Endfield: Starting a New Journey with Amiya

Real food, always hungry and frustrated, always depressed

I personally think there is a big poisonous point, It's too embarrassing. First of all, as a doctor, can you take that authority whenever you want? Have you forgotten, there is an ancestor [Chigua] in there. If you really dare to take it, he will be raised for you in minutes, and the ashes will not be left. I suggest you take it back within chapter 20. Well, besides, a little suggestion We can set up a public recruitment system, which can be used to recruit second- and third-level operators, one time at a time, about 7 days, which can be used for daily writing. (However, please note that some operators will become abnormal in the later stage)

Okay, it's a good fanfic, but the protagonist is always kidnapped by morality, and his personality could be more like a doctor [awkward laugh] How can I put it 🤔, the author is still listening to the advice, and the writing style is also acceptable. But the main line can be pushed a little more. What kind of daily branch lines can be inserted in the middle, and more operators can interact with each other. The protagonist should not be so aggrieved and can be calmer. Today's readers can't stand such a protagonist [scrolls] If possible, the protagonist can change his clothes and imitate his previous self [lick screen]

I am the author. If you have any suggestions, please tell me 🤭

This is a rare piece of writing about the end of the world. I see that the story structure is very smooth now. The author has his own ideas. I look forward to the subsequent development. Later on, the story of the main character feeling aggrieved is a bit heavy. I suggest the author add more fragments to make the readers feel better.

It looks good, good luck to the author!

It feels good now that I see it. It would have been a lot of fun if the author had summoned a funnier operator like Gou Sheng earlier [laughter]

It's shameful, but this is just my personal opinion

Although frustrated, I still hope the author can persevere.

Has the author been playing Endgame these days? He hasn't updated yet [laughing]