National Games Game: I Am a God, Guarding Alone

I have read many novels in which Zhang Qiling is played, but the author, yours, was the first one that made me read 6 chapters, and it suddenly made me see the horror in the protagonist. There are thousands of characters to play, and the first one written by the author made me feel that the protagonist Shen Jinghan is slowly dying and disappearing, and is slowly being replaced by "Zhang Qiling".

It's not bad. There is no CP praise. It's just that the repeated emphasis on the brother's loneliness and indifference is a bit deliberate. The team has no shining points and relies entirely on the support of the male protagonist. It's scary to be afraid. You can't make other supporting characters dull in order to highlight the male protagonist. This point can be further strengthened, or Wu Xie and Fatty can be brought in.

Big, if you want to bring together all the young cows, the male protagonist is too lonely. Secondly, I feel that the other supporting characters are a bit too bland, and you can't rely on the male protagonist alone.

If you like no cp, come here Wu Xie and Fatty, the Iron Triangle will be combined [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I feel that the portrayal of Zhang Qiling is very perfect. It is very close to the original work and enriches some memories about the little brother (because the original work is from Wu Xie's perspective and there is not much portrayal of this). I really like the friendship of the Iron Triangle (please it must be friendship [admiration])

I'm looking forward to the Golden Triangle fusion, and I'm also looking forward to it, with Black Blind Man and Xiao Hua also in it. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] Author, don't care what others say, I think it's very beautiful

The book is very good. The description of loneliness was a bit too much at first, but later it was corrected. The character design is also quite consistent, and the description of fighting is also very good (I have only read Chapter 109 so far). It's the author. I don't understand whether they are the original ones who came in the second national transportation. Let's talk about the black blind man first. In the memory fragments in the front, he witnessed his death. In the memories in chapter 108, he said that they were separated and never saw each other again. Secondly, the fat man didn't seem to know that the little brother liked chicks, so he didn't quite understand when they were. It made people a little confused.

Great, I suggest you not keep repeating words like loneliness, it will affect the perception a bit.

It's pretty good. Zhang Qiling's portrayal is also pretty good, but it feels a bit "pretending to be pitiful." The word loneliness is repeated in every chapter, and why does the protagonist fall into memories every time as soon as he takes a break. After reminiscing, he starts to doubt himself, and then his body trembles slightly. Ye Zhixia noticed it every time. The barrage is still saying that the little brother is so lonely [something]. After one or two chapters, the plot starts to be repeated. Several times I thought the author sent the wrong chapter [something]

The author writes so well! ! After reading it, I still feel that it is better to have Iron Triangle. He is too lonely. His loneliness makes me feel bad [cry][cry][cry]

The very interesting author is Wu Xie! Fat man! When are you coming? There are also Heixiazi and Xiaohua! Really want to see it! [Blowing kiss]

It's a good read. I've read many novels like this, but your book is the one that most resembles Zhang Qiling. What can you say about other novels? I don't mean to devalue them. I just think it's too easy for them to play Zhang Qiling. It's too easy to get Zhang Qiling's power. I feel very bored when I read it.

I don't know what to say, but when describing Zhang Qiling, those memories buried deep in my heart always feel very painful, like tearing the inside, and the raw pain of the wind and snow pouring in, sour to the bottom of my heart.

Well... I have been reading this book since I read it. I think the story is very exciting. It is a new type that I have never seen before. It is quite interesting. The blind man in the second National Games is from a parallel time and space, but why are they still called dumb Zhang? Do they know each other? I don't understand this. Can someone tell me [crying]

The writing is quite nice, but it's just not to my taste. The actor is like Zhang Qiling wearing Shen Jinghan's body, which is not much different from Seizing the Body.

This book is really good and beautiful, but the main character is too harsh and lonely [I almost cried]

It looks good. I hope that if there is a fat man named Wu Xie, he can add the black blind man and Xie Yuchen.

After searching for a long time, I finally found a book that describes my sad emotions [crying] [crying] [crying] Everything else seems to be only the strength of my brother. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

This book is quite good. Although it is a bit OOC, I don't think it's that big of a deal. What's important is that the author describes the key points, which is really good.

Let me go, the author wrote an awesome book, why is such a beautiful book not popular? And it doesn't have a heroine, so I'll go. You have to show it to me. What if the author can be a little more diligent? ᗜ֊ᗜ

Dear author, please update! The writing is pretty good so far. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

What can I say, I am looking forward to this book because it is very long. When I started the first chapter, I warned that the boy would be very lonely in this book. I thought it would be good to be alone. I really liked the scene of the boy fighting through the forbidden area alone. It was so cool. But later... I didn't expect it to be the loneliness method. It kept saying "I am very lonely, I am very lonely, oh, I am very lonely." No, there is no need to repeat this over and over again. There is also a word that is repeated over and over again, "guard", which keeps saying "my responsibility is to protect, protect, protect, protect", and then the rest time will inevitably fall into the iron triangle of memories. I think there are only two people's memories in this body, one from the original owner and one from the little brother (not counting the memories before the time travel). Neither of these two people can have this character, so it can only be the little brother's OOC. It feels like a man-machine in many places, and some places are repetitive... The barrage is also quite... Human-machine. To be honest, it didn't add enough atmosphere. Looking at the back of the directory others appear. The black blind guy who seems least likely to be OOC is also OOC. I remember that he would never take off his sunglasses no matter what. Not bad, four people together.

It's really beautiful, and the writing style is great

It looks good, but I don't know if I can see the Iron Triangle? Hope to see it! ! !

The author is great. Although the novel is good-looking, my brother's hooded sweatshirt is navy blue! ! ! It's not black! ! ! ! ! Also, I don't mean to accuse you, but in my impression, he always seems to wear a navy blue hooded sweatshirt... Please don't scold me [crying]

Love to watch, like. But when will the author let Wu Xie and Fatty come?

The protagonist is too lonely and the characterization is very good [crying]

The author writes very well. If you like reading this kind of stuff, you can give it a try.

It's good-looking. It perfectly highlights the process of my brother forgetting himself again and again, and then searching for his memory, and his loneliness and divinity. It should be the best book about national fortune + role-playing + adventure in similar situations that I have read so far (bushi), good reviews! The author's writing style is also very delicate, which perfectly sets off the brother's loneliness that is engraved in his bones. Moreover, the food in each chapter is delicious, plenty of food, and delicious! Come on! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Very nice ヾ(❀^ω^)ノﾞ Oh my god, will they appear later?

It's very similar, very real, and exudes a certain cold feeling