System Crash? I Use the Panel to Prove It Forever!

The thinking is rigorous and logical, excluding some minor roughness and flaws in the details. It can be regarded as an edible masterpiece. In the later stage, he kept suppressing it, turning the protagonist into a grandson. Anyone can step on a true successor, and belittle and ridicule him openly or covertly. So after the protagonist reaches high-level qualifications, will he have to face another bunch of ridicule from geniuses with earth-level, heaven-level spiritual roots and special physiques? Why are the routines of male videos like this? The rating is still too high!

Five stars, must be five stars. This is the best book I found on Tomato. Apart from the minor flaws in the early stage, it is a typical book that starts low and goes high. Although the progress is a bit slow, it is really interesting and interesting. From now on, it depends on whether the author can maintain his level in the middle and later stages and achieve a smooth landing. Generally speaking, after this book becomes popular, there is absolutely no problem with a score of 8.8 Or above. In fact, I prefer a high-scoring work of 9.4, But again, it depends on whether it can be implemented smoothly in the middle and later stages. The current progress is still in the novice village, or even in the warm-up stage of the mid-term, and has not yet reached the climax. If the climax is written, the high-scoring work will definitely be stable [Like] Kids, the plane crashed. I thought the game was warming up in the mid-term, but I didn't expect it to be the climax. It ended before it even started. [Crazy] It's sad, it's a shame, no wonder this book hasn't reached 8 points yet. [Grudged] Since the beginning and end of 1v9, this book has started to go downhill. It's been daily, daily, and then all kinds of "chicken soup" water characters. The description of fighting is also not good enough. Especially the 1v9 part, fighting, fighting, there are a lot of psychological descriptions + chicken soup, all kinds of "oaths", it is exactly the same as a feeling of "everyone thinks like me, I am a xx", and then suddenly snap, soon, I win, and then it is over, it is really exhausting to watch, if you just stop and delete the pile of chicken soup psychological descriptions, the look and feel will be better than this, ugh [face covering] After reading the latest chapter, I felt that the author was a sign of failure. The main plot was slow to advance, so I mentioned it to my friends every now and then. I really have to ask, "Brother, don't you have an outline?" Why did it give people the feeling that I couldn't write anymore, and I didn't know how to proceed with the plot after that, so I had to grind out the word count? [Eat melon] I can only say that it's a book maintenance. Although the author's style is very laborious to write, before the protagonist reaches the golden elixir and the main plot is not advanced, the book's rating will probably not be high, especially the follow-up version seems too torture [laughter]

The writing is good. Except for the protagonist who is snatched away by the author as soon as he leaves the house and the beautiful girl who really thinks that he has a good middle-grade spiritual root, the rest of the book is pretty good. There is no stereotype of other fairy tales or mindless upgrades.

The writing is quite good. The eight-year-old YY beauty mentioned in the comments is actually okay. I don't really like it. It's just a life-saving strategy for a mortal who has no resistance to face the Qi training overhaul. As for the names of Qin Shuiru and He Yuzhu, it is indeed a bit confusing. The author said that it is too troublesome to come up with names. I can accept this, so it's okay. The standard has dropped a lot compared to the previous ones, especially when it comes to the Qingjing Sect. The storyline is actually fine, but the description is very unflattering. The protagonist has always been defeated because of greed. The author may have wanted to write a plot like He Shou was fried and was blinded by a big forest tree, but in fact, from what I saw, I just felt that the protagonist was too greedy and short-sighted. Although the reasons are given later, I can only say that I no longer feel happy. Now that I have established the foundation, it is still the same. I can only say that in Tomato, if you write like this, you will suffer a lot.

It is a very pure type of oriental immortality. It is very suitable for literary novels. There is no mechanical routine of immortality. The plot is reasonable, the characters are well created, the writing is smooth, the structure and setting are pure and unique. It can be regarded as an above-average work in Tomato. Please keep updating.

The writing is very good, but the story about the indigenous son of destiny made me laugh to death. The protagonist used the evil spirit of the main world to build the foundation. He has already become a human, and he can dominate immediately. As soon as he becomes a human, the master calls out to rebel.

It's not a hodgepodge of traditional cultivation of immortality. It's about seizing opportunities to create cause and effect. There are a lot of conflicts in similar settings. The good points are that the writing is decent. Nine out of ten books are written by AI🍅. If someone can write it in a big environment, you can probably read it. The character of the protagonist is occasionally a virgin. Those who pursue pure blackness should not be able to read it.

Love to watch. Let me tell you what you like, it's a bit confusing, I hope it can support the author. 1. The protagonist's character is realistic and the golden finger is suitable. The protagonist is an otaku who prefers cultivation, egoism, rationality + greed for money, with a kind face and an evil heart. For example, when I interacted with Chu Feng, I thought I would fall into the trap of becoming good brothers, but later I discovered the differences between the two. The pitfall was that the protagonist, as a practitioner on the Tao, also has a heart to enjoy loneliness. 2. The worldview of this book is relatively dark when unfolded, but the author reveals it layer by layer. As a pawn in front of the protagonist, he will often be interfered with and become a pawn on the chessboard. But the strange thing is that the author's description is still relaxed and freehand. I read it from the beginning. Logically speaking, this is considered "combat power", but I feel it is reasonable and very readable. It is awesome. 3. The shaping of Qingming Demon Sect. The growth paths of the protagonists in many novels are as follows: they enter a small sect, then become the mainstay, and finally discover that this small sect is a lonely large sect, revive them, and lead them to the top. And in this process, there is always a villain ticket, who is powerful and spares no effort to suppress it. In this novel, the villain is actually myself. I am the most powerful sect from the beginning, and the training method is very interesting. I am not allowed to kill each other just because I am a demon sect. There are rules. This is the way for a sect with centripetal force to train newcomers.

I think this book is really good. Someone in the comment section mentioned its overwhelming power. I would like to refute this point. In this world, the protagonist is already considered a genius among geniuses. Most of the protagonist's shortcomings are actually calculated by the superiors (not targeted, just needed, and it happens to be there). The protagonist is a convenient downgrade). I think the 7.3 Of this book is low, about 8.8. If you can calm down and read it slowly, it can even exceed a 9. Anyway, it is much better than the 9 points recommended by Tomato (many 9 points are written like shit). I think the disadvantage is that two books a day are not enough to read.

The plot is mostly good, but those who are impatient may find it uncomfortable. Personally, I don't feel very good about it. 1. There are too many descriptions of panel information. It can be simplified. There is no need to divide it into so many lines. Basically, you will not read it carefully. If you want to display two or three types + ellipses, it will be enough. 2. There are many plots about the life and death of the protagonist, but the panel display has limited improvement and seems to be slow to improve. Although the improvement is very fast according to the age of the protagonist. The protagonist has a panel, and there are also many side jobs. There is a panel where you can observe improvements at all times, and you don't have to constantly take risks like the Son of Destiny. The timeline can be extended. I feel that after the protagonist builds the foundation, he breaks through the foundation building in batches. The protagonist obtains resources very quickly, and there is a panel to encourage him at all times. Others give an approximate time. Otherwise, I feel like I am a child of luck and keep up with the progress of the protagonist. Low-grade cannon fodder foundation 10 to 20 years Medium-grade road foundation 20 to 40 years Top grade road foundation 30 years foundation Even if you try to pull out the seedlings and encourage them to grow, there must be a basic time, right?

Brother, to be honest, the book you wrote is still very good. It can be considered the latest version at this time. It is not as clichéd as other books. And brother, don't be angry because the data in this book is not good. In fact, Tomato attracts traffic to you. I found it on the recommendation list. We only have more than 60 photos to attract traffic to you. In fact, it is already very good. People basically need more than 100 photos to attract traffic. Now more than 60 photos are very important. I hope this comment can encourage the author. ૮ﻌა

Highly recommend, it is systematic but not too interfering. Because only the panel is left. The protagonist himself is also more ambitious and hard-working. He is also a dark-hearted young man. But he won't do things alone. He is the kind of person who can make friends with others, but he is always wary of others. Because where he is is the Demon Sect. I think this one is better.

The writing is quite good, the plot is a bit bland, and the fairy tale is a bit weak. It is a set within a set, and it can be finished at any time. There is no sense of expectation. You can read it when you are short of books, and it can be regarded as food. 🧡💛💛💛💛35.8 💙 💜 💜💙 💜💜💙 💜 💜💙

It's okay, it's considered qualified food. In various aspects, there is nothing too outstanding, it can only be said to be qualified. But it's okay to pass the time and have fun. Among tomatoes, this one doesn't have much shortcomings, so it's pretty good. No, it's actually good food. I haven't found any new great books during this period, but looking back, this one is already very good. It can be regarded as an excellent food.

It's good but not popular. It's the only fantasy novel in the past two years that I still want to read after reading 200 chapters. The characters are well-developed, the rhythm of the plot is well controlled, and the writing is guaranteed. The background content is slightly depressing but not completely invincible. However, the protagonist is always at ease around him. This balance is very stable. Of course, the article is interspersed with small jokes but they do not take up a lot of space. The author uses many original jokes to try to fix the anchor point in the readers' memory through repeated techniques. The only pity is that I hope book friends will comment on the wonderful points, but no one comments. It is a pity. My evaluation: Half-step fairy grass.

In fact, it is quite good. Although I can see the shadow of many books, I can feel that the author also has his own thinking. Although the character creation is a bit stiff, it is generally very good, surpassing 90% of the authors. There are some moments of fun, but it's not the kind of mindless fun. The protagonist has his own rhythm. Anyway, I've already seen the latest chapter, and I think I can continue reading. Come on, author [OK]

I finished reading it in one sitting. It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. It is not brainless, the writing is smooth, the logic is smooth, the plot is not draggy, and the characters are not brainless. It is enough to beat 90% of Tomato authors. Writing 8,000 words a day beats 99% of authors Tomato 3000 hours certification

Which Tomato novel is the best? → It's not specific (Which leaf is the best?) → Which tree leaves, which one do you want? System Collapse, One Permanent CertificateWhy are you so obsessed with looking good? The early stage of the novel itself has a clear logic. The theory of "Qi Luck Energy Field" and "Refining the Heart and the Seven Emotions and Six Desires" are consistent with my own cognition and current situation. I can empathize with them and have cognitive benefits. My brain thinks it is a good thing. Cool point: System = hard work will definitely make you stronger and you will gain something → in line with your own taste, similar to today's cognition and values. Heart-Refining Technique: Due to one's own real-life difficulties, the mind thinks that there are good things that it desires to possess. After reading a hundred chapters, my thoughts and feelings are unclear. Personal opinion

It's not bad, it's quite similar to the first novel. It can be seen that the author really wants to write about the protagonist's state of mind, and how to grow up step by step, from imperfection to perfection. But the vast majority of people won't watch it until you finish it, especially when they're following updates. Sometimes I don't want to watch it when I see some of the protagonist's mental retardation, and I jump from the back to see that the protagonist is disturbed, but the update is too slow, and I know that the author is a dual-book reader, but most people won't follow it until the protagonist realizes his enlightenment. Of course, you can still read 100 chapters in a row.

It's a good work. It doesn't have too many poisonous points. It doesn't have a lousy pretentious plot. The enemies are not idiots. There are some novel settings, Qi training, foundation building, and cultivation are all well-written. It can control an entire world, and it can be adapted to the Tao. The story is wonderfully written. I hope the quality can be maintained in the future.

The plot is okay, and Goldfinger is pretty good, but the character of Goldfinger (which is more exciting) is not mentioned at the beginning, so I just skip it, and the beginning is a bit bland.

Personally, I think this book is very good. Since Shuang Wen Wu Nao Wen came out, many novels that have plots and pits that are slowly filled in at the later stage have been called hydrology. From the plot point of view, it is really good, and the resume also said that it is slow to heat up. I don't know why many people still say that the pace is slow. If you finish a novel like this in a few chapters, it is useless to write it. Wouldn't it be finished if you just soared in place? Doesn't everything have a rhythm? Doesn't it take time for a person to grow from a child to an adult? So I support the author and criticize the impatient readers. (There are indeed too many panels, but the author also listened to the advice and fewer appeared later, because the author also has to record the panels, otherwise the subsequent exercises will be forgotten)

The author has worked hard, don't worry about those little villains who deliberately write bad reviews, just keep updating, just remember! Except for using this method to keep us, there is no one behind you [KISS] Book friends who come to the comment area to sort out mines, Tomato's free articles are pretty good, there are no big poisonous points, you can browse the comment area, many good reviews have a viewing time of more than 12 hours [Love] However, it is really not suitable for those who love to read Long Aotian's cool novels. The development pace is quite slow, and the protagonist is not a good person. He belongs to the lawful evil camp.

I would like to support it with five stars. There are not many authors who regularly add updates to a 4,000-word chapter. The plot is a bit flimsy, but there are many updates. Overall, it is a good book. The plot and writing techniques are acceptable. I have almost read the latest chapter.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and it is pretty good, with a bit of a shadow of Wulin Gaiden and Siheyuan. I kind of regret reading this novel. I remember that when I was looking for the novel, I looked for it based on the completed version. I didn't pay attention to the novel and only wrote this little bit. I just got into the mood. Depending on the situation, it will take a year and a half, which is difficult.

Read more than 100 chapters I really want to say that I really like this book. I haven't seen such a fairy tale in a long time. I'm tired of the templated AI cultivation novels. This one caught my attention immediately. It broke away from the old black and white routine. The characters stood up well and the world view was laid out clearly. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can feel the author's intention. As for the plot, I think I like this kind of novel very much. And as for the setting, it is a relatively new immortal cultivation novel in my bookshelf. It's too good for my taste! I'm really looking forward to the following plot. Please keep updating, make more updates, and keep writing this story. I'm committed! I won't sleep tonight, I want to finish reading! ! ! Super girl and boy I will use the words that are the most straightforward, the most direct, the least roundabout, the most objective, the most correct, the most systematic, the most truthful, the simplest, the easiest to understand, the most realistic, the most condensed, the most popular, the most rigorous, the most comprehensive, the most pertinent, the most pragmatic, the most superficial, the most unembellished, the least exaggerated, the most unflattering, the most down-to-earth, the most coherent, and the most precise. The most direct, the most free from empty talk, the most consistent with the facts, the most concise, the most straightforward, the least gimmicks, the most objective and fair, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most painful, the most ruthless, the most straightforward, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the most No turning around, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most energetic, the most enjoyable, the most brutal, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most top, the most explosive, the most rigid, the most intense, The most sassy, the boldest, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the dryest, the cleanest, the neatest, the most domineering, the most hard-core, the least pretentious, the least routine, the least formal, the least fussy, the most practical, the most focused, the most results, the most truth, the most core, and the most key way to tell you: The author is great, not enough!

It's so beautiful, I've been following it. After reading other people's comments, most of the likes commented negatively on the protagonist's slow improvement in cultivation, and praised his peerless appearance with a medium- to low-grade spiritual root. But I think it's okay. Although the name is Qi Lian-Jin Dan, the author has probably found his own way. The combat power and training difficulty are very different. Maybe it is covered by the realm name. I think Qi training must be weak and very easy to break through. After all, this is not original. When you hear the name, the relevant settings will automatically appear. One day to build the foundation and three days to build the golden elixir is not interesting. I have also seen people who practice Qi at the ninth level to overcome tribulations and use a small world to build their foundation. As for spiritual roots, it's just the protagonist boasting and encouraging himself, which is understandable. You can't blame everyone, right? Isn't it bad to have to hate your spiritual roots? It's not necessary, and the protagonist's birth family only has one foundation, so it's still more than enough. If he hadn't gone to Qingming Sect, the continent's ruler, the middle and lower grades would have been very good. Unlike other novels that touch on Pangu's essence and blood and the innate holy body, I can't stand the spiritual root of Renzhongpin. Like Changsheng Goudao-ryu, it is generally relatively slow. Like Changsheng-ryu, the protagonist is still practicing martial arts for hundreds of chapters. The author was not able to ask for leave today and was very happy. Special review. Cheers to the author, please don't let the comments put you in a bad mood. This book is still very good, but it is more suitable for old bookworms. We have seen too many scenes of signing in to become the emperor in one day, but others may dislike the protagonist's slow promotion. I see that most of the negative reviews in the comment section are those who have only read for 30 minutes or about an hour, while those who have read for more than ten hours are mostly positive reviews, which is enough to show how excellent the book is. If I think about it from another perspective, even if I have read negative reviews for more than ten hours, they are still excellent fans.

Personally, I feel that it is quite good and unique, especially when I think about Yuanying's statement: the golden elixir drinks Tiangang, the Yuan Fei is formed from the beginning, and how to build the Zifu to build the foundation, how to build the Zifu to become the golden elixir. I feel that this statement is correct in many immortal cultivation novels. In other novels, they often jump over the steps, and here the golden elixir is Golden elixir, no matter how talented the foundation builder is, he will have to run away when he encounters the weak Zifu. Here, the foundation builder will die if he glances at the golden elixir that does not suppress the aura. It just feels like there is no way forward until Yuanying. Yuanying is so awesome. How to write about the next realm is afraid that the author can't write it well. If only he could read it with as many words as a mortal [Adoration]

The writing is okay, there is no trace of AI. I was originally going to give it 5 stars. Why is there one less? Because I don't want to see the brotherhood that has shaped so many chapters turn into enemies. You'd better tell me that good buddies are due to the influence of luck, otherwise... In fact, I didn't do anything. I could only cry and fainted in the toilet. I kept crying [almost crying]

The structure is clear, the logic is smooth, the plot is attractive, the protagonist is decisive in killing, repays kindness and revenge, knows how to be patient, knows how to advance and retreat, but does not lose the madness and ruthlessness that a demon cultivator should have, and has a composite character. The supporting characters in the article are described with flesh and blood, and they all have their own calculations. The characters are very well-characterized. I personally think it is a rare high-quality novel in the same genre. I hope the author can continue to maintain it or even improve it even more 😄😄😄