Zhu Xian: Reforging the Mortal World

There are too many mistakes. Some of the titles are slightly wrong but can be understood a little. There are many logical errors and many big errors. I feel that the author hastily read the original work once and wrote it. There are many big mistakes. It is recommended that the author look back at his own writing after reading the original work several times. However, the overall writing style has a bit of Zhu Xian's sensibility, which is still very good. I still have a good foundation in writing, and I can look forward to the future. Come on, come on.

I rely on the author to make it to the end. Can he write more emotional scenes with Lu Xueqi?

Good, good, good

It has the far-reaching charm of Zhu Xian's artistic conception. Good luck to the author for paying attention to details.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I still want to review it now.

Consider it and take a look

Very satisfied, keep up the hard work