Mine*************

At least the author's plot is pretty good It is indeed a bit uncomfortable to feel depressed and frustrated at the beginning, but at least it is better than the abstract protagonist in most similar MC works (probably?)

The concept is grand and interesting, but first of all, the writing style is limited and the expression of perception is not good. Secondly, the world view is not introduced clearly, which is very uncomfortable. Finally, the protagonist series is not clear. I can only say that I wish the author better and better.

Now Liu Yu, now Fang Yu, now Luo Yu, can you give me some memorable names so that people can tell who is who? No, no.

It's not bad. There aren't so many silly routines and plots, and the protagonist has a good understanding of his identity as a time traveler and Steve/Him.

Is there a Valkyrie and mechanical power behind it?

It's good to read, but I don't know which chapter is going to be fun and will turn into a fun story. It's still a bit frustrating to this day.

I don't care about you

I think it's okay. If the rating improves a little bit, I'll give it a five points.

It feels okay, it feels okay