Broken Memories

I tasted it from the video number... I'm actually quite confused about this world view... And about the anthropomorphic form, no, is it a male body or a female body? The main line is actually not clear. Uh-huh, and also, when writing fan fiction, have you not marked it with any CP-oriented tags... Although I don't mind, that's all. The writing style needs to be improved, but what I mean by improvement is to make your language more concise, rather than long paragraphs of description. I admit that this kind of description is very good. As a fangirl, I also like long monologues in the texts I create, but that is limited to short stories. Long monologues are not popular in long novels, especially when the main plot, character settings, etc. Are not clearly explained. But I really want to praise you. This idea is very wonderful, and it requires courage. After all, under the support of such common stereotypes... Uh uh uh uh, I still can't forgive the setting of Guoling male and female bodies (if it is to sell CP, then pretend I didn't say it) You can delete a lot of insignificant descriptions, as if you are trying to make up the word count (because I have done this before, uh uh uh...), But I will also carefully review the small details in the text, such as a qualifier, but many details will appear useless if they are not supported by enough in the text... (Sorry, I said it a bit harshly) I understand very well the idea of writing a long article like this, especially this kind of image, where you have to break out of the fixed template, and the characters have to think deeply on their own... (There is an article about delicious settings. I have been writing the plot line for two years, but I haven't started writing it yet.) So I actually quite admire this kind of person who can just do it. Then wish your baby to become the person he wants to be and create his own works that please him.

The author writes very well and loves it

My wife's writing is very good, but she writes a little bit less. I hope she can write more.

Teacher, apart from "Alive" by Yu Hua, this is the second book that killed me [crying]