Marvel Mutants: The Ultimate Evolution into Doctor Manhattan

I have seen it to the end, but there is one bad thing. Pig's Knuckles was not tempered enough at the beginning, so that he still maintains a kindness that is difficult for normal people to achieve. We need to make him feel the darkness of the world. It is best to dissect him several times. The pain of memory inheritance is not deep enough. With the current development trend, I feel that if no one troubles him, he will be a normal person with super powers. As a mutant hated by the whole world, how could he be so ordinary?

As of Chapter 36, summary There's nothing wrong with the writing, and the pace is good (except it's a little slow, of course, it just feels like it. After all, it's only been less than 2 weeks from escaping to Magneto's meeting) Another advantage is that the writing is different from other Marvel articles because it contains some content that everyone wants to complain about (such as the labeling and politicization of mutants, and the debate between Professor X and Magneto) You can take a look and see that the author has been complaining in the last few chapters. It is estimated that the next step will be to overturn the car or build an island. The pace is too slow, and the plot is suppressed. In the plot of 14-51 (as of the latest), the protagonist has atomic-level control and is tested in various ways. Even Magneto, who does not have atomic-level control, can go crazy. The protagonist becomes stronger inexplicably and then shrinks. Not to mention that the protagonist is not strong enough. Currently, the protagonist is already the strongest among mutants except Apocalypse.

I don't know why the rating is so low, maybe someone wrote a bad review; This book is quite good. The protagonist is decisive in killing enemies and is kind to his own people. He retains the three views and ideals of modern youth and is decisive in killing; Great refreshing article; Small problem: Ability proficiency is still not increasing fast enough ------> For now, in the dozen or so chapters of the hotel, it has been stuck at level four; After the protagonist becomes invincible on Earth, I don't know what the author plans to do in the future, infinite travel and changing maps? What are you writing now? It's a grind, it doesn't have enough content, and it doesn't have any exciting content. There is no main plot, the protagonist is too hung up, I don't know how to write further? Just cut it off, reorganize the plot, and restart it, right?

It's really good. He should be killed without mercy, but he doesn't bite anyone like a mad dog. Maybe this is what others call cowardice. Highlights: After possessing molecular-level telekinesis, he began to study mechanics, materials science, etc., And actively developed skills (optical invisibility, vibrating molecular charges to produce flames, lightning, etc.). In addition, the Marvel characters currently appearing have not found any obvious destructive phenomena for the time being. Author, I'm sorry that I wrote so many chapters to make up for it [grieved]

The writing is quite good, not as bad as the reviews said, there are some flaws, but they are innocuous. I found it quite enjoyable. The protagonist is quite egoistic, and the reviewers also have the same problems as the Virgin, so it seems a bit contradictory, but the writing is very good. Come on! (PS: Write faster, you don't want people to know that you are short)

In fact, the writing is okay. I don't feel it if the AI ​​writing is not AI writing. If I want to talk about the difference, it's probably that the protagonist's main mission is too monotonous. It's just about getting stronger. There are almost no bonds with the supporting characters. Of course, the protagonist's path is to become a god, and his thoughts are freedom. It's okay if he doesn't need these. The overall feeling is okay. It's not a 5.8 Rating. It feels better than some Marvel fan works that have a score of 7 or 8.

The writing is pretty good, and the killing is decisive.

A very good American comic. The protagonist's character has become cold. It's very good.

Pig's feet need to destroy the world, because humans will develop gene fragments that are harmful to mutants and flow into the earth's ecology. Once successful, the mutant genes of pig's feet will be suppressed, and they will die of old age.

I think it's pretty good, there are some blocking points, but overall the plot is online, and the characters are not broken. Compared to most Dafen in Tomato, they are already average or above average. 5.5 Points, which is a bit low. I think I can give it a 7.8 Points. In addition, regarding mutants, I actually have some opinions of my own. I think the author can learn from them. That is, mutants essentially counteract three problems in American society. The first is the drug issue, which is the final step from the mutants. It can be seen from the provision of food that suppresses the X gene to American society that American society can arbitrarily turn certain drugs into legal food additives and then add them to food. The second is the experimental issue. This is what Lao A is talking about. Experiment directly with ordinary people. Here, we directly experiment with marginalized people and mutants in society. The third issue is the race of the mutants themselves. They are designed to reflect the marginalized and excluded characteristics of ethnic minorities and minorityism itself. However, because it is a science fiction movie, the political spectrum of this minority group has become superpowers that are visible to the naked eye. So some places will appear nondescript. I think the author can think of ways to round this point out. I think the X gene itself is widely distributed in the human body, and those who are awakened are only homozygous for these genes.