A Civilian Trainer in the Elf World

I was misunderstood by the name and thought it was an orthodox dark novel, but I didn't expect it to be a more realistic normal fanfic. The protagonist is a bit selfish but has a good outlook on life, and getting along with Pokémon is very warm. The writing is also okay, overall it's pretty good.

The novel written by Leziren seems to be very light and humorous, but it also has a trace of rigor. There are still some problems with the writing power and some plots. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. I hope the author can continue to work hard to create and look forward to your progress [Like] Very good at making jokes, very interesting [Like]

From scratch to now, the Pokémon novels I read are better written. The protagonist does not lose principles and emotions while focusing on his own interests. I hope that the protagonist can be portrayed better in the future. The protagonist of the bounty hunter genre is still difficult to portray well. I hope the author can maintain the writing quality in the future, and I hope the novel will become popular.

Ps: This book review contains spoilers, please avoid it if you mind. The rating of this book is definitely quite low, I think it is at least around 8.5. First, the character of the protagonist is not bad. He treats Pokémon very well. There is no such thing as coercion or inducement. At the same time, although he is selfish, the "family" relationship between him and Dr. Oak is very delicate. I feel that the character of the protagonist is more like a normal person. He is self-centered in most things, but at the same time he is considerate of others and not extreme. Secondly, when the protagonist first appeared, the initial Pokémon Heiluga was at a quasi-gym level. It was at a stage where it had the ability to protect itself and room for improvement. I think it was very good so that it would not be powerless in battle and the level would increase quickly (I think that when writing elf novels, one should quickly have a Pokémon that can dominate the scene). However, the protagonist's description of the battle was less after Chapter 90, and the focus was mainly on the main plot. Third, I think Dr. Oak in this book is very well created. Compared with the invincible and omnipotent characters in other elven literature, Dr. Oak in this book will be confused and hesitant. He will not be able to completely break up because of Xiaomao and his students. It makes people feel that he is a human being and not a god. Fourth, the current main hostile forces in this book are the Thunderstorm Team (which seems to have bad intentions towards the electric beasts). The main enemies in the alliance are the Silver Company (yes, the company that was quickly brushed by the Rockets) and the Junsajoy family (these two are normal, after all, the two civilian protagonists will either win over or fight in the beginning) Fifth, there are no mythical beasts in this book so far, which I feel is quite good. After all, as soon as this thing appeared, major forces were fighting, and the protagonist would basically have something because of his lack of strength: "I am so insignificant", "I can't do anything", or he can only be a bastard. All in all, this book is an underrated and good work so far.

Raise a Bangela, I found it in the special topic, and the book I recommend is yours. The author keeps one

The nest needs to be inspected - there is no problem with the license At present, there are no poisonous points. It is reasonable to drag Gou Hao out and give him a lesson in the middle. It can be connected with a quasi-elf doctor (although the protagonist will not need it later when he becomes a disciple of Damu), but it is indeed reasonable at that point in time.

A very heart-warming Pokémon story, with a more realistic style but more of it is beautiful, a rare and good work. One star is deducted because it claims to have zero AI.

I think it's pretty good, but the more I look at the back, the stronger the AI ​​flavor becomes. It's hard to describe the feeling of AI writing, but it will let people know that it was written by AI, which is a very awkward feeling.

It's not so much a dark novel as it is more realistic, with a bounty hunter starting the game, and the common plug-in is to check the elf status bar; The initial elf Heiluga, as of Chapter 150 that I have read, the team has expanded to a baby bear that can evolve into He Yue. The baby bear's father is a bear, which is probably the test product of Team Rocket's plan to capture the three divine birds, Magneto, Charmander, Squirtle, and Croaking Frog; The writing is quite fluent, the descriptions of the characters are quite detailed, and the supporting characters are also well written, with flesh and blood, and the Pokémon each have their own personalities. The interaction between people and Pokémon is also well written. It is written by a family member, which is different from ordinary Pokémon articles written about pets; There are not many battle descriptions, but a few battles are well written. Overall, it feels like reading a comic special; Personally, the current shortcoming is that it uses AI? Not sure, it reads much better than the junk literature straight out of AI, but some of the characters' psychological and behavioral descriptions are very similar to those polished by AI, but they are still within the acceptable range; The comprehensive evaluation is given to Liangcao+

How did the author manage to write three chapters on a shoestring [Like]

Nice! The author also often adds pictures, which is very friendly.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a dynamic Pokémon novel. It writes a vivid protagonist's story in the background of Pokémon. It no longer follows the main line of animation, but a very comfortable and passionate Pokémon life. Dr. Oki, loyal [cry][cry][cry][cry]

To be honest, I feel it's pretty good. There aren't any obvious bad points so far. It's not even close to a 9-point high-quality product, but it can at least get an 8-point rating. The reason why the current rating is so low is probably because there are too few people to review it [Chigua]

It's a really good book. The real-life background is quite rigorous. The setting is very good. It also has the warmth of Pokémon. It's very well combined. It's really not easy. Moreover, the character creation is very successful. The protagonist's arc is quite full, charming and not annoying. This book is very comfortable to read.

Yes, it is logical and can be written in text

The writing is quite good, not toxic at all, and it's normal that there are fewer people at the beginning of the book.

I read it as a special world view, it's okay

It looks good, but it's too little and not enough to read. Come on, author!

It's okay, but a bit dark

I think it's quite interesting, because I don't like to read dark novels, and this novel is not a pure dark novel. The protagonist has a good outlook on life, so it's quite interesting to read. Such a good novel deserves such a low rating

Do you have CP? Hope not

He's pretty good-looking and interesting.

Nice Pokémon fanfic

Very good Pokémon, not so much story about levels and skills, only detailed life and battles

It looks great, but is there a female protagonist?

I am super, this novel is really well written! The writing is really delicate, and the battle scenes are described with great tension. The protagonist is very cerebral, but has the purest sincerity and love for his family in the Pokémon world. The description of the bond is very good. It's really good and beautiful. Come on, the author. The rating is only temporary. Someone will definitely see that your writing is very good. Come on, come on, come on!

Very good author. This is the Pokémon world in my mind. It's not too dark, but it's not as beautiful as a pure utopia either [laughs] [blowing kiss]

Come on, the writing is still good.

Give me a five-star support first!

Looks good, cheers for the author [Like]