[Zenless Zone Zero / Genshin Impact / Honkai: Star Rail fanfiction + System + fan-created story]
I'm a new author, so please be kind!
“My name is Jiang Ye. Because I'm called Jiang Ye, my name is Jiang Ye.”
While playing a game, Jiang Ye missed a step and fell straight into the world of Zenless Zone Zero, where he became the ancestor of Yunkui Mountain and gained a System panel. Not only could he cross the sea of stars to reach Teyvat, he could also travel to the train.
“Um, my dear disciple... Uh, could you wait a moment? We're master and disciple. This isn't right!”
Yi Xuan's cheeks flushed slightly. “Master, let me be the disobedient disciple who seduces her master!”
“Yi Jiang, come get your sister off me! And the rest of you, too!” Jiang Ye looked at Yi Jiang, Ling, and the others. Ling pretended not to see, while Yi Jiang smiled and said, “Master, for my sister's future, I'll take my leave!”
“Wait, what?!”
I think you need to change the soul-piercing thing. It's better now. Well, the circle seems to be relatively exclusive. Although I don't care, the story just needs to be good. It's a sinking market anyway. Why do they think about this thing? It all depends on the story. Of course, this is just a small opinion. If you are an ambush writer, then you'd better come as early as possible. The pace is faster now, and you can probably bury it within ten pictures. Otherwise, some readers, well, they will leave a negative review without seeing the ambush writer section. I have seen this kind of thing too many times. You can also add some small daily details, otherwise it will be easy to finish writing, especially in this type of game that has not yet been completed. It is easy to come up with some new things, new concepts, or the previous things have been changed.
Overall, I tried my best!
My writing skills need to be improved, keep up the good work
Although the pace of the first ten chapters is slightly faster and some of the plots are a bit stiff, the author's writing skills have been significantly improved in the later chapters. The size of the story is no longer important. The protagonist travels back and forth in the world of the three games (Genshin Impact, Zone Zero, Collapse Star Railroad). There are no obvious chapters in the story. Readers who want to read the original storyline are asked to play the game. Overall, this book is quite in line with my appetite.
Generally speaking, you can look at the beginning
Good but a bit fast
The writing is good, I find it interesting anyway
Why do people think it's not good to send a girl as a gift? 🤔 I think it's okay. I think this book is pretty good. Keep up the good work, author. I look forward to your wonderful performance in the future. 😘
Can the author give me the cover? 🙏🙏🙏
I can take my apprentices on a trip later.