern society.