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The writing is good, and the advantage is that it has a strong sense of atmosphere, which can help readers quickly enter the scene. However, it is not smooth enough. The grammar and spelling of some passages are slightly inconsistent and abrupt, and I look forward to future growth. Chinese-style micro-horror novels are quite rare. I personally like this type very much and don't get tired of it. I suggest that you do less self-editing in terms of world view and learn more about the real Chinese horror culture. This book will become more interesting and perfect. Qin Shu's character design is one of my favorite characters that I have watched for five years. He has a good combination of evil and gentleness, and Li Musheng's secretly crazy character doesn't bother me.

Beautiful, I like it very much

If you have this article, why don't you tell me earlier! Is the teacher still updating?

It's super, super good-looking. I really like this character. The plot is not too bad, and the writing is not bad. It's written smoothly. The author must continue to write more.

It's really good, the characters are tense, and the plot is quite logical. The only shortcoming is that the update is interrupted. After the update is interrupted for a long time, I forget the previous plot and I don't have the patience to watch it a second time.

It looks good, the author should write quickly [crying]

How to give me a light feeling. I like it very much

Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm going hungry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want food! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really good to watch, the writing is really smooth, the content is also very good, the characters are very good, it's really worth watching!!!!!

It looks great. I recommend the author's writing style.

Very nice, please update [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger]

Looks good!! Super invincible explosion looks good The writing style is really good, very beautiful, please update [crying]