[The score of the work has just been released, it will increase later] [The unit is a brainless revenge novel, completely imaginary world] Yang Qi, a poor boy who wanted to climb up, unexpectedly met Zuo Xin'er, a daughter of a rich family. He chased her with all his strength, thinking that he was lucky enough. After getting married, you find out that your wife is actually a high-functioning sociopath? Did he step into a madman's trap or a trap called love?
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I read the latest chapter in one go. To be honest, I quite like this work. Especially the twisted and touching emotions between the male and female protagonists. Seeing a cold and incapable of empathy being warmed by a pair of warm hands used to save people, the male protagonist gradually fell into this twisted love from his original fear. But what I like most is actually the author's writing style, the undercurrent hidden under the calm sea. Under the author's not so gorgeous words, I can feel the turbulent and surging emotions. Sometimes the drizzle is silent, sometimes it's like a stormy sea. Of course, there are some areas that I feel are slightly lacking, and that is the events that connect the entire book. Compared to other places in this book, I felt that these unit events themselves were too bland and did not even have many highlights. If it is used as a tool for the emotional development of the male and female protagonists, I think it is barely qualified. But aside from this part, their own story is not enough to support me to continue reading. Of course, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I hope the author will write better and better. This book is almost finished. I hope there will be an ending that makes me feel deeply [heartfelt]. I am also looking forward to the author's next book.
It's so well written. I feel that books with this theme are really rare. It feels quite unique to have this new theme in the current yandere novels. The author's writing skills are really good in characterization. The subtle differences in the personalities of the male and female protagonists are also very well written. The author is really good at depicting the growth curve of the characters from the details of this quiet life.
This book records the process of true love between men and women, which is also addictive. How depressing the front is, how sweet the back is. The writing is so sophisticated that I doubt it is the vest of a certain female channel boss, haha.
What is derived from the character arc is the choice between procedural justice and factual justice. The two complement each other and not only promote the plot but also complete the fullness of the character's personality.
All in all, Tomato is a really amazing book that made me stay up until four in the morning to read it. I really hope the author will update it more [crying] [crying]
And I did see some book friends suggesting changing the title of the book, and I agreed with it. When I first saw this name, I thought it was the moderator who called me, but it was actually a bit overwhelming. The author writes so well that he will definitely succeed. Come on [send heart] [send heart]
An interesting book, I didn't say it was very, very good, but it did make me feel fresh and interesting. The development of the story is similar to Revenge Taxi in Korea and Suspect Tracking in the United States. It is a unit story, and then the relationship between the male and female protagonists slowly changes from these unit stories. The two of them really feel very good about each other and are looking forward to the feeling that the two of them really and completely love each other (from the kind of scheming against each other to the people who love each other, it is really interesting, that is, the so-called transformation from chess pieces to wives/husbands)
I would like to give a reminder to the cunning audience. I personally think there is a chance that AI was used to assist the creation of this book. I even think it was not DS, but maybe chatGPT or Gemini. Some of the language reads a little subtly artificial, such as the use of the second person in metaphors to give examples, or the slight recurrence of plots between different chapters. But what is certain is that it will not affect the reading experience of ordinary readers. After all, this is Tomato, not a literary salon.
However, this cold pseudo-human feeling perfectly blended with the subject matter of the book, just like a cat owner trying cat poop coffee for the first time, so I started reading it after lunch and accidentally read it now.
The plot seemed to have quite some potential, but it was too cold and lacked interest, so I left it at that.
I'm a little tired. Let's go take a bath. I wish you all a happy reading.
This is a very good book. I have rarely read this type of book on Tomato. The author's character creation is very vivid. Well, some scenes in it can also be seen that the author's writing style is quite good, especially some inner emotional activities, which are very vivid. No matter from all aspects, this is a very good novel. Although there are quite few chapters so far, I think it won't be too bad in the future. The romance between the male and female protagonists is very natural, without too many forced pieces, and the development of the plot is also very attractive to watch. The only flaw is probably the name given by the author [facepalm]. To be honest, when I first saw the name, I thought it was a bad book. Its status is probably about the same as the Dragon King novel, maybe even a little lower [facepalm]. After all, the name does make people think of the content of that crappy street, and this is a new book without a rating, which makes people doubt the content. , I accidentally clicked on it and took a look at the introduction. Although it was very short, it aroused my interest, so I read it for a while. Unexpectedly, the more I read, the more shocked I became. I found that it was completely different from what I imagined. The content and plot are very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and speed up the update.
The author's writing method of narrating the story from multiple perspectives is also very novel, which also gives full play to the author's detailed and vivid description of inner emotions. It is highly recommended to read [Flowing Kiss]
At first, I read it because of the more interesting subject matter, and then when I read the previous chapters, to be honest, I still felt (my personal feeling) that the first few chapters were not particularly outstanding, but it still felt a bit routine, and I could still watch it halfway through.
But the more I read later, I realized that the author of WC is very good at writing and describing the subtle changes, the changes in the character's mentality. Especially when it reaches more than 40 chapters, there are extremely appropriate descriptions of the environment, psychology, and details, and the slightest changes are carved just right. And the creation of characters is full and vivid. Just like that, using words to touch the deepest and softest places in your heart bit by bit makes me deeply moved.
Here I still want to say that the author is amazing, come on ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾
I didn't expect to find such a novel in 🍅, a novel with multiple narrative carriers, or a novel with dual first-person limited knowledge perspectives [smile]
I can only say that the way of writing is good for niche audiences, and the sense of substitution is too strong [please taste carefully]
The secret is revealed step by step, and you have to face your true inner thoughts, and then become accomplices. The author's writing style is really concise and can focus on the key points!
It feels like the reincarnation of a foreign station veteran🍅 [punch]
All in all, nice looking! Update soon!
I have just read Chapter 20 now. The writing and plot are very good, but why are there so few people watching it? The author may consider changing the title or cover of the book. Such a beautiful book cannot be buried, and updates must not be discontinued. Come on!
A niche treasure book. When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was some kind of urban romance novel, but when I came in, I came across a story about an anti-heroic urban elite couple who fight against violence and save each other [face covering]. It was also interesting that the author switched to the first-person perspective of the heroine.
The writing style and narrative angle are very novel in Tomato. Although the multi-perspective switching is a bit frequent, it cannot hide that this is an excellent work. The connection between the unit stories is also very smooth, and the writing is also very good.
I was just curious at first, but after reading it, I found that the language is plain... Accurate, the writing is good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the dual-perspective narration is also very detailed. In terms of genre, it is more of a notebook-style record, providing a novel reading experience. This is the first time I've seen it on Tomato. It's more literary and worth a read.
The absolute strength, the resulting loneliness, teaches you that the person you love is...
I thought it was a story about a crazy yandere who ran away from her, but in fact it was not at all. I watched the male and female protagonists scheming against each other from the first acquaintance, to the male protagonist discovering the secret and knowing the female protagonist's situation, but they fell into each other step by step. In the end, both husband and wife transformed into Batman. The male protagonist was even a succubus descended from the sky, allowing the female protagonist to understand the feeling of love.
Pure love, punishing evil and eradicating adultery, a long and thin line of love, worthy of [send heart]
A very touching book. The language description is concise, accurate and full of pictures.
This is actually a book on Tomato, which is very shocking
The flexible two-person perspective opens up two feelings of a movie. The playful she and the desperate him also slightly change the character's psychology from two angles, and merge bit by bit.
There are no lengthy narratives in language, only condensed vocabulary to express daily life.
There is no procrastination in the plot, and the progress and retreat are flexible. The two people's emotions have evolved from using each other to being difficult to let go. There is a very direct conflict. The narrative is great and the overall length is moderate.
To sum up, this book moved me very much. The current score is 6.7 And my inner score is 9.8. The inner emotional changes can be expressed in a richer and less abrupt way with the help of objects. The hysterical, cold and indifferent behavioral narrative and the intensity of the joke can be higher.
In addition, the ending is my favorite type. The simple words show warmth and hidden possibilities, which is great.
It is a very interesting first-person dual perspective novel. In the early stage, you can really feel the anti-social personality characteristics of the female protagonist and her desire to control the male protagonist. In the later stage, the relationship between the two gradually changes to the point where the male protagonist accepts the female protagonist's special way of punishing the evildoers, which brings the male protagonist's emotion of being inseparable from the female protagonist. From using each other to truly falling in love with each other, you can really feel the ordinary companionship step by step, and you can feel that each other is by your side, redeem each other, and gain new life.
It's a good novel. It's the first time I've seen such a dual-perspective novel. The writing is also good. The process of the male protagonist from the initial resistance to the later adaptation to the final love for the female protagonist is very sweet and not boring. The plot of the couple punishing evil and promoting good is quite enjoyable.
The plot has a tight rhythm, delicate descriptions, three-dimensional and full characters, concise and appropriate descriptions of details and environments. Each plot has a corresponding meaning, no nonsense, and has the potential of a literary novel [Love] [Love] [Love]
The ending is perfect, it's pure love, and we are still both clean. From the beginning, the hero knew the heroine's anti-social personality to the subsequent transformation. It's quite interesting. The hero can't escape no matter what, the heroine is very fond of me, but the two strong characters are perfect. The ending is not bad, and I can't write it anymore. After all, the hero and the heroine are old, but if you write like this, can there be a side story and something sweet [laughing]
After reading it for a while, I still gave it full marks. This novel is indeed very novel, but it feels like it was polished with AI, but it does need to be polished. If I just write it by myself, this article will be very monotonous, [shy][shy][shy]
I think this book uses the unpopular technique (at least on Tomato). It is very attractive and novel at the beginning. The plot is also good, but the emotion is sometimes not in place, but this book is still excellent. This is a novel that can easily retain people. I hope the author will get better and better.
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Looking at the name, um, yandere. Looking at the contents of the first few pictures, um, it seems to be similar to what I saw before. Looking further, um, it's not what I thought. If I hadn't clicked in and watched it, I would have really missed it.
I'm not good at expressing myself, but a good book is well written, very delicate, and moisturizes things quietly.
Very nice
The narrative of the male and female protagonists is novel from the first-person perspective. The content of the unit story is good and some of the emotions are real. However, the fight with the gangster personally felt that it was biased, so I skipped it. Overall, it is worth watching.
The writing is very interesting, it happens to be my favorite multi-perspective, and it describes the twisted and reasonable emotions very well. Love can be the foundation of the relationship between husband and wife, unconditional trust, accomplice, the right snap, and the parts that fit each other can also be. A stable and ordinary life itself reveals some happiness that is self-evident but easy for people to ignore and forget.
I think this book is quite interesting. The heroine has a very high IQ. It's not the kind of crappy plot. In the back, the heroine breaks down in various ways if she doesn't move. She is always calm and has no character breakdown. There are only a few kissing scenes hahahahahaha, that's all.
Treasure, don't be fooled by the title! ! ! ! !
It's really interesting,
It's interesting to see the male and female protagonists falling in love [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]
I read this book in one sitting after I found it. There's not much to say, it's so good to watch, and the various plots are very reasonable. I just hope that Xiaobao will not be adopted. The two protagonists and heroines are better or it is their own child (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)
I got married like a demon hunter, love first, it's a rare type [face covering]
This book is okay, the writing is interesting and worth reading.
I read the latest chapter in one go. To be honest, I quite like this work. Especially the twisted and touching emotions between the male and female protagonists. Seeing a cold and incapable of empathy being warmed by a pair of warm hands used to save people, the male protagonist gradually fell into this twisted love from his original fear. But what I like most is actually the author's writing style, the undercurrent hidden under the calm sea. Under the author's not so gorgeous words, I can feel the turbulent and surging emotions. Sometimes the drizzle is silent, sometimes it's like a stormy sea. Of course, there are some areas that I feel are slightly lacking, and that is the events that connect the entire book. Compared to other places in this book, I felt that these unit events themselves were too bland and did not even have many highlights. If it is used as a tool for the emotional development of the male and female protagonists, I think it is barely qualified. But aside from this part, their own story is not enough to support me to continue reading. Of course, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I hope the author will write better and better. This book is almost finished. I hope there will be an ending that makes me feel deeply [heartfelt]. I am also looking forward to the author's next book.
It's so well written. I feel that books with this theme are really rare. It feels quite unique to have this new theme in the current yandere novels. The author's writing skills are really good in characterization. The subtle differences in the personalities of the male and female protagonists are also very well written. The author is really good at depicting the growth curve of the characters from the details of this quiet life. This book records the process of true love between men and women, which is also addictive. How depressing the front is, how sweet the back is. The writing is so sophisticated that I doubt it is the vest of a certain female channel boss, haha. What is derived from the character arc is the choice between procedural justice and factual justice. The two complement each other and not only promote the plot but also complete the fullness of the character's personality. All in all, Tomato is a really amazing book that made me stay up until four in the morning to read it. I really hope the author will update it more [crying] [crying] And I did see some book friends suggesting changing the title of the book, and I agreed with it. When I first saw this name, I thought it was the moderator who called me, but it was actually a bit overwhelming. The author writes so well that he will definitely succeed. Come on [send heart] [send heart]
An interesting book, I didn't say it was very, very good, but it did make me feel fresh and interesting. The development of the story is similar to Revenge Taxi in Korea and Suspect Tracking in the United States. It is a unit story, and then the relationship between the male and female protagonists slowly changes from these unit stories. The two of them really feel very good about each other and are looking forward to the feeling that the two of them really and completely love each other (from the kind of scheming against each other to the people who love each other, it is really interesting, that is, the so-called transformation from chess pieces to wives/husbands)
I would like to give a reminder to the cunning audience. I personally think there is a chance that AI was used to assist the creation of this book. I even think it was not DS, but maybe chatGPT or Gemini. Some of the language reads a little subtly artificial, such as the use of the second person in metaphors to give examples, or the slight recurrence of plots between different chapters. But what is certain is that it will not affect the reading experience of ordinary readers. After all, this is Tomato, not a literary salon. However, this cold pseudo-human feeling perfectly blended with the subject matter of the book, just like a cat owner trying cat poop coffee for the first time, so I started reading it after lunch and accidentally read it now. The plot seemed to have quite some potential, but it was too cold and lacked interest, so I left it at that. I'm a little tired. Let's go take a bath. I wish you all a happy reading.
This is a very good book. I have rarely read this type of book on Tomato. The author's character creation is very vivid. Well, some scenes in it can also be seen that the author's writing style is quite good, especially some inner emotional activities, which are very vivid. No matter from all aspects, this is a very good novel. Although there are quite few chapters so far, I think it won't be too bad in the future. The romance between the male and female protagonists is very natural, without too many forced pieces, and the development of the plot is also very attractive to watch. The only flaw is probably the name given by the author [facepalm]. To be honest, when I first saw the name, I thought it was a bad book. Its status is probably about the same as the Dragon King novel, maybe even a little lower [facepalm]. After all, the name does make people think of the content of that crappy street, and this is a new book without a rating, which makes people doubt the content. , I accidentally clicked on it and took a look at the introduction. Although it was very short, it aroused my interest, so I read it for a while. Unexpectedly, the more I read, the more shocked I became. I found that it was completely different from what I imagined. The content and plot are very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard and speed up the update. The author's writing method of narrating the story from multiple perspectives is also very novel, which also gives full play to the author's detailed and vivid description of inner emotions. It is highly recommended to read [Flowing Kiss]
At first, I read it because of the more interesting subject matter, and then when I read the previous chapters, to be honest, I still felt (my personal feeling) that the first few chapters were not particularly outstanding, but it still felt a bit routine, and I could still watch it halfway through. But the more I read later, I realized that the author of WC is very good at writing and describing the subtle changes, the changes in the character's mentality. Especially when it reaches more than 40 chapters, there are extremely appropriate descriptions of the environment, psychology, and details, and the slightest changes are carved just right. And the creation of characters is full and vivid. Just like that, using words to touch the deepest and softest places in your heart bit by bit makes me deeply moved. Here I still want to say that the author is amazing, come on ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾
I didn't expect to find such a novel in 🍅, a novel with multiple narrative carriers, or a novel with dual first-person limited knowledge perspectives [smile] I can only say that the way of writing is good for niche audiences, and the sense of substitution is too strong [please taste carefully] The secret is revealed step by step, and you have to face your true inner thoughts, and then become accomplices. The author's writing style is really concise and can focus on the key points! It feels like the reincarnation of a foreign station veteran🍅 [punch] All in all, nice looking! Update soon!
I have just read Chapter 20 now. The writing and plot are very good, but why are there so few people watching it? The author may consider changing the title or cover of the book. Such a beautiful book cannot be buried, and updates must not be discontinued. Come on!
A niche treasure book. When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was some kind of urban romance novel, but when I came in, I came across a story about an anti-heroic urban elite couple who fight against violence and save each other [face covering]. It was also interesting that the author switched to the first-person perspective of the heroine.
The writing style and narrative angle are very novel in Tomato. Although the multi-perspective switching is a bit frequent, it cannot hide that this is an excellent work. The connection between the unit stories is also very smooth, and the writing is also very good.
I was just curious at first, but after reading it, I found that the language is plain... Accurate, the writing is good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the dual-perspective narration is also very detailed. In terms of genre, it is more of a notebook-style record, providing a novel reading experience. This is the first time I've seen it on Tomato. It's more literary and worth a read.
The absolute strength, the resulting loneliness, teaches you that the person you love is... I thought it was a story about a crazy yandere who ran away from her, but in fact it was not at all. I watched the male and female protagonists scheming against each other from the first acquaintance, to the male protagonist discovering the secret and knowing the female protagonist's situation, but they fell into each other step by step. In the end, both husband and wife transformed into Batman. The male protagonist was even a succubus descended from the sky, allowing the female protagonist to understand the feeling of love. Pure love, punishing evil and eradicating adultery, a long and thin line of love, worthy of [send heart]
A very touching book. The language description is concise, accurate and full of pictures. This is actually a book on Tomato, which is very shocking The flexible two-person perspective opens up two feelings of a movie. The playful she and the desperate him also slightly change the character's psychology from two angles, and merge bit by bit. There are no lengthy narratives in language, only condensed vocabulary to express daily life. There is no procrastination in the plot, and the progress and retreat are flexible. The two people's emotions have evolved from using each other to being difficult to let go. There is a very direct conflict. The narrative is great and the overall length is moderate. To sum up, this book moved me very much. The current score is 6.7 And my inner score is 9.8. The inner emotional changes can be expressed in a richer and less abrupt way with the help of objects. The hysterical, cold and indifferent behavioral narrative and the intensity of the joke can be higher. In addition, the ending is my favorite type. The simple words show warmth and hidden possibilities, which is great.
It is a very interesting first-person dual perspective novel. In the early stage, you can really feel the anti-social personality characteristics of the female protagonist and her desire to control the male protagonist. In the later stage, the relationship between the two gradually changes to the point where the male protagonist accepts the female protagonist's special way of punishing the evildoers, which brings the male protagonist's emotion of being inseparable from the female protagonist. From using each other to truly falling in love with each other, you can really feel the ordinary companionship step by step, and you can feel that each other is by your side, redeem each other, and gain new life.
It's a good novel. It's the first time I've seen such a dual-perspective novel. The writing is also good. The process of the male protagonist from the initial resistance to the later adaptation to the final love for the female protagonist is very sweet and not boring. The plot of the couple punishing evil and promoting good is quite enjoyable.
The plot has a tight rhythm, delicate descriptions, three-dimensional and full characters, concise and appropriate descriptions of details and environments. Each plot has a corresponding meaning, no nonsense, and has the potential of a literary novel [Love] [Love] [Love]
The ending is perfect, it's pure love, and we are still both clean. From the beginning, the hero knew the heroine's anti-social personality to the subsequent transformation. It's quite interesting. The hero can't escape no matter what, the heroine is very fond of me, but the two strong characters are perfect. The ending is not bad, and I can't write it anymore. After all, the hero and the heroine are old, but if you write like this, can there be a side story and something sweet [laughing]
After reading it for a while, I still gave it full marks. This novel is indeed very novel, but it feels like it was polished with AI, but it does need to be polished. If I just write it by myself, this article will be very monotonous, [shy][shy][shy]
I think this book uses the unpopular technique (at least on Tomato). It is very attractive and novel at the beginning. The plot is also good, but the emotion is sometimes not in place, but this book is still excellent. This is a novel that can easily retain people. I hope the author will get better and better.
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Looking at the name, um, yandere. Looking at the contents of the first few pictures, um, it seems to be similar to what I saw before. Looking further, um, it's not what I thought. If I hadn't clicked in and watched it, I would have really missed it. I'm not good at expressing myself, but a good book is well written, very delicate, and moisturizes things quietly. Very nice
The narrative of the male and female protagonists is novel from the first-person perspective. The content of the unit story is good and some of the emotions are real. However, the fight with the gangster personally felt that it was biased, so I skipped it. Overall, it is worth watching.
The writing is very interesting, it happens to be my favorite multi-perspective, and it describes the twisted and reasonable emotions very well. Love can be the foundation of the relationship between husband and wife, unconditional trust, accomplice, the right snap, and the parts that fit each other can also be. A stable and ordinary life itself reveals some happiness that is self-evident but easy for people to ignore and forget.
I think this book is quite interesting. The heroine has a very high IQ. It's not the kind of crappy plot. In the back, the heroine breaks down in various ways if she doesn't move. She is always calm and has no character breakdown. There are only a few kissing scenes hahahahahaha, that's all.
Treasure, don't be fooled by the title! ! ! ! !
It's really interesting,
It's interesting to see the male and female protagonists falling in love [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]
I read this book in one sitting after I found it. There's not much to say, it's so good to watch, and the various plots are very reasonable. I just hope that Xiaobao will not be adopted. The two protagonists and heroines are better or it is their own child (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)
I got married like a demon hunter, love first, it's a rare type [face covering]
This book is okay, the writing is interesting and worth reading.