After Being Transformed into a Loser, He Went to HE with the Sword Cultivator and the Savior.

Well written. The characters are vivid and the writing is smooth But in my opinion there are 3 things to pay attention to 1. There are too many names in this article, and it's easy to get confused. 2. The pace is slow and I like watching fast-paced movies. Shen's feelings were discovered earlier, but Gu still thinks they are good brothers. 3. This is an upgrade stream. Shen Gu is often injured. Those who cannot accept that the protagonist is not invincible can quit. That's all for now, more will be added later. Yes, I also asked the consultant if he was wearing clothes or wearing souls. Finally, I would like to praise the author for writing rich content. Although some plots are a bit cliche (), the overall world view is not bad. As a newbie, it is already very good. Keep up the good work!

I finished reading it late at night and was so excited that I couldn't sleep, so I came to give my serious feedback. What impresses me most about this work is that it perfectly balances "refreshment" and "realism". The plot advances all the way and is dense with excitement, but it does not make people feel suspended at all, because all the power increases and relationship changes have solid logical and emotional foreshadowing. The protagonist's "strength" does not come out of thin air. He obtains it with wisdom, perseverance, and even occasional vulnerability, which makes every victory particularly hearty. The supporting characters are all flesh and blood, they are not just simple tools. Their choices and fate also affect people's hearts. I can feel that the author put a lot of effort and thought into building this world and characters. This is not a simple recreational read, this is a wonderful story with a solid core. You really wrote it superbly!

It's so beautiful [admiration] Men are menstruating when boys see it, and girls get crazy when they see it. This is the nemesis of depression, and the alarm clock for vegetative people. I am so busy that tears flow out of the corners of my mouth, flooding into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. Who is my rose? It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I ran hard, I jumped hard, and I danced the tango from the balcony on the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world is no longer short of water.

No way, my God! Although the rating is low, it's really pretty! This is when I finished reading more than two hundred chapters without even realizing it! I would never have read so many chapters before! Ah Xuan and A Han are happy! Emotions are flowing like a steady stream, and they are simply bursting into flames! I added it to the bookshelf without reading it at first, but then I saw it and realized I couldn't stop! I hope you can continue to update well and live up to the expectations of readers. At the same time, you should also take good care of your body and stay healthy. As the saying goes, the body is the capital of revolution after all. Come on! I believe you will be better and more powerful, and attract more readers with your own abilities!

This book is really good. I would like to call it Nan Bowan in the world of two men cultivating immortals. There are too many foreshadowings. I am happy to read this kind of book. But I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's just over 100 chapters, but it's really good.

It's so good. I've been reading this book since I saw it. Today it's even equal. It's so good. It's exactly what I imagined cultivating an immortal to be! The young couple is also very sweet, and everyone is growing up well. It's only fitting that the author is a complete confidant [please update]

This book can be said to be eye-catching. I had a serious charlatanism in my girlhood and this novel perfectly satisfied my charlatanism. This is simply good news for people who like to read fairy tales. This is a group portrait of two male protagonists, Wen Shuang, who is a cultivator of immortals.

It's very beautiful, the content and plot are compact, but there should be no suddenness in it. If the reader is immersed in it, his emotions will be suddenly divided when he sees these two words (personal suggestion). Overall, it is very beautiful. I can help you when I see Tiandao for the first time. There are two Tiandao. I like reading this kind of article.

I was attracted by the introduction, the setting is good, and overall it seems okay, but the plot is quite cliche, and the dialogue between the characters is a bit awkward. If you are interested, I suggest you lose your mind and watch it. I will adjust the subsequent plot before watching it. It is still great, keep up the good work!

It's beautiful, five-star review, the writing is smooth and smooth, and it's very comfortable to read. The plot is mainly about strengthening strength and dealing with powerful enemies. The two male protagonists get along slowly and get closer to each other. There is no very deliberate plot. I like this kind of relationship. The relationship heats up normally, rather than industrial saccharine. If you like reading about cultivating immortals, don't miss this good article!

Hey hey hey. It can be seen that the author is writing for the first time and the writing style is very green, but it is just suitable for our pure love couple~ This book is really fragrant and fragrant~ Welcome to taste the mouth and teeth (๓´˘`๓)𓂃 𓈒𓏸໒꒱

It's a good read, a post-apocalyptic time-travel story about two powerful characters. The Son of Heaven is on a mission to save the world. The writing is very good, the name is also very catchy, and the emotions are relatively slow and flowing. I like it very much. It's a fantasy novel about traveling to the world of immortality in the last days. It's very sweet.

Very pretty. I have never seen such a cultivating immortality, and it has a different style in the mass of popular articles about cultivating immortality. It's both funny and feels like two top academics working together to become immortals.

It's beautiful, and the emotional lines are very well written. What struck me the most was the part where Xiao Shen travels to the end of the world. I feel like the two protagonists know how to cultivate the common people's path.

It's super interesting, the plot is exciting and doesn't drag on, the more you watch it, the more you get hooked, the pacing is well controlled, I couldn't stop and stayed up all night to finish it.

I fell in love, it was love at first sight. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

This kind of development in the introduction is something I have never seen before. I am really looking forward to the plot in the future. Come on, teacher.

It's nice to watch [laughs][laughs] It's more up-to-date, and it's not mindless. The plot and emotional lines written by the author are quite nice [love] Little Couple 99 [laughs] [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

I think this book is very interesting. Although the author's writing style is a bit green, I personally think it is to my liking, so I recommend it to all my book friends. I also really like this sweet little couple. Please give me more recommendations. The author should also work hard, it will definitely be better, ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

It looks good, the friendship lines are good, the characterization is also good, it just looks good [blowing kiss]

Really nice [like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like], it's just not finished [crying], every character is well drawn, it's beautiful, I finished it in one day, my writing is not good, but I really like it, please update it [Attention] Big boost to the author

This novel is very interesting, but I didn't expect that Fu Xuan and Xiao Shen have met before. I hope the author can update more [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Many characters are very three-dimensional and have highlights. The progress is relatively slow. It is mainly about the growth of the protagonist. I personally think it is very beautiful.

Good reviews, great reviews, great reviews! Very beautiful

This book is really beautiful. I originally thought it was ordinary, but the more I read, the more fascinated I became. I wanted to hang myself on this book o(≧v≦)o Really, the beautiful cover is just a trivial advantage of this book. The content is even more delicious. The cover is just the icing on the cake. I believe this book will become very popular in the future o(≧v≦)o

This book is really well written. I feel like the author should be laying out a big clue. I'll take a look at it. I really like the author's depiction of Gu.

It's very interesting. The main character has a distinct personality. Why is the rating so low? [What]

The plot is very novel. I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. I am looking forward to the following plot. Please help the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The teacher's writing is beautiful! The characters have distinct personalities!

Well, it looks great. Upgrade and fight monsters. Double strength. Talented