All Elf Entries Are Against the Rules, the Alliance Begged Me Not to Smoke Them.

It's very good. It's an original elf novel. I can see that the author has thought carefully. I think the reason for the low score is the routine slap in the face. It's so typical. The protagonist slaps the face and then gets the opportunity to [cover face]. I feel that every thought can be realized.

It looks good. Come on, author, keep at it. As long as it doesn't collapse, it will be a Tomato T0 beast-controlling novel. It's just that I don't understand what the original elves are and what's the difference between them and the newcomers. Another thing is that the title of the book needs to be changed. I read this book several times without the desire to click into it. When I was playing the game, I found out that it was a treasure.

This dramatic beginning left me hahahaha, and I experienced the Golden Three Chapters theory for the first time. The author's descriptions and level of humor are just right for me! The design of the first secret realm is very impressive. It has been reviewed and will be updated in the future.

Is this the comment section of those who don't buy the real thing? [Pause face] Telling the truth clearly stands out among all the AI articles and crappy articles on the street. I didn't notice the plundering entries at all when I read them. The protagonist of entries with negative attributes (such as "doer") was changed. I think the change was okay, and his very interesting "blessing in disguise" was later changed to a copy and Replacing the entries, there are only a few chapters in total. The first part is really cliché and the second part (not much more is the early stage) has been greatly improved (no better than So-and-so Dali and So-and-so God [face covering]). There are no inexplicable beauties throwing themselves into their arms, beast mothers, who seem to control beasts but actually have harems, and deliberately satisfy the hobbies of some pig brothers. Men should have fun fighting men (male elves)! I want to see a river of blood! The imagination is pretty good. I quite like the unique way Victor and Roland appear, such as Victor's sense of madness, and the sense of security and image of the civilized staff hat when the protagonist is in danger. Skill name suffix agreement, distance walking, etc. Are also very appropriate. You can really try it. The rule-based skill gameplay is a great test of imagination and control of the sense of fun. I hope the author will continue to work hard and be responsible for his own work!

Very funny: "Electricity, computer... Brother?" [Computer brother? It sounds great! Just tell me, how many points do you want? ] "What's the score... Of course the higher the better..." Chen Zang was still a little confused. "Ding!" "The entrance exam for Ganquan Elf Academy has officially begun. Candidates please——!" "Ding!" "The candidate on the 30th completed the submission and the exam score is 100 points." Chen Zang: "?" But are there too many female supporting characters? Although there is no ambiguous plot, I feel that the woman is a bit biased. The pet story only needs to be about the bond between the pet and the pet. I hope there will be no female protagonist [laughs] My suggestion is to reduce female supporting roles and reduce female supporting roles [laughs] I feel like I have a headache watching this kind of thing that involves history, the future, illusions, and mental illness [thinking]

The world view is too big and the progress is too slow. Awakening, transcendence, leadership, overlord, epic, king, legend. Chapter 178, guess which level the protagonist has reached [Thinking]

The original sprites and world view of the author's book are quite attractive. From the current point of view, the writing style is quite comfortable. It should be written by hand and will not have the uncomfortable feeling of AI writing. But there are some problems with the setting of the protagonist's golden finger. I think the protagonist cannot at least not directly replace the purple entry of someone else (hereinafter referred to as a) with a piece of garbage (you can gain double skill proficiency through combat, and have a probability of obtaining permanent skills, but you cannot learn the knowledge in the book) a: Because I suffered so much for this entry, I finally got the elf, and finally I was able to participate in the elf battle to show off my talents. You simply and easily snatched it away. Some comments below said that a doesn't know that he has that talent, so he may not be able to use it. But from the moment he obtained the elf at the elf academy, he couldn't avoid fighting. Whether he is in the academy, exploring secret realms, or leveling up, he always has to fight, and he can always grow. The author writes at the back that the protagonist thinks that this approach may help a, and he will be content. This idea is absolutely wrong. Although it is undeniable that A will be able to learn knowledge from books in the future, his grades may soar, he may receive some of the resources from the academy, and he may become a master of the big-mouthed gull with the new talent given by the protagonist. But his original talent may also bring him a better life. In life, most of us are not as talented as the protagonist in the novel. We may also go through countless hardships like A, and finally wait for the flowers to bloom and the heart to be full. Then we should not destroy the beauty of others at any time. Some comments say that a is standing on the opposite side of the protagonist, but is that his own wish? Whether it's fighting the protagonist or giving the elf a potion with side effects, isn't it all being forced? Whether he takes the initiative to greet the protagonist or apologizes to the protagonist, it can be seen that a is not a bad person. Furthermore, A's doer cannot determine the outcome of a battle. It is a late-stage developmental talent, and there is no need to replace entries in order to win. There are also some comments that think it is not good to replace the entry with the Holy Mother. Then I would like to ask what is the definition of the Holy Mother, and what basis do you use to judge others as the Holy Mother? If you have to teach me to bring down the world, then you are not the Holy Mother? If you have to be egotistical and willful, will you not be the Holy Mother? If everyone has to sweep the snow in front of their own door and don't care about the frost on other people's tiles, is it not the Holy Virgin? As a lyric says, if everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world. I'm not forcing everyone to have any dedication, but don't be harmful to others.

It's quite interesting. Except for the three female characters whose configuration is relatively typical (but the author said that the protagonist is a career party, so he can let go of the harem suspicion), the plot and abilities are all quite interesting, and there are many funny scenes. It's quite interesting.

A non-traditional beast-control novel, more of a fantasy novel. (Spoilers below: In general, pet beasts rules. The first part is still about beast control, but after the protagonist enters the dark realm, the values begin to expand. Because of the so-called entries. There is a saying that the level remains unchanged and the values are inflated, and then adding the values that need to be arranged for the plot. As of the latest chapter of the book, the values are already a bit outrageous. Especially when observers appear. ♾️Infinite time travel, infinite timeline, plus two similarly similar characters, Victor and Roland, as well as unappeared characters from hostile countries who can also observe the ability. Coupled with the fact that Sin Titan is a bug that is not affected by entries, it is impossible to imagine how the plot will develop later on. Extraordinary fight against mythical beasts? Does that mean I'm going to play the world's best mid laner? I couldn't believe it. But I have to say that it is indeed an enjoyable book, well, except for the boring part at the beginning of Dark Prison. (This is how the map changes) It just depends on how round the author's back is. I estimate that the protagonist's strength will either have a high explosive period later and fill in the gaps in realm. Or just reopen the world line and reshape the wind, fire, water and soil. Well, that's probably it. Thousands of people have different views. This book is generally readable and has great insights. Come on! Here comes Ollie!

After replacing the content of other people's entries, the author modified the plot. You can choose to replace or copy, which solved the bug that the protagonist seemed too self-interested. To a certain extent, it was strengthened by Gua Xiao.

I think it looks pretty good. Give me a good review to support it. Latest. . . So abstract

First of all, this book can be called a masterpiece before the prison chapter. Although the writing is a bit immature, the overall writing is smooth and exciting, with a humorous and interesting style. Characters such as Roland are also remarkable. Unfortunately, the fly in the ointment is that after the prison chapter, the world view is too large, which leads to the gradual collapse of the combat power, and the main line deviates too much from the theme of the novel. In fact, this is also the advantage and common problem of system novels. With the help of the system, the plot can be advanced quickly, but it also causes the entire plot to be fragmented due to unreasonable advancement. For example, the colorful entries behind the prison make the plot advance very quickly, making the concept of combat power at the beginning of the novel inapplicable. Generally speaking, it is recommended that the author can observe the main line writing of other excellent systematic novels. If some connecting plots are added after the prison chapter, the novel may be more eye-catching. I also wish the author will become a famous writer soon

It feels like a very thoughtful beast-control story, but it seems that because there is no overall goal, the plot feels like it comes out one after another. There are also very few battle plots. What does the protagonist want to be? Not sure, but getting along with pet animals is quite interesting, especially the little krait

Looting and copying are indeed very suitable, but it is best to keep both, and you can even add one to give. In this way, when you meet a villain, give him junk entries to offset the attributes of his god-level entries. For example, if the opponent has a purple magnetic strip that increases his attack speed by 100, you give him five white entries that add 20 to his magic resistance and speed -20, and then beat him physically. . . . . Take it back after you finish. It is best to increase the range for plundering and copying, and you can slowly go from contact to ten centimeters to one meter to ten meters. That's fun. . . . You are the prettiest among everyone in the competition, but when you leave the venue, others' attributes are normal and you look confused.

It's very exciting and interesting. The rating is low. I hope the author can maintain the quality and quantity. The beast's presence becomes less evident in the later chapters of the beast-controlling novel.

The book is quite good, but the only drawback may be that it steals other people's entries. If you benefit yourself at the expense of others, you will lose a lot of character points. Others in the comment area have also said that it is best to change it to copying [eating melon]

It's been a while since I've written a review. I saw it was a new book so I decided to write something casually. Let me start with the conclusion. The original beast-controlling game is well received, and the story is quite unique. Taken together, it is actually a very good work in the tomato-related category. However, there is a slightly controversial point at present: after the protagonist obtains the first color ability, his combat power and world view expand greatly. Since it has not been described to the later stage, there may only be some controversy at present. But overall I have a positive attitude. It is not easy to be original. I hope the author will continue to work hard and polish the work well. I look forward to seeing the story in your heart! ! On a side note, the game Rock Kingdom has been quite popular recently. I saw some gamers commenting on it, and it's not certain that the game Beast Control will be back in action one day~

It looks great, I like the main character summoning Warden and Rolandmon. I feel that the cheating is just right, it doesn't feel too broken, the logic is very smooth, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I'm looking forward to it. There is no heroine yet. I hope the author can carefully consider whether to add and how to write it. I feel like there are a lot of people who fall over because of this.

It's okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable if I cut it halfway. My talent for listening to sounds is incredible. If I cut it hard, I feel a lot less fun. Even if I don't wake up, I can still listen to other new sounds, but it's a pity. I just listened to a few old ones and felt like something was missing.

I finished reading it for five hours in one day. It was so satisfying. I have never given it a rating. I have to give it a rating. It is the Invincible novel that I want to read. I don't care about what other people say about Honkai Impact or bad reviews. It's just fun. The imaginative writing is more than up to par. Anyway, I'm very happy today.

Xiaoman, Black Prison, Society, Victor and the like are considered poisonous places to me.

It's quite good. It's more relaxed and realistic. The plot has its effect, but it doesn't force the protagonist to a level that doesn't belong to him. Some of the small details related to the elves are also quite good and have a more realistic feel.

Compared with the group portrait of Liangcao, it is a little funny. I estimate that the male protagonist's numerical value is about four times that of the monster in the same period. None of the four female characters currently look like the heroine. If I keep maintaining this level, I feel like I have a chance to become a masterpiece.

The writing is really good, at least 8.5 Points or even 9 points or above. The plot rhythm, character creation, etc. Are all well grasped. There are no logical flaws. The combat power setting and excitement points are well balanced, and it will not feel aggrieved.

It's rare to find such an innovative elf novel, and the writing is also very smooth. There are no sudden villains coming to push the plot, nor does it suddenly enter the ordinary plot. I followed it to the end in one go, so update it quickly! ! !

The look and feel will indeed be much better after turning looting into copying. At least I think it has been changed to copying, so it is still acceptable. Original elf writing, not AI, it has its own thoughts. I hope that if you work hard, you won't be taken care of by me.

Summary: Beast Control, Entry Overall, it's a very interesting beast-control story. It's a cool story. The main setting is that some creatures will have entries, and the effects of the entries are all kinds of strange. Then the protagonist can copy/replace or extract them by himself. The human/animal setting is also quite interesting, especially the travelers at the beginning. Then there is the development of the club, side jobs (potions), and secret realms (dark prison), which are all very interesting. It's just that the plots that prepare to expand the worldview are a bit too open and affect the growth path. There are unlimited resources, and the slowly developing plots in the past don't have the same farming feeling as before. Therefore, it stands to reason that the subsequent plots can only be biased towards the main plot. After all, there are unlimited resources, and the subsequent development is almost the same. So then the plot leads to the main plot (world crisis, alien visitors), understanding the intelligence, and starting to save the world. The author has quite some ideas and the setting is creative enough, but the plot of farming and development ends too early.

No changes were made when replacing other people's talents in the previous step, but settings that can be copied were added later. I can't change the situation from now on. If it were before, I would definitely be scared away by such a setting. Overall good

The previous protagonists and various NPCs are like those in ordinary novels npc brainlessly criticizes the protagonist The protagonist uses his strength to slap him in the face, and then continues to be criticized It got better later The looting and replacement of entries at the beginning was very uncomfortable. But later on, it's not bad to solve the life-and-death crisis by replacing the entries. It started out like a novice, but then I started to let myself go, but my writing got better. I'm really looking forward to continuing to get better, and I'll give you more by the way [laughing evilly]

I didn't expect to be able to read a top-notch novel that I just wrote a while ago. It will definitely score 9.6 Or above in the future. Come on, author. Why do some people think this is not good-looking? If this looks good, I will directly transform into a pure loli cat girl with 150 white hair, red and blue eyes, [Punch] (