Survival Game: I Have an Editor

It looks good. The editor settings have brought new ideas to the old settings, and the management and construction are in order. There are currently no particularly big poisonous points. The problem of lavish trading is okay, because it is not that the heroine is subjectively stupid and generous, but the author is not good at converting supply and demand values ​​when writing transactions, and the transaction description is not the focus. It focuses more on the heroine using her talents to survive and build a safe house, so it is acceptable for the time being, but I hope it can be improved in the future.

The plot is more everyday but there are many interesting little details. It is a very special article about stocking up (I only like the part about stocking up when I read about stocking up [shy]). It is worth mentioning that the background setting is very concise and not verbose. Both the novice dungeon and the first dungeon heroine prefer the single-player mode. One person scavenges and builds, plants and stores goods, and the others are all tool workers. Goldfinger is very fun, and the non-upgradability of the opening chapter seems to cut off a point that can be written, but in fact it prolongs the novelty of the novel for readers and the longevity of the writing. However, the description of the safe house actually has a second floor, which is a bit dramatic. The experience suddenly changes from building matchboxes and surviving in poverty in the wilderness to a petty bourgeoisie white-collar worker decorating a loft apartment [laughs]

The survival part is well written, and the use of golden fingers is also very innovative. It's all dry stuff. It's best to revise the text and change a bunch of words like "then" that appear several times in a chapter. For example, add more tone to the description of thoughts and add more descriptions to the description of scenes to avoid being too bland. The writing is getting better and better~~~I love watching this kind of real lone wolf adventure to survive~~~

It's quite interesting. You stock up on goods to survive and build your own marble bunkers. I haven't entered a world like extreme natural disasters yet. I'm looking forward to the various worlds in the future. In fact, I still want the heroine to have some special bloodline, some offensive talents, or a special career choice. Otherwise, how can she survive in a special world? Also, I feel that the heroine's talents are used a bit too hastily, or her brain circuit is not exciting enough. I hope that in the future, I will have talents that can fix more bugs. Suddenly I realized that the heroine didn't even have a data panel...

The setting is unique and interesting, and the character of the heroine is also good, because from the beginning there was no setting that the heroine was particularly smart. This setting of ordinary people bursting with inspiration is actually very realistic and interesting. The most important thing is that this book is hand-printed without any artificial intelligence. Please support me!

It's definitely more than a 7. The author writes it as a reader who wants to read it after reading it. Every story is very interesting. When I saw the final result, I suddenly realized that it was finished. This is the most powerful thing. The author's large-scale storyline is very attractive and I am addicted to it without knowing it. I especially like the last copy of the ghost.

It's okay. Some of the details are not very logical and can be ignored. The main problem is that the heroine's hands are too loose. If you don't want to eliminate this problem, you can actually add some preconditions. For example, you want to be friends with this local snake to facilitate transactions with him later, so you give him more food.

The subject matter and writing style are both good, and the rich plot made my eyes shine. However, some of the setting logic needs to be adjusted accordingly. This kind of writing with super powers cannot be too serious. There are flaws but not many. After all, the protagonist needs to grow up. The overall setting and content are good.

It's pretty good, but there are too few, tying 134 pictures. Why is the score so low? It should be at least 8 points or above. The female protagonist is a lone ranger. She builds her own safe house and stockpiles supplies little by little. It looks good and I love watching it [please update]

The writing is quite good, and the heroine is very cautious. The only pity is that the heroine is not a woman in science and engineering, and she did not use the editor's ability to the maximum. However, the heroine has grown up, so it is a more enjoyable story. I just don't dare to read a story where the heroine is too miserable. I won't be able to stand it.

It's very interesting. The heroine dug out her safe house bit by bit and refined it in the second world. She farmed, explored, collected materials, and grew up by herself. Because of her special talent, she didn't want to team up with others and survive alone. But the update is too slow. Are you tired? If you're not tired, continue to update [shy]

I have watched about a third of it so far. The heroine has always been a lone wolf. She has been hoarding goods carefully and slowly. The goods she stocked will be used. Goldfinger is more unique and it is not exaggerated. The things created by Goldfinger will gradually wear out. It is very good. There are not too many negative characters and inexplicable conflicts. This is the type I like very much.

The heroine is super cautious and stubborn, her editor skills are very innovative, she is powerful without knowing it, she is a bit old-fashioned, the 1.2 World has a lot of stockpiles, and then it involves killing monsters and player disputes, she is getting better and better, and she is more and more beautiful.

My favorite type is hamster stories about silently hoarding goods and growing up. Although it is about survival in the apocalypse, it feels healing. When you are exhausted after a tiring day at work, this type of text is the most comfortable to read.

I really like reading this style of survival articles. The author's writing style is very good, making it easy to read, and there are no big logical loopholes. I like it very much. Author, please pay attention to rest, and don't rest too much. Come on and type, the kind that costs tens of thousands a day [smile][smile][smile]

This is a survival novel that I have been following for a long time. The setting is very innovative, and the heroine's talents are used reasonably. She is a lone wolf player who has always been hoarding goods. The plot is a bit bland but innocuous. I hope the author can update it more!

Overall, it's pretty good, although at the beginning, the author's setting may not have been clear, and it felt a little jumpy. After that, it started to look better and better. The most exciting part of the movie was at the end, which left me feeling a bit unfinished. The strong female character has no cp, but the heroine belongs to the king of Gou, and she is the boss who has everything she wants until the end. There are no scenes that will make your blood pressure soar. It is very comfortable to watch. If you like a slow pace, you can join it. It is highly recommended.

The author has good writing skills, but the beginning is not very good, but it becomes more and more interesting. Each world is described very vividly, and the protagonists and supporting characters are also very vividly portrayed. The plot is compact, without unnecessary nonsense or useless plots. It can also be seen that the author is getting more and more into the mood as he writes. Unfortunately, it is too short. I hope there will be a second part.

Very beautiful! It's narrated, it's steady and steady, there's no bad intrigues, the heroine has a strong ability to survive, and it's very comfortable to watch. The chase is over! The beauty level continues to rise! The heroine is cautious but not cowardly, she is neither holy nor treacherous when dealing with people, her upgrades are orderly and meticulous, her gold finger is thick enough but she does not lead her away directly, the heroine can think for herself, improve herself, and is in the leading position among survivors at the same time [Love] [Love] Everything is maintained at just the right level just like the style of this book. There are no battles between survivors, no topics about men and women. The ultimate goal of experiencing the world is to improve the safe house and survivability. There is a sense of security. The writing is not impatient or procrastinating. I feel that the author must be a veteran in writing [Adoration] [Bookshelf plus one] [Bookshelf plus one] Finally! Lots of updates, teacher! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Super, super good-looking. I have been looking for a lone wolf heroine recently. She has no family, no cp, and no team. This novel is super suitable, and it is not the Virgin. This is a type I have never seen before. I am waiting for updates and looking forward to it. Happy mood

A very interesting infrastructure article. It's different from anything I've read before. The author's power of thinking is really funny. The way the protagonist is not very smart from time to time and the way the reader is scratching their heads and trying to figure out a solution are both cute.

Although it has not been serialized yet, it is already close to 200 chapters. You can also see the advantages and disadvantages of this article. I think it is still worth recommending. The story is very organized and the plot is good. In short, it is a relatively good story that is worth reading step by step. This is enough.

It's a very comfortable article, it's the lone wolf type that I like🥰I build the safe house bit by bit by myself, the protagonist has a good personality, the golden finger is also very novel, the imagination is big, and it looks good

It is a breath of fresh air of survival writing. It is said that a lone wolf is a lone wolf, without messy interpersonal relationships, and strives to survive and upgrade to become stronger. The safe house in the first world is very creative. The second mutant world is also good for farming and searching for goods in the mountains, and the words are written by hand. Unfortunately, after the third dormitory survival, I started writing with AI, but overall it is still good! It can relieve people's worries and solve the book shortage!

Good-looking, no serious survival story

It feels pretty good so far, it's my type

It really brought the heroine to life. This feeling of growing up and becoming stronger alone is very good.

It's beautiful, the author is very imaginative [blowing kiss]

It's pretty and interesting, mainly because the heroine is cautious and doesn't feel wronged very much.

It's good-looking. The heroine is quite smart, very down-to-earth and hard-working. She also has a big golden finger. Not bad.