I Asked You to Make a Game, and You Made a Corrupt Official Simulator?

Old Shennong's objective evaluation (children who know me should be able to see this from many poisonous/new book reviews~ ๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) Overall, it looks pretty good. Some book friends said that there are more hints. This problem does exist, but it has been corrected a lot later. This is actually not a poisonous point. The background in the book is also given. The knowledge reserves of those in the world view of this book are indeed so incredible. Overall, it looks pretty cool However, there are also small problems, and they are not few. 1. The player's "resurrection" is not handled well. For example, when I read the chapter about Da Wei, the heroine (the landlord, let's call her the heroine for now) died, and then crawled out of the ruins. This was a small bug. In the city defense battle, the resurrection method and death penalty after the player died were very confusing. 2. The heroine's setting in the first few chapters is very classic. Yes, classic, very classic. This little point is actually harmless, so you don't need to read it (the heroine's setting is quite cute) 3. Update ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah I read it all at once, hey, I am not excited to read anymore, is it gone? [Pouts] In short, I hope the author can improve many things related to players. Another one, "gun stock"? Many readers will misunderstand it as the butt of a firearm. Some people say that AI has polished it. I think this may only account for about 40%. After all, AI will not make some low-level mistakes (I have read too many AI articles) [laughing] In fact, it can be read even if it is polished. There is no need to resist, as long as it looks good [laughing] It's free, and it will be very tiring to ask for so much [laughing]

Overall, it's pretty good. Although it's most likely that the author used AI to edit it and then polished it, but fortunately there's nothing bad about it [eating melon]

The plot is good, there are some traces of AI polishing, but it's not heavy. It should be based on the word count. You can look forward to it. The plot is quite fast. The author carefully thought about the plot.

Although there is a protagonist (author) in the early stage who plays the plot in Bang Lin Xiaoke. But I have to say that the plot is really going well. Narrative games are very empathetic, which is the primary advantage. Fine.

It's quite good. It's very good in a sense. It allows people to see history from another angle. I think someone has an opinion on the character configuration, whether the AI ​​has an opinion or not. You don't care what he does. If you have a tricky taste, if you don't read this or that, how many books can suit you? Let's talk about these small problems, not to mention that there are no problems with the character. It is also said that the high-scoring and long-term reviews are from the navy. If the navy is invited, why doesn't the author invite hundreds of them to brush up the ratings? What about his brain?

To be honest, this novel is just like its title. The content is very in-depth and depicts the heaviness of history. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

With more talented students, writing about modern times will definitely be exciting [laughter] The Qing Dynasty has been written, and the coming has come, let's also write about Xiao Wang [laughing evilly]

The author is awesome. This novel of yours will be banned soon. When will you become mainstream?

Finished reading! I like it very much, but later on it started to feel like it was just a visual experience of traveling into the Qing Dynasty and changing history. Author, are you lost in writing, or is this the outline?

The idea is very good, and it's pretty good-looking, but it only has the wisdom of the players, which feels too thin. I want to see the blood of the locals and the passion to save the country. They collide with each other, and the players and the locals twist into a rope to save the country, which makes me even more excited.

The subject matter is somewhat novel, and there are quite few poisonous points. The protagonist's performance in the early stage is amazing, and she is also the president of the company. As for Lin Xiaoke, she is very powerful. She and the netizens in her live broadcast room worked hard to highlight the protagonist's aura, and by the way, guaranteed the protagonist's basic necessities, food, housing, transportation, house, car and appearance for the rest of his life. Then it disappeared. Every time I see her speak, it is like seeing a growing embryo, and she can also attract more customers for the hospital (I haven't finished watching it yet)

Our country is a large multi-ethnic country with a long history, at least dating back to the Xia Dynasty. There are traces of this, but there are too many traces that are hard to find. We must be strong, in order for our descendants to no longer be bullied by others, for our land to no longer be disturbed by war, for our descendants to no longer be slaves, and for us to survive in the end, so we must be strong, and at least we must survive at any cost.

Although I read the reviews and said there are traces of AI, I feel that this book is really interesting in terms of subject matter and the reality reflected in the concept. It is not mindless and cool, but it will arouse thinking. So whether it is AI or purely handmade, I accept it. Five stars are dedicated to my review. Is this book really not going to be removed from the shelves? [Chigua]

I can only give it four stars. I did have a feeling at the beginning. I thought I had finally found a book that didn't describe a girl with long legs and black stockings. But in the end, there was no description of Lin Xiaoke at all. Even the next dozens of chapters were all about war. It was like being transported to a different world, with no realistic description at all. Games are games, but you can't always stay in the game, right?

The content is okay. As a senior bookworm, I have a relatively high vision of reading. Many books basically just read the beginning, and you can guess the rest of the content, but it is basically impossible to read. This book can keep me reading for a while. Although it is a rare good book, I have only read part of it so far, but I hope the author can maintain it in the future.

Reading this novel reminded me of what happened to me in the past. In the past, someone spread rumors about me on the Internet to defraud me, even though I didn't know that person at all, and also in real life.

To destroy the innocence ruthlessly

The plot rhythm is okay,

It feels pretty good-looking

Good reviews and conscience have always been luxuries. In the old cannibalistic society, kindness was the original sin.

I like this book very much. Good luck to the author.

It looks good so far and can be classified into the second level.

It looks pretty good, support the author

Those who write about games combine it with history. Not bad. Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Okay, looking forward to the comic series coming out. I don't look forward to it in short plays, people can't act out that feeling. Click on the text of the novel and click [Make a Wish to Adapt] in the lower right corner.

The writing is very good, why is the rating so low?

The way of death is a bit cruel.

The game story is well written

Okay, okay, super pretty

God's reversal, God's plot