Who Teaches***********

You are right, but this is Sakura Aya🤔🤔🤔Magic radar invisibility🤓, pure physical damage😋, heavy [guillotine]☝, light double sword style👇, Ultra-limited gravity slingshot👉, mysterious magic shotgun👈, mastering the power of Sir Ox😏, and soul-based heaven-defying moves💪💪💪absolutely super awesome🤫🤫😱

I enjoyed watching the battle to guard my mother. It was wonderful to fight to the last moment (without killing myself), especially when I saw everything familiar around me become unfamiliar, it seemed to open up a new world. The author must continue to write, I still want to read it

It's good to watch. It mainly focuses on a battle which is fun. I feel like the author is not quite sure about the plot. I hope the author's writing will get better and better. I won't comment on the emotions. I think it's okay, but I can't compare with those big guys. But the battle is really fun. The whole battle is fun. The emotional aspect is less. Fighting is fun. Fighting is fun. Fighting is fun.

Nice! From the beginning, the male protagonist has a pure player mentality, controlling the female protagonist to kill monsters with great skill, and the monsters are very visual, and he is very handsome! ! ! Very, very cool! It's so exciting to watch, and the two of them will have more bonds later on, and it feels like a man and a sword become one! And it gives the heroine in the game a very pretentious feeling! The heroine has gone from being a pink and weak magical girl in the early stage, to a berserker, a melee master, and then to the latest upgrade, with the execution effect of chainsaws and huge scissors, new clothes, a black gothic dress, a half-veil, and a cool temperament. Don't be too pretentious! Don't be too handsome! So cool! And what makes people very comfortable is that the male protagonist gradually regards the female protagonist as his daughter. Not only is the game data very warm, but the arrangement of the game screen is also very good. It does not involve too much the real life of the male protagonist. It is more about the male protagonist controlling the female protagonist in the game, growing up and becoming stronger step by step. Moreover, the feeling of pretending to be a saint in front of others is really good and refreshing.

I finished reading it in the middle of the night. I hope that the protagonist will treat the heroine better in the future. Maybe the heroine is just a game character to the protagonist now. Some game methods that are normal in the eyes of the protagonist, even skipping classes, are indeed a bit scary in reality, but I can understand it. The above, that's all for now.

The subject matter is good, because the protagonist treats the heroine's world as a game, so the behavior is a bit CS in the eyes of people in the heroine's world, but actually it's okay, it has started to be a little gentler, and most likely uses some AI, but it's okay, there are no other AI novels that always have a lot of descriptions, and some of the plots are weird, but it's barely readable. Summary: Good food and grass, although not particularly good, is still good as long as you can accept the protagonist's early operations.

The imagination is very interesting, and the image of Xiao Ling is also very cute. I really like this contrasting theme. The protagonist and Xiao Aya feel like a father and daughter. However, I feel that the plot is too tight, the battles come one after another, and the characters are a bit too facial-looking. I haven't found any interesting supporting characters so far (›´ω`‹ ) A bit of personal advice, I understand that the protagonist is a hardcore gamer, but maybe a little description of the human side can make the image more three-dimensional? Could the author spare some time to intersperse some warmer daily descriptions? I want to see the interaction between father and daughter 😊 The intimate protagonist said that it would be better to take Xiao Ling to eat. I have been looking forward to seeing Xiao Ling temporarily put aside the pressure of fighting to eat delicious food "with her father", but it is a pity that there is no www Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next plot, and the author will give you my best [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]

The details are a bit rough, the ideas are novel, and the overall work is excellent. There is suspicion of AI writing, so read with caution

The writing style of this book is relatively smooth, and the action scenes are very exciting and rhythmic. The emotional drama of the characters is also good, but there is not much interaction. But the author, didn't he talk about magical girls? Why are Kaguya and Tsukijo useless in the White Tower? The gravity magic that the protagonist also uses is added to it at least. The previous interaction between the three magical girls, red, yellow and blue, felt a bit lacking. I hope the author can allow the male and female protagonists to communicate more in the future, and meet again by the way.

A book with considerable potential. There are two main things that are outstanding: The first one: Using the Souls game as a template, a relatively complete combat system is designed for the heroine, and the description of the battle scenes is quite excellent, which is quite rare. Article 2: The interaction between the female protagonist in the game and the male protagonist off-screen is well written, such as this interaction. Compared with other control articles, there is basically no interaction. I personally think it is better to have interaction. This is an important selling point of this type of article.

A soul-based player "controls" a weak magical girl from another world, forcing her to become a physics-based player. Since the player doesn't know that the "game" is another real world, he becomes a bit of a chef when it comes to liver ingredients. The subject matter is new enough! And it can be seen that the author is at least a veteran of soul games and knows many techniques and tricks. The battles are described in detail, using explanations rather than empty descriptions, and the battle ideas are clear. I just don't know if I will encounter other types of players in the future (such as fighting players, chicken gamers, survival players, etc... It can't be the Fenglingyue Shadow Sect, right?). If so, it will test the author's game knowledge reserve.

Although there are some AI elements, it is a very good novel. It is about the weight of weapons. Can it be more accurate? It was 80 kilograms when it first appeared, and it became 55 kilograms later. Please check the article carefully to avoid AI hallucinations, okay?

There are two highlights in this book that I hope the author will maintain. One is that fighting is fun, and the other is developing magical girls. As long as you don't deviate from these two points, you can get good results by playing other conspiracy theories. Finally, physical magic girls are fun to fight!

Creativity is king, no need to say more The previous book was Sakura in the Mother Form, and we have finished reading it. The layout of this book is indeed much better, and the inner description of the characters is sufficient (of course it seems a bit overdone?), But the details cannot be scrutinized. Come on, author, after all, this book is as creative as ever. Although, this creative writing makes people like us a little bit intolerable. Also, try not to add parentheses in the text... Whether it is various conjunctions or simply end-of-chapter notes, there are many solutions and you can choose from them. I'm looking forward to the next intensive repair. When it's done, remember to ask me to come back and change it to five stars. We'll see you there.

It's a very interesting novel. From the moment the "magical girl" controlled by the protagonist arrives on the second map, the story becomes particularly interesting and addictive. Moreover, the author works very hard and updates very quickly, with 4 chapters updated every day. I love it so much that it makes me drool. The low score seems to be due to the lack of comments. Highly recommended!

I've caught up with the latest chapter, and it looks good overall. Although it looks a bit like it was written by AI, it doesn't matter. The main metaphors and deifications are a bit too much, and the repetition of metaphors is a bit too high, which affects the perception. The subject matter and content are relatively new. At least I have seen relatively few similar ones. I hope you won't forget the plot fragments in the first chapter of the main plot. I also have a big move that is unlocked with charm of 20 and I haven't used it yet. No, the ultimate move obtained when the charm value reaches 20 in the middle of the second chapter is useless by the end of the second chapter. Did the author forget it or the AI forgot it? The author didn't just run out and upload the article without reading it. I'm just waiting to see what the result of this ultimate move is. I haven't seen it yet. There are too many useless details, such as The light of the shield is reflected in the eyes, and it's a supporting role. Tell me what's the use of this? Isn't this pure water? There are fewer metaphors in the latest chapter. I hope the author can use AI to make an outline first, and then let AI write according to the outline, or try not to ambush the pen. AI's memory is too weak to remember, unless you take the initiative to remind AI

It's very interesting, but I hope the protagonist can interact with the heroine a little bit

The fighting scenes are very exciting, the author also has a good understanding of the game, and the growth line of the heroine is also well written. There may be traces of AI polishing and modification in the early stage, but it is harmless... No matter! You are right, but this is Sakura Aya, a magical girl who combines numerical values ​​and operations😋, an executioner with high numerical values😨turning at right angles😱humanoid special attack😭, if I let the executioner use the great laws of mechanics to fail to turn you into Louis XVI😤, then the second stage, start! 😡Sabbath will smash you into two-dimensional slices, eliminating all possibility of you breathing🤓, not the magical girl you remember, but just as deadly👿

It's good-looking, but the chapters are a bit short and it's not serialized. Everything else is good. The characters are very three-dimensional. I originally thought that the player would always be in a high-ranking position, but I didn't expect to have empathy and sympathy for the protagonist. The setting is very novel, and the aesthetics of violence are refreshing. The protagonist is not always afraid and has obvious growth. It can be seen intuitively that in one chapter, the protagonist does not rely solely on the player's power but solves the problem on his own. Maybe this will happen to the protagonist in the future. After all, the world circulation conditions of the player and the protagonist are different. There is nothing to say about the plot. The follow-up banquet and tea party will probably be focused on the description, and players have mentioned the second episode several times. It is expected that there will be an if line or extra description of the law repair. All in all, this book is very interesting and highly recommended. I don't know if it's because there are too few chapters so the rating is not high. I think it should probably reach 9 points.

It looks good, at least I think so. The male protagonist suddenly began to feel sorry for the female protagonist, but it seemed that it was a problem with his writing skills, and it would be easier to write about the emotions later in the story. Recommend it.

A very good magical girl (questionable) book, one of those "the left hand does more damage, the right hand does more damage" kind of thing. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are not from the same world. To be precise, the female protagonist is a game character, while the male protagonist is a "player". Therefore, various nascent behaviors in the early stage may dissuade some readers who like the gentleness of the male protagonist. However, later on, after experiencing part of the plot, the male protagonist begins to change his mind, and there may be some sweet spots later. The summary is: as long as you can accept the initial behavior, this is a book worth reading.

You are right, but, 👏👏👏👏 This is Sakura Aya 🤔The power is comparable to that of a crane. Thick and reliable steel armor. A magical girl who is immune to magic immunity. The scythe is unstoppable🤚. The Undertaker suit has a shield👌. Sabbath can also attack from a distance✌️ ⚡🍊has control🤙 ✂️can also penetrate defense at high speed Even the cooldown time is only 0.01 Seconds ✊ Only 15 mana points for no gravity👍 You can even refresh the weapon CD when changing postures👈 There are also ✌️real damage. Then after the armor and magic resistance are improved, you can also get skill acceleration👐 You can deal world-beating damage in a 0.05 Second window🙌 It also shortens the release time😨 And then there is attack power😰 Switching between various weapons, various tricks are impenetrable, and the ghosts are coming👊🏿😭👊🏿ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh on

Nice! You are right, but this is Sakura Aya, a magical girl who combines numerical values ​​and operations😋, an executioner with high numerical values😨turning at right angles😱humanoid special attack😭, if I let the executioner use the great laws of mechanics to fail to turn you into Louis XVI😤, then the second stage, start! 😡Sabbath will smash you into two-dimensional slices, eliminating all possibility of you breathing🤓, not the magical girl you remember, but just as deadly👿

The following comments are all from the end of Volume 1 (beginning of Chapter 2, Despicable Strangers) It is not on the same track as other magical girl novels. It is very enjoyable. It is highly recommended for the following people to watch: soul wandering lovers, contrasting magical girls (the contrast here is probably not the same as what you think) and pure violent aesthetics lovers. The author is very good at grasping the rhythm of the game. If it is not important, it can be done in one stroke. The feeling of changing pictures and upgrading weapons, including weapons, are all unfolded according to the author's rhythm. It is obvious that the author is developing the world view, so I won't spoil it. Keep reading! The last time I wanted to see something like this was the Moen Calendar. Come on, the author, keep it up and hope to reach 9 [Top post][Top post][Top post] If the comment content is, "That magical girl! She looks like an angel!" "Whose angel is the angel with the chain sword?" "The emperor's angel is not an angel? 😇" "[Like][Like][Like]" In the article, it will appear that the left fist does more damage and the right fist does more damage! The strength is weakening [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Including but not limited to dismemberment, cutting in half, and violently smearing the enemy on the wall [Like] [Like] [Like] This battle is so exciting!

It is obvious that AI is used. After the game version is updated in the plot, the writing style has been improved a bit. It is not so stiff, and there is not so much AI feeling. In the early stage, it is mainly about watching the battles. Later, the plot will be improved. It is okay to read when you are bored. Food + level.

I didn't expect it to be so good before I clicked on it [crying]. It has good combat descriptions and a simple but focused narrative process. There is also a "contrast" between the game and reality that the protagonist and heroine know. It's very interesting [laughs]

It looks good. The protagonist controls a magical girl, which gives people the feeling of a violent magical girl warrior. It is quite unique compared to the normal style of magical girls. The fighting scenes and the emotions of the characters are also well written, but the battles are one after another. It would be better to add more daily life.

Not bad, although the AI flavor is still a bit serious, but the overall plot is very good [like] AI writing still affects the perception a bit. I suggest the author revise it after finishing it.

A masterpiece, with a unique style, and the best thing about violently fighting monsters while wailing in your heart! ! !

This is simply the most interesting novel I have read in the 21st century. I spent half an hour browsing the Tomato homepage and it was not in vain! I really found gold. This novel has three-dimensional characters, rich scene descriptions, and vivid psychological activities of the characters. It is a rare masterpiece. The setting of the heroine stood out to me. It must be the fearless revolutionary spirit and the indomitable heroic spirit. The heroine, whose physical fitness is equal to that of our high school girls, faced the challenge of the monster and waved the magic cane of courage just for her mother's illness. I couldn't help crying when I saw this. A fatal weakness of the tentacle monster that was obviously unbeatable was triggered at the critical moment of life and death. What a perfect counterattack! The thin girl hit the Rat King with a steel pole thicker than her medicine. What a heroic moment. In her thin body, I saw the glorious salvation and the value of life. At that moment, I seemed to be immersed in the scene, and even the buzzing of mosquitoes in my ears was chanting her holy name.