The Immortal Ancestor: I Personally Created the Myth of Cultivation

It's good to read, I was attracted by the first chapter, but it's too little, it's too early😢😱😭 The protagonist Li Changsheng currently has that kind of Taoist style. The author roughly follows the style of Honghuang. It is very good. The current quality is very good. This is not a brainless pretense, the protagonist is Taoist, very wise, the pioneer who leads the cultivation of immortality, and will always be ahead of everyone in this world. This world is invincible, and the protagonist is the driving force behind the scenes, promoting the development of the world. "My" name is Li Changsheng, I am immortal... "The ants look up to me, thinking I'm a fairy; when I look down at the ants, it's just a show." "I look at the cause and effect of the heaven and earth in this world, just like a chess player holding a piece. Wherever the piece falls, all living beings are players in the game." "The opportunity for everyone to win is just a game of chess set by me. When to close the net depends on my mood." "I am neither at the top nor at the bottom. I am in the middle of the game and can see both the top and the bottom."

As of now, it can only be regarded as good, and the data in many places is messy. For example, when the protagonist killed the emperor, you said that you wanted to collect the 300 years of dragon luck from the Yan Dynasty, but according to the previous article, it was only 80 years and 100 years after the founding of the country. None, where did the 300 years of dragon luck come from? If you say that the total of 300 years including the previous dynasty is 300 years, then I can understand it, but you are not right at all, and when you first entered Yaowang Valley, where did those thousands of people in the world come from, where did that bag come from? You said in the comment area that the first experimental product of the protagonist King of Northern Liang was spread, but you didn't say that in the article. You didn't mention it at all, which affected the perception.

The front is straight and looks great, but the back is really ugly. I don't know why you want to write about the Heavenly Punishment Eye when you break through the realm. Isn't it enough to overcome the calamity thunder? Do you want to write about the prehistoric world? Do you write about karma or something? You can say that when cultivators kill people and have karma to break through the realm, it is a very strong thunder. I don't understand one thing. Why do you sit down and write, but there is no such thing as the way of heaven, and no one is bound to die under the way of heaven, and there will be some life. It is possible that your enemy kills you like this, and a powerful person passes by and saves you. It is also possible that your enemy suddenly died violently, everything is possible, there is no mortality, and the punishment of heaven you made is not neurotic.

It was well written, but I posted a long paragraph and it was deleted. There is also the awe-inspiring righteousness of Confucianism and Taoism. The awe-inspiring righteousness in this book still uses the power of heaven and earth. This is also normal. After all, the protagonist of this book was a low-level martial artist before he came, but the more he thinks about it, the more disgusting he becomes. The so-called awe-inspiring righteousness, the so-called reason, can only be called reason if some people are willing to listen, but it is just barking when no one is willing to listen. But the reason of ordinary people is reason, and the reason of others' extraordinary is not reason? There is also the so-called establishing a heart for heaven and earth. Although it seems very irritating, it gives me goosebumps. In the first part, it is said that "heaven and earth are unkind and treats all things as stupid dogs." Then comes the word "building a heart for heaven and earth". I want to ask, if the world is missing, will you be destroyed? Do you need one person or a group of people to establish your mind? Generally speaking, this book is well written, but the scholar made me laugh. This proves that the author's character is very good, but it is my poisonous point. As an aside, I think the so-called Confucian scholars should not have power. I heard that Kong Laoer is not related by blood to the so-called descendants of Confucius. The descendants of Confucius have such a high status. It is really amazing that the world cultivator has surrendered to the outside world👏🏻 The water dynasty and the iron-clad family would annex the land when wars began in ancient times, hedging their bets, or taking the lead in rebellion if they were not satisfied, or directly surrendering to the invaders after annexing the land. What I hate most are bald donkeys and so-called Confucian scholars.

Very good, very good, but don't be like other articles. For example, the person preaching can live to the thousands of worlds without old age and death, and can be promoted to the thousands of worlds in tens of thousands of years. This seems very low and fast, and the time for cultivation feels a bit short. A few decades can reach a great state. . .

It can be seen that the current tone is basically the same as before. Now the way of heaven and the way of humanity are prosperous, and the follow-up is to complete the tunnel. I just feel that it is not necessary to write about the immortal martial arts chamber to compete. Now that the writing of the immortal way has been revived, everyone can practice martial arts, and the extremely resource-consuming setting will definitely be suppressed by high-level monks and difficult to prosper. However, there is not much written yet. I don't know if it can be competed now or in the future. Looks pretty good

The writing is average and not behind the scenes at all. The protagonist appears many times and is a saint in front of others. Moreover, the setting for cultivating immortals is outrageous. It is said that spiritual energy is exhausted, but as long as you step into Qi training, no matter how low your cultivation level is, you will still be an immortal far stronger than ordinary people. You can become invulnerable by practicing Qi at the first level, you can cut your neck and leave only white marks, and you can also release a fireball that cannot be extinguished by others, and it can even burn the entire city. There is also the setting of spiritual roots. I don't see any great use of spiritual roots. When the protagonist teaches the three thousand seekers the "Qi Training Technique", he doesn't even know if these people all have spiritual roots, or do they not need spiritual roots to cultivate immortality at all? Moreover, monsters can actually practice the protagonist's "Qi Training Technique" just like humans. Is this reasonable to you? The structures of monster beasts and humans are different, and they are actually able to do so. Finally, let me complain again. After the protagonist taught them how to practice, he said that he would teach them the techniques in three years. But in the end, they really only improved their cultivation in these three years, and then nothing else? Are they all useless? Don't they know how to create their own magic and have to wait for the protagonist to teach them?

The latest chapter, the world of high demons, the integration period, was affected by a golden elixir, please don't write it so exaggeratedly, okay? , No matter what, a fusion, the power is several levels higher, it can't kill you. Just a golden elixir makes fungi, don't be funny, @zhou Zhoumu Everything else is okay, the pacing and the main character are well written, but don't be so outrageous in the latest chapter, okay?

It should have been written by Al. There are many conflicts and confusing settings. Although the author likes to quibble about right and wrong points, his attitude is not bad. I will give it 3 stars for creativity. Al is Al, but the author still has to modify it himself.

Author: ① Aren't you talking about the non-spiritual world? Why are there auras in some places? ② Don't storage bags only exist for senior monks in the spiritual world? Han Li's storage bag in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is not easy to get. Even some masters have it... 🤭 🤭 🤭 🤭 🤭 🤭