Immortality******************

It's good to read, I was attracted by the first chapter, but it's too little, it's too early😢😱😭 The protagonist Li Changsheng currently has that kind of Taoist style. The author roughly follows the style of Honghuang. It is very good. The current quality is very good. This is not a brainless pretense, the protagonist is Taoist, very wise, the pioneer who leads the cultivation of immortality, and will always be ahead of everyone in this world. This world is invincible, and the protagonist is the driving force behind the scenes, promoting the development of the world. "My" name is Li Changsheng, I am immortal... "The ants look up to me, thinking I'm a fairy; when I look down at the ants, it's just a show." "I look at the cause and effect of the heaven and earth in this world, just like a chess player holding a piece. Wherever the piece falls, all living beings are players in the game." "The opportunity for everyone to win is just a game of chess set by me. When to close the net depends on my mood." "I am neither at the top nor at the bottom. I am in the middle of the game and can see both the top and the bottom."

It can be seen that the current tone is basically the same as before. Now the way of heaven and the way of humanity are prosperous, and the follow-up is to complete the tunnel. I just feel that it is not necessary to write about the immortal martial arts chamber to compete. Now that the writing of the immortal way has been revived, everyone can practice martial arts, and the extremely resource-consuming setting will definitely be suppressed by high-level monks and difficult to prosper. However, there is not much written yet. I don't know if it can be competed now or in the future. Looks pretty good

Author: ① Aren't you talking about the non-spiritual world? Why are there auras in some places? ② Don't storage bags only exist for senior monks in the spiritual world? Han Li's storage bag in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is not easy to get. Even some masters have it... [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing]

Not bad, I hope it can maintain quality and quantity, the realm must be strong, the world view must be grand, and each realm can be improved, which is the level of civilization development of cultivating immortals, which now seems to be the period of barbaric tribes.

It's good-looking and good-looking, and it's the best behind-the-scenes drama I've ever encountered.

There is no doubt that it is a very good book with an organized and rhythmic plot. The protagonist is perfectly created and has no poisonous points. It is a very good book.

I think it's quite possible. It would be even better if I could write five or six hundred chapters [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

They are all very good, and the author also listened to his advice.

Standing in front of you now is the Taoist who preaches the world, the heavenly way of the Canghuang Realm, the ancestor of the immortal way, the Lord of Kunlun, the Lord of all dharma, the source of all dharma, the Lord of Zixiao Palace, overlooking all the worlds, the immortal reincarnation, the Lord of the Era, the calamity chess player, sitting high on the nine-fold cloud, the person who has been watching the Tao for a long time! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing][laughing]

It is written more stylishly than similar books. Unlike those who became the masters of heaven and directly annexed other planes, our book mainly focuses on a step-by-step approach. [Smile]

Fast-paced behind-the-scenes and cool writing, to my liking

I just like to see this kind of thing

Looks good, I like this kind of thing

Not bad, the plot is compact

The author's attitude is okay

Very beautiful, highly recommended.

Is the author writing about the world of advanced immortal cultivation? Qi training is so powerful. [Smile]

Okay, this author is exactly the same as the one introduced

The overall reading is quite good for the senses. I wonder if the author's future plots will include Western civilization on earth or will it be limited to the fantasy world?

It's rare, so far it's better than good grass

It's great, I hope there won't be any Nuwa 😒 Just make it ambiguous the day after tomorrow, I feel like it will lose the tone of the protagonist Time, space, cause and effect, these are the three top laws. I can understand the Buddhist practice of cause and effect. The mastery of the sword practice can break through the void. It is related to space. It is understandable, but the author did not write it. A demon cultivator can cultivate the two laws of time and space. I can't understand it. The more I write, the more confusing it becomes.

It's nice to look at, but it's not rigorous enough in some places. Come on

It's very beautiful and makes people want to watch it.

It's really good. I have a small suggestion. You can write more about the protagonist.

It's a good book. Very recommended.

The plot is well written, and the free novel can at least be read [like]

It would be great if this book could exceed one million words. What I appreciate most is that there is no pretense or slap in the face. Content similar to prehistoric times

As long as it doesn't collapse, it's guaranteed to be 8 points, and it can be written better. If more people recommend it, it can also go up to 9 points.

This book is really good. It's very interesting to read, but it feels like it was written too fast. The quality of the writing was good at first, but I didn't know it later.

It's not bad. It would be better if the pace could be slowed down a bit. I would like to write some daily leisure articles. If the pace is too fast, I will easily get tired.