The End************

The second creation of The End King has no system, no low-level colloquial sentences, and no perfect male protagonists. It only has delicate descriptions of emotions, psychological actions, and smooth plots (there are also cute little comments from the author [Adoration] [Sending Hearts] Xiao Chen's emotional line is written quickly) The main lines run parallel daily, smooth and beautiful, but where did Xiaoxi go? @

Well, overall it's pretty good, but sometimes I feel like I don't have much motivation to watch it. Why, I think it's because the plot is too bland. For me, this book is currently too focused on the plot, and could use more description of the emotional arcs of some characters. To put it simply, it is to make readers look forward to the sweet daily life of the administrator and Perika next time. Anyway, it is to create a sense of expectation, otherwise some readers who do not like to watch plots may not be able to continue reading.

Hello readers, I am the author who is undergoing a major revision. In the early morning of February 11th, Beijing time, I started a major revision of this book. I am taking all readers' requests into consideration. For example, make the plot settings of the novel and the game more relevant, and inject more emotional lines into the novel. Please be patient and wait for a while, I will come up with a second-generation fanfic that will satisfy you as much as possible [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The administrator's creation is much stronger than the Minato Penguin I control. My Minato Penguin can't climb and can only stretch 80m by pulling the wire. The real administrator directly intimidated the wire and stretched it 114514m. He directly turned on flight mode and held explosives, which frightened 2000 anchor points to death.

Personally I think it's well written and can be treated as a parallel world thing.

It's just that the Wolf Guard doesn't feel right, but the rest of it looks pretty good.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Emotions are delicate and not abrupt. The quality is so high. The writing is very pure. Sparkling like water on an autumn night.

I feel that the character creation of my Silly Dragon is a bit wrong, but I think the plot is okay. I will give 5 stars to Kangkang Silly Dragon later [Thinking] That's it!

It feels very nice.

It's really good, worth seeing

It has a very light prose style, and the writing style is very poetic. It is a rare high-quality work by foreign persimmons [Chigua]

It's a rare book where the main character doesn't travel through time, and the writing is delicate.