I Rebuilt the Underworld in a Comic World Through an Online Forum

(Fans, please don't be disrespectful, I just want to express my personal feelings) Advantages: The setting is novel. The male protagonist's ability to draw cards is connected to the underworld. He should have a hidden identity. The writing is good. The author will also write down the settings of the underworld when he has something to say, so there is no need to check it out in private. Disadvantages: Maybe my understanding of non-CP is different from that of the author. In the fantasy world, the male protagonist imagines himself marrying his senior sister and having children. I was really shocked. The writing was quite detailed, as if the male protagonist really fell in love with her. The male protagonist's character does not feel like a person who can be tempted, it is a bit OOC. The senior sister also appeared once, and the comment was: There is a second level in 666. It can be seen from this that readers don't like this plot setting. When meeting with the 126th chief later, if he wanted to highlight her charm, why must he say: If he (the male protagonist) is also from this class, he might also become one of her (126th chief) followers. Well, I don't know how to evaluate it. I hope people who come in later can read the book reviews. Basically, those who reviewed it with bad reviews abandoned it for this reason. Finally, I wish the author good health, all the best, all his wishes come true, peace and joy, and readers can also find books they like. Let me say a few more words. It seems that the original author of the book cover is not allowed to be used. If the author sees the comments, please change it. This is an infringement.

So far, there are no surprises, the plot is written smoothly, and the writing is OK. The protagonist should have a second identity and some special experiences that are not written out (based on some foreshadowing and his character guesses, treat them rationally), but there are too few. The author will work hard to update! I'll save time to watch it again ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

It's so beautiful, shocking and delicious, and the protagonist is very enjoyable to watch🤤🤤🤤There are no outstanding points so far. I am also looking forward to the next story of the protagonist group, what kind of bonds and growth, and I think the setting of this underworld is also very good, the setting of Si Ye being completely decent is also very good, and Si Ye's baby also has personal charm and is very suitable for being the chief. Seniors from other classes also have a special bond with each other. And the author actually adds three chapters every day, which is so touching. Sometimes the plot will end at a particularly critical place, which makes me really scratch my head and look forward to the sun rising tomorrow🥹🥹🥹 Anyway, just continue to stay in my bookshelf🥰🥰🥰

Already tied [Let's talk about lightning protection: Chapter 27's fantasy has a storyline where the protagonist gets married and has children. Chapter 31 mentions a little bit about the fantasy of chapter 27, but so far only these two chapters have it (the author's chapter title is marked with a warning) (if you mind, you can skip it)] So far, it seems that the writing is good, the group portraits are also well set, and each character has his own characteristics. Cheers, author of a great book with potential [Blow Kiss] A group of bitter gourd people

It's good to watch, but it's a bit lacking. I found some foreshadowing, I don't know if it's right, and there's no obvious villain or undercover agent. Si Ye's character really poked me. An ordinary person who wants to be ordinary is inexplicably involved in such and such things. Just like in Huang Liang's dream, he could have been very, very happy and perfect, but he seems to have no chance. Ye Wuchen should be responsible for the role of force. Currently, there are a few tool men. The original protagonist group all has a few tool men. I feel that Qin Yue has more roles, but it is all to liven up the atmosphere. Bai Yu, I feel that the author is a little partial to him. You can see his not-so-good past under the mysterious veil. After all, what kind of person can go through fire and water for another person, or even give up his life. Chen Youming, Xiaoming's classmate, I thought he was a tool, but his performance during the assessment made me think he was not, and he felt like a dark reserve.

If you are looking for pure no cp, you can first experience Chapter 27. If you can accept it, you can read it. If you can't accept it, abandon it earlier. Especially for mental mysophobia. To refute a comment that thinks mental mysophobia is exaggerated and pretentious. Since I have read no cp, I want to be clean mentally and physically. Please respect it if you don't understand. Especially those who say that they have never eaten fine rice bran, and the thunder point is too low. Those comments about the matter just like to kidnap from the moral high ground.

It's super, super good-looking. The current plot has also reached a very tense point. I'm looking forward to the next plot. Os, I really want to see Si Ye die (I'm guilty). All in all, it's very awesome. Yes, there are no words to describe my current mood. I'm very excited. However, the plot is also very awesome. Yeah, right

Regarding the plot in the comment area that the protagonist gets married and has children in the if line, it is actually a fantasy. The main environment is about what kind of life the protagonist would live if he were an ordinary person. I think this is a good foreshadowing, which enriches the image of the protagonist. Moreover, the name of the person who married the protagonist in the fantasy did not appear, but was replaced by "senior sister". This not only did not affect the beauty of the story, but made me feel that Si Ye was more attractive. It's really beautiful! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

Very nice to look at. I personally feel that there is no CP, because I understand that if there is CP, CP will run through the whole text or the whole story. In the comment area, there is a chapter that has the dream of getting married and having children, which I personally can accept. After all, if I think about it differently, if there is no system, if there is no savior, the original life may be like this, live an ordinary life, or this can be regarded as a way to make up for regrets. However, if you don't like it, I suggest you skip that chapter. Personally, I don't think it will have any impact. Si Xiaoye is so cute, so cute, I love her so much. The author and others have also done a good job in shaping the characters, which are very beautiful. I feel that each one has their own characteristics. I also look forward to the appearance of Black and White Impermanence and other card characters in the future. I hope the author will update more frequently and take a rest.

It's very beautiful, but there are really too few new articles, which makes me feel helpless. The protagonist is pretty good, and the protagonist group is also pretty good. It's a group portrait, although I don't understand Bai Yu's feelings for the protagonist? (I read in the comment section that he was talking about hating Haiqingtian. Actually, I don't quite understand what he is thinking. I can't understand the person the author wrote about. I really can't figure out Bai Yu. He wants to get the protagonist involved in order to change his destiny? Of course, the author didn't It is the interpretation of other readers in the comment area. We don't know if their opinions are correct, although it seems quite reasonable when I think about it. Is this the legendary Riddler? The author's writing is very good. I was really immersed in the Riddler's puzzle. Maybe I am not too intellectual when reading articles? (((φ(◎ロ◎;)φ))))