Traveling Through America from Mortal Body to God on Earth

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Meiliruan is the most suitable place for demonic cultivators and evil cultivators to survive. Monsters and monsters are dancing around. Why does Meiliruan's population not grow all year round? Please take a closer look [sneaky smile] A demonic cultivator who doesn't dare to kill anyone, and he's still in the United States. It's really embarrassing for the demonic cultivator.

The latest 27 chapters are basically old-school urban cultivation harem novels with a foreign background. The characters are simple and routine, but the level of enjoyment is pretty good. Currently, it's a one-man show. However, previous cultivation novels often wrote about Nanyang wizards from ancient martial arts families popping up, so it's hard to say. Four stars first. ☕

The writing skills are very good, the plot is gradually developing, and there are no ups and downs so far. I feel that the biggest plug-in in the system is omniscient and omnipotent. When someone targets the protagonist or an opportunity comes, he will issue a task. By relying on this, he can completely avoid risks and plan ahead. ,,, After watching it, it turned into a missionary film [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

I have read more than 2,000 books, and this book can make me read it. It is a fine novel. There is no procrastination, the shots are decisive, and the details are described vividly. The description of the first female protagonist is very successful. If you keep writing, it will become a fine novel.

I feel that the writing is good, and I can see that the author is really writing seriously. However, there are two problems: ①The common question of soul penetration Speaking of traveling to a parallel world, since you know how to "patch", why don't you just wear it? No matter how you patch it, your soul will wear it, and you will still be in trouble with others. ②I feel that the author has not set the tone of the novel well. Although it is not necessarily necessary to write a mindless and cool article, the content and title written by the author are a bit different from the introduction. Since what I want to write is normal values, why should I create a demon cultivator? It will make people feel extremely disconnected (whose demon cultivator is harmonious, friendly, and willing to help others), and there is no such thing as "lawlessness". I think the protagonist is more disciplined than Americans themselves. Moreover, talking about invincibility and slow growth does not mean that the protagonist is worried about this and scruples before taking action. The growth flow is the growth flow. If you insist on labeling yourself invincible, it will cause trouble for yourself. Also, cheers to the author👍🏻

It has just been updated to Chapter 32. After reading it, it is not laggy in every aspect, there is no nonsense, the plot is also very comfortable, the characters are well created, and there are no inexplicable poisonous points. It will depend on how the updates are done in the future. I read a book of the same type before. The protagonist took on a subordinate who was similar to a priest. There was no problem at first. However, the priest character was involved in all kinds of things and used leaves and other gadgets to control many people. In order to take over that person, the author of the book had been laying the groundwork for a long time and made the priest look like he had no choice. I hope that if the author wants to take someone in, he must shape the subsequent characters in advance and not do such weird and poisonous things.

Overall, it's quite satisfactory, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a single female protagonist. I feel that one female protagonist, Su Qingyao, is enough. If there are more others, it feels a bit homogeneous, but it falls behind. A single female protagonist may have a better look and feel, but it's a pity that there are multiple female protagonists. I'm a little confused. I'm obviously just telling what I saw and felt in the article. It's just my personal feelings and thoughts. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit unfamiliar, and maybe the author can't portray it well. Then I gave my personal suggestions. There seems to be no radical or offensive remarks in my first paragraph of comments. It is purely based on personal suggestions. I don't understand why there are so many people in the comment area who are anxious. Is there something in my first paragraph of comments that hurts you? [What]

Cheers, author. [Sending my heart] It's a very good and refreshing article. At least it's a very refreshing article. It doesn't try to trick the main character into being tortured. Secondly, it also has some brains. It's not too brainless. The development of the plot makes people want to read on.

Good-looking, Mo Xiu is most suitable for modern society.

Let's wait and see before giving a good review. So far, it seems that there are no serious diseases in tomatoes, which is pretty good. I would like to make some suggestions. In fact, I feel that the protagonist is too serious because the author chose a relatively magical theme. The protagonist's behavior could be a little more crazy. Just stick to the bottom line.

The logic is smooth, and there is no villain who is too brainless and deliberate. The current perception is worth 5 points. The first impression was indeed okay, but later on the plot started to become inexplicable. I felt that it had a strong AI flavor. The harem was also inexplicable. There was almost no emotional foundation to get it together. The logic of the villain's behavior was too deliberate, and the group portraits began to look stupid.

The writing is quite good, but the author has a bad writing habit. Maybe the author himself didn't realize it. Emily's heart skipped too many beats! I wonder if she has a heart disease [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The writing, plot, and character creation are all good. If it maintains its current standards, it will be a fine novel.

That's it! It's a good book without an abusive protagonist! The logic is clear and the narrative is natural, with a strong sense of substitution! Recommended to everyone.

1. I think the setting of multiple female protagonists in this novel is very good, and there is nothing wrong with it. After all, it is a semi-invincible theme, and there are very few settings with a single female protagonist. This is very reasonable. 2. In addition, some explanations in the novel, such as explanations of settings such as the killing line, are too long. Most readers actually don't have the patience to read it. It is recommended to shorten it appropriately and not to make it too lengthy.

For old bookworms on multiple platforms, this book is a good starting point. It is as good as a high-quality book if it suits your taste. Newbies and non-newbies can also read the first 100,000 words of the published article. The logic is smooth, the plot development is reasonable, there are main goals and a linear development process.

Very cool article, I am very satisfied. 20260224

After reading Chapter 28, let's evaluate The plot is attractive, there are no logical loopholes, at least I didn't see any of them, the writing is smooth, and the author and the protagonist's views are in line with Chinese concepts. Five-star praise Take another look and come back to review I saw the latest chapter, Chapter 217, it's gone [face covering] Still not satisfied, review with five stars As an old bookworm, I haven't seen such a wonderful novel from beginning to end on Tomato for a long time.

Keep up the good work, write the real America between the lines, and let more people know the essence of America!

I think the writing is quite good. Although it is said to be an American cultivating demons, it still retains the bottom line of normal Chinese people. The author's three views are very correct. He kills those who should be killed and exploits those who should not be killed. The rhythm is very smooth. There are small classes at the end of some chapters to learn knowledge, which shows that the author is really writing with heart [Sending Hearts]

The writing is okay... Just the taste is a little off. In fact, you are more suitable for the American horror genre, brother. American horror can still be combined with the killing line... At present, this realistic genre is also combined with religious gameplay, which is really a bit sensitive. .

The creativity is novel, using fantasy to blend reality. It satirizes old America and is also passionate and extraordinary. I hope the writer pays attention to the rhythm, Fire Tongs Liu Ming [smile]

It's good-looking, and the main character is a succubus, which attracts him and attracts her even more. He is an angel, very holy, and the American people believe in him

Not much to see, but overall pretty good. There are no minefields or poisonous spots. This is really difficult I highly recommend it. To be honest, this book is inferior to Tomato in terms of the author's level of care.

A rare good book, interesting yet thoughtful. You should be on Qidian. Com, because there should be a place for you there; but you should also be on Tomato. Com, because more people can see it [Like]

Not bad, but a little worse than me, Mr. Tang Darcy. The main reason is that he suddenly turned from an ordinary high school student to an angel. Although it is a bit foreshadowing, this change is too fast.

This book is written for those outside my eyebrows. Well written

Tell the truth. The author's writing style, plot, and content are really good, worth reading

I think it's very interesting to watch. Why is the Tomato score so low? Many high-scoring novels are so ugly that I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.