Demon Slayer: Kimetsu No Yaiba Was Shot at the Beginning, and the Whole Network Burst into Tears!

It's okay to write. Some small suggestions (you can listen or not) 1. Some of the original plot could be written in detail. 2. Use [ ] or [ ] for barrages to better distinguish them. 3. In the follow-up, you can write about some unpopular animations (animations), Chinese comics (such as Peking Opera Cats, etc.) Or knives (such as Unheard Flower Names, etc.) (Note: Hot-blooded or knives can cause great emotional fluctuations in the characters and readers in the book. If the reaction is too bland, not many people will read it.) (Come on, author❤️)

In some places, the author has made changes and original creations to the plot and lines, but it doesn't feel like the original Demon Slayer. Especially the plot where Qiang Rabbit appears has been greatly changed. The author's changes made me feel that Qiang Rabbit's character is not as brilliant as before; There are also some plot scenes and lines that have been omitted, and I suggest the author keep them. For example, the scene that touched me the most: the sad, happy and blessed smile after the mask was split. Without this scene, it always feels a bit missing; and the words Tamayo said when she met Tanjiro: "Even when you are facing someone who has turned into a 'ghost', you still use the word 'human'." It really makes the character and essence of Tanjiro even more brilliant. There is also a little less reaction and interaction from the audience barrage. I hope the author can consider adding some more. It feels a bit boring now. The above are just some of my personal feelings and suggestions. I hope it can be of some help to the author's wife [sending my heartfelt condolences]. Why does it get weirder the further you look at it, there are so many mistakes. Fallen Princess is a younger sister, not an elder sister. Her human name is Mei, not Hina. When she was still a ghost, Taro, the prostitute, would not call her sister the human name [laughter]

The plot of the original drama is written in detail. This not only makes the text more beautiful, but also makes it more comfortable to look at.

Teacher nb, the details are super good, the plot connection is also very good, and the audience's reaction is also very real! ! ! I just have a tactful suggestion. . . Can you update 10 chapters a day? [Shy](Euphemistic₍ᐢ‥ᐢ₎♡

The system rewards are applied to employees. When the artist paints special effects, he suddenly becomes a giant and says he can move his hands. This is a little poisonous point. (I'm so awesome, so just give me this salary and not some technical stocks)

I hope to get to the Zhuhe meeting soon. I want to see the audience's reaction after seeing the Zhus. Come on, the author~ つ♡⊂ It's still okay, but the barrage is a bit too human-machine.

It's very interesting, but I don't know why. I always feel that the pace is a bit slow. This is a guest review, because it is already chapter 65 and the plot has not even reached the second season. I don't know when the next anime will be released. Another thing is... I read the introduction of Dada and it said that he will write the spell return later. Can you change the spell return a little bit? Knowing that this is a copycat, I am sure most of them will restore it 1:1, but can you delete the sentence that Su Nuo-sama failed to make you happy... At least don't let him die with the infamy of being ridiculed as the clown Gojo Satoru. I really don't understand why he said this sentence? Isn't he very proud? Please, even if you don't delete it, don't mention it [cry] [cry] [cry]

I read it in two days. It was quite good. I was mainly attracted by Demon Slayer. However, there are some plot differences with the original work, such as the section where Taro the prostitute just came out. But it is not bad. After all, it is good to restore so much of the plot. I have not read Your Name, so I don't like this section very much. Of course, this is just my personal reason. The author's writing is still very good. People who have read Your Name can take a look. I look forward to the author's updates and hope that the author can restore more of the plot. Come on!

Many plots of the original work have been changed, and after the changes, it loses its flavor. It's a bit uncomfortable to read, but the writing style is good, and the writing is much better than those that just touch on the plot.

Very good, the plot is slightly different from the original one, but the characters are well created

Not bad [shy] Looking forward to the next episode

It is not just a movie-watching article. The story of the protagonist, the audience, and the suppression of capital are all present, and the emotional value is also in place. It indirectly tells the difficulties encountered by some "geniuses (people, objects, or works)" on the "road to becoming gods". At the same time, the funny plot is also present. The whole article has both serious and funny points. The overall style is towards the refreshing type, and there is also a part of the emotion flowing in.

It's very good, but the author changed a bit too much, and then lost a little bit of the plot, but it's good to be able to get it like this. Overall, this book is still very good. I hope the author doesn't suddenly stop updating like I did when I read "Bai Yueguang Also Wants He Script" before. It was originally well written.

It's really beautiful. I recommend everyone to watch it.

It can look good

It's very beautiful. If you like it, you can join it.

The author must not be a eunuch! It was so hard for me to find a book that suited my taste!

I just gave it five stars for packing a certain country away. Although I haven't watched Demon Slayer, I think the author's writing is good and I plan to check it out.

It looks good. I hope I can make more money and circle more money. It's best not to get any system reward money.

The teacher's writing is very nice. I personally think that we can write more interactive things, which can make it more interesting. Is it possible to write more in a day? [Sending my heart]

It's nice to watch. It's not all the original work, it just tells the general content. It has its own plot characters and vividly created three-dimensional images [Love] Finally there are ratings [laughs]

Come on, the author, the plot is delicately described, rich in emotion, and very beautiful.

It's very well written. So far, I can see that the author's writing style is delicate. Although I haven't watched Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, I can feel the author's concentration, care and thought when watching the anime. I hope the author I can keep writing until the end, so I give it five stars.

One word "cow"! For those who have not watched "Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba", this is a good choice.

I reluctantly give it five stars.

Nice looking one, brother

Great looking author

I like the teacher's works very much I am very sorry. I have to take back my previous five stars. The author used AI too much. Many plots are not the original plots and have been changed too much. For example: the appearance of Wu Mei's closing meeting after his death from exhaustion was changed [something]. Also, the words spoken by the barrage are confused with the words spoken by Demon Slayer characters. If it were written by hand, there would be no such problem...

Ah, I don't know, I don't know, I don't know

Could you please write about Bungou Stray Dogs? I beg you. Currently there are only people writing about watching movies, so I beg you (óò｡)