You Said We’d Lie Flat, So How Did You Become the Boss?

If you have any suggestions for improvement when building a building, you can mention it. The original plot cannot be changed significantly. The piggy brain is not enough. Try to change the poisonous points as much as possible. (It should be reasonable to give yourself a five-star rating)

Author, your writing is really good, and the setting is very new, but there are too many poisonous points in the beginning, such as killing people, making yourself feel uncomfortable, and blushing when talking about your own clones. What's even more awesome is that the enemy in the void is suspicious of children (although you wrote about energy gathering). Please change these, it's poisonous. Damn, it's really poisonous. Author, I really beg you.

They all look down on me😡, but I don't live up to expectations😭 There is no one to help me reach Ling Yunzhi😨, and I can't go up myself😰 Everyone laughs at me😃, but I am the funniest😊 The future is dark😱, it's so dark that I just fall asleep😴 As long as I have some skills🤔, I won't have no skills at all😩 Gold always shines🤗, but I am an old man😭 I won't fight anyone who can defeat me😡 No one can use me🙄 because I am useless🤓 People who love to laugh will not be unlucky😎, because people who are unlucky cannot laugh🙃 The strong never complain about the environment👍, but I am the weak👎. I not only complain about the environment👆, I also complain about the strong👇 I wanted to cover myself with a quilt and cry 😭, but ended up falling asleep 😴

"Urgent Fu" I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll my scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste my time eating and forget about it. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the new chapter coming out soon, just like the drought-stricken seedlings looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the masterpiece to come.

The subject matter is great, but does the protagonist have any physique that would attract suspicion?

This is a very intelligent novel, highly recommended 👍👍👍

It's pretty good, the subject matter is very novel, but some of the plots don't quite add up.

It's not bad. One chapter is as good as four or five others. It's really scary. Each chapter is basically over 4,000 words long.

It's well written, and the protagonist's character is realistically described

It is not recommended for those with low poison resistance.