Brother Jindan, I Was Invincible in Ancient Times

This book is good. It doesn't just show off for the sake of showing off. It also writes about other things. Moreover, the protagonist lifts the Kunlun Mountains and raises them to a height of 10,000 meters to build a cave. He also undergoes some transformations to make the book full. The main protagonist's golden elixir is more powerful than the gods in some immortality novels. I can only say that this spiritual food is very delicious.

Okay, okay [Like] [Like] [Like] This book will finally stop immortals from intervening in the mortal dynasty. In the past, all I saw were accepting the emperor as his younger brother. I really don't know what the use is. They have become immortals. There is a difference between immortals and mortals. The emperor is just a mortal. At most, he can provide mundane gold and silver treasures. Now that he has become an immortal, these things are useless. This book is well written, cheers for the author [like][like][like] Slap me in the face [cover face] or take me in as a younger brother

This book has a low score, but I personally feel it should be above 9. I read all the chapters in one go. The writing is very good and the story flows smoothly. Different from traditional fairy tales, it is not about fighting monsters, upgrading and changing maps, but a story about immortals who unexpectedly came to ancient times and interacted with mortals. The reason why I think it's good-looking is that the author doesn't know the word count. He doesn't write two chapters about refining an elixir or refining a weapon in one go. There are no skipped chapters in the entire article. I hope the author can write more.

It looks good, it looks good, the author's writing is good, it feels a bit like a starting point novel. I haven't done anything to reduce the price so far. I hope I won't write any female characters in the future, otherwise it will inevitably become a diaosi's obscene and incompatible with the protagonist's status as a fairy. If the character is crazy, the article will be ruined. I hope the author can work hard!

Yes, there are not only pretentious scenes of the protagonist, but also various perspectives of the supporting characters. However, since you have a weak aura, you can use some methods native to this world, just a little, and don't do anything that was particularly awesome before in this world.

This book is okay. There is no deliberate pretense. My daily life and the nearby villagers are not like other novels that deliberately save people everywhere. It is similar to a mortal cultivator. He will not deliberately contact mortals and live his own life. I will wait and see if he will write down later. I will review it later.

Anyway, after reading it so far, I think it's pretty good. It's a slow-paced novel, a slow and refreshing one, not a traditional fast-flowing novel. The angle surrounding the protagonist's manifestation is pretty good. When I saw the sacrifice part, I felt that it was written in an ancient style, which is also very interesting, with that kind of uncivilized tone. If someone feels that the writing is not exciting enough, I suggest that you save it and read it first, and then come back and read it after reading too many quick and exciting articles. I think it will have a different flavor. Of course, everyone has their own reading opinions, and I am just here to give you some comfort. Then as for the subsequent development, as a reader, I still hope that the protagonist will continue to practice, but how to practice depends on how the author writes it, but I think it is best not to get around to the practice of merit. I have read several articles, one or two are completely off-topic, and the perception is very poor, and the carefree and comfortable tone has gone astray.

The community is at the God of War level. It looks great. The protagonist is the most powerful in the entire community, and the protagonist doesn't go out [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The story is good and the writing is very witty, but it doesn't make sense, so the author gets scolded more than praised, right? Why? You wrote a golden elixir-stage cultivator as the magical power of a land immortal. How could you make the immortal cultivators in Tomato's other works feel so embarrassed? Needless to say, during the physical training period, in order to become physically stronger, menstruation and marrow are cleansed and the marrow is washed, laying the foundation for cultivation. During the Qi training period, the Dantian has a sea of ​​Qi and can begin to absorb spiritual energy. In the foundation building stage, the Dantian Qi sea turns into liquid. In the golden elixir stage, the Dantian Qi sea condenses into the golden elixir. These three realms are just the beginning of cultivating immortals. At most, they can absorb spiritual energy and use it for me. How can they have such great power to move mountains and fill seas? In the Nascent Soul stage, little spiritual beings are born from the sea of ​​consciousness, and the soul can reside in it, which is equivalent to having an extra life. The transformation stage, also called the distraction stage, allows the soul to release its spiritual consciousness and escape from its shell. It was during this stage that Tieguai Li's soul escaped from his shell and went to play chess with the Antarctic Immortal. As a result, his body was destroyed, and in the end he had to take away the body of a lame beggar. In the integration stage, the Nascent Soul sinks to the Dantian and merges with the Golden elixir. Then, by washing the marrow of the physical body again, the Nascent Soul grows up and merges with the physical body, completing the initial tempering of the physical body into a spiritual body. The Dongxuan stage, also called the Dongxu stage, gradually develops the physical body towards the spiritual body and gradually replaces the stinky skin. In the Mahayana stage, one has a preliminary spiritual body, which can produce spiritual power on its own and automatically repair body functions, laying the foundation for the next step of becoming an immortal body. As for overcoming the tribulation, it is a step to accept the thunder tribulation and temper it to become an immortal, rather than a state. After overcoming the tribulation, attaining enlightenment and ascending to heaven, you can officially become an immortal immortal.

The pace is slow, but the story is relatively smooth. The dozens of chapters so far are relatively smooth. I have the desire to read it. The characters depicted are vivid and active, full of personality. The villagers are not unrealistic NPCs. They have specific psychology, reasonable and real. It is considered a masterpiece in Tomato. It is limited to the dozens of chapters I have seen so far. It depends on the author whether it will collapse in the future. Good luck, author.

It's good to watch. If you like books like "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", you can read it. However, this book is more daily-oriented, with a heavier emphasis on the concept of cultivating immortals, and there is a slight sense of pretentiousness throughout. About the male protagonist who is a golden elixir monk, but came to the traditional ancient dynasty where no one practiced, and has been showing himself as a saint in front of people. This kind of manifestation is hidden from the beginning to the end. The insurmountable gap between the male protagonist as a monk and a mortal is so refreshing. From the looks of it, he only has one concept in his mind: just cultivating an immortal is so satisfying and worthwhile. (Please give your comments a stable rating in advance, and the author will be encouraged.)

It's a rare good book, even better than Qidian. The characters are vivid and the story is compact. Everyone gave it good reviews, which made it popular and gave the author some motivation, hahaha😁

This novel has a similar theme to another one I read recently. They are both about immortal cultivators in ancient times, and they rely on the contrast between two different systems to create excitement. However, this book follows a different style. It does not pursue a fast pace. Instead, it focuses on portraying characters from all walks of life and slowly makes the characters flesh and blood. It is very exciting to read so far. My only worry is that there are too many descriptions of zombies and ghosts in the book. I am afraid that the plot will evolve into a story about people cultivating immortals in the future, which will make the original unique setting disappear.

. From the content point of view, it is best to have a profound and thought-provoking theme that can reflect social reality, the essence of human nature or convey unique ideas. The plot should also be exciting and logically coherent, which can firmly grasp the reader's attention and immerse the reader in it; in terms of language expression, the text should be infectious, either beautiful and smooth, or precise and powerful, and can be vivid It depicts scenes and creates characters; in terms of character creation, the characters in the book are three-dimensional, full-bodied and flesh-and-blood, allowing readers to resonate or leave a deep impression; in addition, this book can also inspire readers, whether in terms of knowledge growth, thinking expansion, emotional experience, value guidance, etc., Readers can gain something.

I think the writing is pretty good, but I read too many fast-paced books. I feel that this book is a bit slow, and there are a few pictures that don't involve the main character, but this can also make the story fuller, so I hope the author will update 100 chapters as soon as possible😄.

The details need to be improved, but generally speaking, it's okay at the moment. I hope you won't be a licker next year and just don't pretend to be a pig all the time. After all, if you act like a pig for a long time, you will really become a pig. A common problem in many invincible novels is that there are many pig plots. I hope this one won't happen.

It's good to read, but there are too few. I just clicked in and thought I could read a few thousand pages, but I finished it in just over 1,000 pages. It's a daily novel about cultivating immortals. It doesn't deliberately show off, and there aren't too many conspiracy ideas that make people tired of reading. It doesn't have the kind of plot where you deliberately hide your strength in front of mortals and slowly take action. It doesn't make things troublesome, and you can read it smoothly.

Personally, I feel very good about it. How can I put it this way? I've watched too many System Genius Invincible streams. After watching this kind of leisurely cultivation, I feel more relaxed. I don't have to think about those intrigues. The protagonist has passed through the Golden Core stage. There seems to be no immortal cultivators in this world, so he is relatively invincible. After reading dozens of chapters, it's okay so far. There are no poisonous points [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Real feelings: The first fifty chapters are up and down, good reviews, relaxed, daily, and the writing is okay. Then the more I wrote, the more casual it became. The lines became vulgar and turned into a comedy style. I couldn't place the supporting characters. As far as the little Taoist priest gave me the feeling, he looked like two people in the front and back of the text. The protagonist has no "fairy spirit", and the common people do not have much respect for immortals, which creates a sense of separation... Compared to other "big fans" of Tomato, this novel is relatively acceptable, so I encourage you with 5 stars. (I like a reader's comment: "The author is immersed in his own world." Fan of the authorities)

This novel is very well written, and I quite like this genre.

[In the autumn of that year, there was a corpse demon in Kunlun Mountain that caused trouble. It bit people and drank their blood, but it could not be hurt by weapons. The county magistrate Wen gathered a crowd to suppress the attack, but was ambushed and almost killed. The Taoist Tianjun will be defeated even if he fights with his sword. [Suddenly the heaven and the earth stagnated, and the sound of the wind stopped. The night sky cracked and a mysterious dragon emerged. It was a hundred feet long, with scaly claws and eyes as red as the moon. There is a person standing at the head of the dragon, dressed in white as snow, with the stars and moon as a backdrop, his eyes lowered, as if watching an ant fight. [The zombie trembles. The immortal fluttered his sleeves, and time and space were silent. Then the fingers burst into golden light, turning into hundreds of millions of rays of light, covering the crowd. Wherever the light passes, all the monsters turn into flying ashes, and the stench is swept away. Sprinkle the clear light again, and all living beings will be healed of their wounds. [Everyone fell down on the ground and worshiped, and the Taoist asked: "Are you the real immortal?" The immortal looked back, smiled lightly and said nothing, and disappeared into the clouds on the dragon, leaving only the rustling mountain breeze. [Tai Shigong said: The path to immortality is elusive and difficult to comprehend in this world. However, it is witnessed by the head of Guizhou and coincides with the classics. How can it be completely false? In ancient times, when the Wuxing Dynasty flourished in Han Dynasty, fire fell from the sky and meteorites rained down, or something like this. The world is so vast, extraordinary changes occur from time to time, and extraordinary people appear. There are different paths between immortals and mortals, is it just virtue?

The author is a breath of fresh air, and the writing is really good-looking. More daily life, some stories of small people [laughs] I have seen too many pretense and slap-in-the-face, but this kind of daily life is more beautiful.

The plot of the story is fascinating, and I couldn't stop reading it. I really like every character in the story... Among them, it is rare that the little Taoist priest has good spiritual roots. I really hope that this little Taoist priest with a strong sense of justice can embark on the right path of immortality... Without further ado, I will first give my five stars [love]

A very good novel about cultivating immortals. It is different from most other pretentious and slap-in-the-face novels about cultivating immortals. This one is an ordinary story about the world of cultivating immortals and the war between the imperial court.

What a great book. The author is so nice to ask you. Except for some sudden outbursts that appear to be caused by a second personality, the overall writing is really good. The protagonist also has rewards and punishments. He is decisive when he should be decisive and merciful when he should be merciful. Currently, except for the underage queen, there are no other female characters. It's also fun when you write about your daily life, so keep up the good work.

It's not bad. I don't just show off to others, but do some other daily things. I feel pretty good.

The ideas are clear and more in line with the character. It's worth watching.

The overall pacing of the book is very well controlled. The characters have distinct personalities and arcs of growth. The plot progresses naturally without any sudden jumps. The foreshadowing is cleverly laid out. It is only after reading that the previous details come to light, and the sense of immersion is strong.

At present, I am at the early 40th chapter. Not to mention other things, the writing and plot are both at a starting level of 9.0. It's just that there are too few people reading it, and the ratings will naturally go up as more people follow. This title attracts readers who like fast-paced, mindless and exciting writing. So the score is low for now

I saw Chapter 29, it was very good and interesting. Group portrait articles really suit my taste. I would like to give some advice to the author. In this kind of novel, the divinity must be retained. The protagonist should appear less often and remain mysterious. More stories about little people, especially if it's a woman who can't walk on the road. I've read a book before, it's similar to yours, it's okay at the beginning, but it's all poisonous at the end. It's hard to write this kind of article. Come on.