One Person: I Have Already Cultivated to Become an Immortal, and the System Only Came Here

Invincible, decisive in killing, like a fairy, and logically smooth, but the author does not know how to write emotional lines. When writing about other people's emotions, he is a little unfamiliar, but the writing is okay and the content is very good. It's a pity that the first thirty or forty pictures are okay, but the ten or twenty in the middle are written as junior again. For Quan Xing and the Wang family, they are okay, at least they are decisive. For others, they seem to have the upper hand, but in fact they are all discussed, which is a pity.

Good book, really decisive in killing, not caring about killing that ruins the plot. In my opinion, anyone who can survive dozens of chapters will die instantly. It's very exciting so far, but without keeping their hydrology, I don't know how the author got to the later stages of writing.

Is it cold? Just be cold, warmth is reserved for people who drive cars. Good morning, bike sharing people!

Very satisfied, the quality is very good, cost-effective, and the service attitude is also good. I recommend buying it! . The overall experience is great, the delivery is fast, the packaging is tight, the product is consistent with the description, and it is trustworthy. Exceeded expectations, the quality is online, and the after-sales service is considerate. I will repurchase it in the future. I am very satisfied with it in all aspects. The effect is good, the price is affordable, it is really good, five-star praise!

It's cool and cool. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and doesn't show mercy just because the opponent is a woman. It fits my idea of ​​a male protagonist, and he's very handsome! ! [Shy][shy]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

No less than Return of the Dragon King [Thoughts]

It's so beautiful [smile] It's amazing, everyone comes to see it

Not bad, but there are some places where I feel there is a problem with the tone.

It's well written and interesting. Keep it up.

Very nice, pretty good

The writing is okay, keep up the good work

Not enough, a bit too little

Decisive killing is good

It's pretty and interesting.

He's handsome, very elegant.

The protagonist has his own behavioral logic and is a bit murderous, but he doesn't kill innocent people indiscriminately. It's good to watch.

You all taste this kind of thing

It's pretty good. I heard others say that if the score is too high, it will be banned, so it's only four stars.

Nothing else, I just like it

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can review it in advance. It's a good read [OK]

Although I haven't read Under One Person, I feel the author's delicate writing style. In short, Haokang

Kill decisively and vigorously. Focus on the Tao. There is no emotional entanglement, it's fun to watch