Elf: Is the Needle Bee Weak? What Does It Have to Do with Me, Sakaki?

After reading it, the author will update it soon. The protagonist is decisive in killing, the civilians counterattack and resist the aristocratic family. The pace is slow, and the battle writing is also good. It has a bit of the template of Boss Sakaki, and the protagonist's personality charm is also there. Please update it soon [laughing][laughing][laughing]

1. The template setting is extremely eye-catching and the starting point is for ordinary people to turn over. It is directly bound to Sakaki's real template, which perfectly hits the exciting point of Pokémon fan readers. With Sakaki's fierce ambition, aura, nurturing understanding, and hidden Rockets background, he takes a completely different path from ordinary trainers at the beginning. The difference directly reaches 2. The character has a sense of connection, and he does not follow the Virgin style. The protagonist abandons the old routine of the traditional Pokémon hero of "charity and kindness", acts decisively, and has deep castles, replicating Sakaki's heroic pattern. No mother, no love brain, collecting favors, grabbing resources, and laying out conspiracies all in one go. The dark flow has an excellent look and feel. 3. The plot has a fast pace. In the early stage, the players pretend to develop from the bottom of the civilian population, secretly replicating the development model of the Rockets. They develop in a low-key manner while secretly establishing their own power. Upgrade, collect powerful Pokémon, and lay out major areas. The fun points are densely packed and you won't feel frustrated while reading. ✅ I like Pokémon fandom, Team Rocket, villain protagonists, and Dark Syndicate ✅ I want to read stories about counterattacks at the beginning, no frustration, and decisive killing.

This is a fantasy novel covered with Pokémon text. The author cleverly integrates Pokémon into the current world. Although it has only a hint of Team Rocket feeling so far, and the plot is not new, it is very enjoyable to watch and very interesting. However, according to the world view of this article, if the protagonist is not enlarged, there is no chance. It looks a bit fragmented. I feel that the Chinese zodiac is very powerful, and there is no point in having feelings. . The reason for deducting one point is that I wanted to lean towards Team Rocket too much, especially the talking Meow Meow. . I don't understand why the fifth elf chose this meow. . Overall, you can read it if you want to pass the time. The author's update speed is very good.

Very normal and serious writing. Well, I listened to the first 10 chapters of the book. That's what they call the poisonous spot. First of all, where are the unfamiliar classmates? Although the world has changed after rebirth, the general direction and people have not changed. It can be said that he knows the situation of those classmates thoroughly. What follows is the protagonist's adoptive father. Anyway, when I looked at the atmosphere of that family, it was basically the protagonist's family of origin, and it was very warm. I haven't read it yet, but if you don't help in this kind of family situation, and don't give the family some help, does that mean there is no one in the family? Then comes the poisonous point of Chapter 10. Well, the atmosphere in front is already very warm. Chapter 10 describes all the contradictions and so on. Isn't it normal? The protagonist just started hanging up. If you don't get it, slap the person on the other side. Although this is too classic and a little embarrassing. (Referring only to that psychology) In just one chapter, the inner growth of the one-horned insect has been written. I think it's already very good. I don't know yet whether it will go down in the future, but I think it's already pretty good.

The logic is very reasonable. In a world with Pokémon and a view of time set in Mystery Heart, the classes of commoners and nobles are completely reasonable. Some people say that this book is dark, but I am sure that the real world just hides these darkness. Although I feel that the main plot of the book in the secret realm is a bit incoherent or rough, it is still okay. When the world view is reasonable, I hope the author can polish the story of Team Rocket and even the growth path of Rainbow Rocket Team. Looking forward to the next excitement

The writing is super good, the values ​​​​and the main character's demeanor are really attractive, and it also made me think a lot about life. This is also the only book that kept me awake for 2 days without stopping from the first chapter to keeping up with the army. I was satisfied with the slower pace, which is closer to reality. But! There is a super flaw! Can you please hurry up? Compared with the Pokémon novels, this one is really good. It can be compared to "The lowest level trainer in the Pokémon world". [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Come on, the author [crying] Please update the author soon [crying] Of course, the quality must be maintained. Such a good novel can be considered a god!

Tomato Liangpin is very realistic. Although it is very frustrating in the early stage, it must be very interesting in the later stage. The author does not beautify the real Pokémon. It is a bit like a dark novel, a grassroots counterattack, and the portrayal is very good. This is all a cool article with the same text. This is really stylish.

Except for Qian Lin and Yu Fu, the other Pokémon novels did not make me want to read them. Although this one is a bit more confusing, it really made me want to read it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I really love this book. 👍👍👍

The setting is novel and refreshing, the logic is not awkward to write online, and the reading experience is excellent. The portrayal of some of the supporting characters is weak, and the flaws do not hide the flaws. It is worth recommending.

It's really good to read. I've just read the latest chapter after reading it for a few days. Compared with the Pokémon stories I've read in the past, my eyes lit up. Although most of the rating systems in the text are the same, the novel settings of Heart of the Secret are really good, and the curiosity of peeling back the truth of the world layer by layer makes people immersed in it. Maybe it's because of the dark style that the rating was lowered, but I really like it and a lot of people read it, which is really a pity. I hope that the work will flourish and the author will pay more attention to rest. The body is the capital of revolution.

It's okay, the kind of common people who rebel against aristocratic families, that is, there are always external factors that are stronger than the protagonist's growth, suppressing the protagonist, especially the Ye family, which is annoying to death. But the overall logic is also very reasonable, whoever is stronger has the final say. It's still too realistic and depressing for me. The protagonist grows up very quickly, but there are also many enemies who envy, suppress, and eradicate rookie civilians. The feeling of wanting to crush civilians with no background into the mud makes me feel very confused about the official state. The so-called genius who cannot grow up is not a genius.

Brief summary. Not a favor! I am told that if I go out to buy groceries, the prices will increase, and if I go to the toilet, I will run out of paper! Currently I have seen the latest chapter, chapter 516. This book is a typical Pokémon dark text. It does not fully follow the combat power system of the Pokémon game. It focuses more on the elf's own qualifications and bonds. It is more realistic and the rise of the common people. There is a system, but no heroine. This book is a novel based on a combination of rebirth and time travel. It is based on the story of a low-level civilian named Lu Yuan who rose from a street vendor whose initial elf was a unicorn insect to become the strongest trainer at the top of the pyramid. At the same time, this book is also linked with the author's previous novel, a protagonist named Zhen Guo. That is, the background of the novel is in the same universe, which is enough to show the size of this novel. The style of the protagonist in the novel is based on Sakaki, who adopts a style of decisive killing and proving the truth through killing. Supplementary, system functions: advanced items, Pokémon qualification level (for example, an ordinary item can be upgraded to high quality, rare, precious, perfect, etc. Without any side effects), changing characteristics (currently following the settings of the Pokémon game, only the characteristics owned by Pokémon can be changed, that is, hidden characteristics, characteristics one, two, and the same effect as the characteristic capsule, but only once) Let me talk about my personal views on this novel. The plot is 95 points, the poison points are 90 points (especially less poisonous), and the character description is 95 points. The plot is nothing to say, the macro scale is large, and the details of the story are well handled, but the system is incredible, so I don't give full marks. However, overall I praise this book very much. I think this book is not too inferior to "The Darkness of the Elves" and "The Legendary Trainer of the Elves". I dare not say that it surpasses it. I can only say that this book is qualified to compare with them. It is recommended that book lovers who love Pokémon Dark novels must read it. Currently, because this book has not been updated, I am planning to catch up on the author's previous work, which is finished. Let me talk about the poisonous points that I feel, emmm, one is that the Pokémon's advanced level (level 70) requires the heart of the secret realm. I have always emphasized in the previous article that this thing is very rare, but after seeing more than 500 chapters, the king is everywhere [vomit] [vomit]. @Garliconbasaolaoan Well, anyway, my suggestion to the author at the time was to add an advanced method. For example, if the body's capacity for elements reaches a certain level, it can be advanced. Otherwise, there will be as many kings as dogs in the later period, and there will be many wild king Pokémon. This phenomenon cannot be explained. Another one is the character Meowth, which is a bit abrupt. Anyway, it feels like it was added specifically for Team Rocket's logo (the R logo, and Meowth). After all, this book is based on Sakaki (there is also a cat in the anime), and there is a lack of human touch between people and Pokémon. It must be the same. I asked everyone here why they love Pokémon, and the answer is probably about the bond between people and Pokémon. If the bond between Meowth and the protagonist cannot be highlighted, it is okay not to add this character. As for Meowth's role, hacker talent, and technological talent, you can also create a scientific researcher to replace it. Summary: It looks good, I hope it doesn't end badly! I'm chovy! You guys have finished writing the book for me! ! (Inexplicable madness, Gazi sound), I hope this book can become a god. In the future, when book friends mention good Pokémon books, some people will think of this book.

Okay, I can only say that as always, I really need to pay attention to you. Don't watch if you can't stand the darkness. The Pokémon I watched before were already very dark. I thought there wouldn't be any more, but you turned around and ate them one by one. I agree with you. The writing is very detailed and slow-paced. The middle part is not as slow as expected, and it is not a procrastinating type. It is quite enjoyable. But most people writing in this genre don't get high ratings, so come on! , I hope there will be more, don't stop. Also, it is a pity that it is not the power of Viridian, although it is understandable according to the setting of this book... I almost finished reading it in one sitting. It was very satisfying and interesting. The things I added are also good. It doesn't feel too disconnected. The brothers are not dragging their feet and are always growing. It seems to be slow-paced and not very fast, but in fact it is a refreshing novel that is almost out of date for the same age group. It's just that the progress of the plot is not that fast, so the organizational progress of Team Rocket that I want to see is too slow, almost non-existent, and there is also the issue of mythical beasts, which is a pity. Full, correspondingly I hope the author will save more manuscripts, and there will be more updates To sum up, I like Boss Sakaki's charm, strength of character, and pacing. Anyway, there are still a few million words to finish. It is updated a lot every day. It has learned the lessons of the first book and deleted many criticisms and uncomfortable points (although there are still some shadows of the first book). Yes, it's quite nice that there are pictures of many famous scenes later, such as General Drew's heroic death in battle.

It's really good-looking. The protagonist has a high IQ and is very decisive in killing. When he was weak at the beginning, he was always suppressed by the aristocratic family, but overall it is still very good, and he will rise in the future. The pace is very slow. In the fourth chapter, it is said that there are two months left for the college entrance examination. Chapter 470 has not yet started. Generally, I can't read novels at a slow pace, but this book looks pretty good [Blow kiss]

What attracts me most about this novel is the description of the bond between the protagonist and Pokémon, and this kind of half-group portrait makes all the supporting characters flesh and blood, which makes people feel really distressed. Although there is a shadow of mysterious resurrection in the setting, it is undeniable that this is a masterpiece of Pokémon, and it can even be ranked among the top three Pokémon among all the Pokémon in Tomato. I will put it here, welcome to slap in the face

I finished reading it in the past two days. It can be said that it is a very good Pokémon game? A dark-style system text, this book can be said to be the first dark-style Pokémon fanfic that I am willing to get into. I feel that it is well written, and the author has updated a lot [Blow kiss]

The first time I clicked in, I quit after reading a few chapters. When I clicked in again, I have read more than 370 chapters in one go. The pace of this book is not fast, but it is not slow either. Taking a closer look at the protagonist, absolute reason and strategy, and the overall shaping of Team Rocket, it was written bit by bit unexpectedly. In any case, the content of this book exceeded my expectations. Normally, I rarely give five stars, and I don't even have many comments (except for the occasional whim review). But I give this book five stars with both hands, cheers for the author. The book is very good and updated quickly. I have been following it for more than a day and I have caught up with the big team. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's a Dark City beast-control novel with Pokémon skins, but the number of updated words is great, the quality is not bad, and it's edible [Like]

It's so beautiful, but the slow pace is still frustrating right now. Especially since we don't know how long it will take for the man-made mythical beasts to appear. But the story line and passion level are perfect. I hope I can watch it in one sitting.

The author pays great attention to the plot and writes it in a classic online writing style, but the details still need to be polished. The characters are very distinct, the thinking mode is single but distinctive, and he has unique insights into the selection of elves. If I have to say something: I feel that the author is writing the elves in the style of fantasy novels, and the characters in the style of urban novels. The author's writing style is acceptable, with no obvious bad points, and the details need to be polished. Judging from my standards for reading online articles, this work has reached a level above the passing line in my mind. If I look at Pokémon fandom alone, it seems to me that it has reached a good level and is full of potential. In addition, although the title says wooden template, you can feel that the protagonist in the author's works has more of his own flavor. To describe it, it is the soul background of the same color system, similar but obviously different. (Personal subjective) Overall evaluation: four stars

It's good to read. It's not the kind of mindless novel, but the pacing is well controlled. The protagonist doesn't have too many sad and deflated scenes. Even if the pacing is slow, it doesn't feel frustrating. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future. There are not many nuclear power writers ~ [Chigua]

The quality is very high, unlike something written by a newbie. It's refreshing, not procrastinating, nor overwhelming. The plot is compact, and there are basically no poisonous points. The most important thing is that the update speed is really fast, but it's still not enough to watch.

I have never reviewed a book before, this is my first time writing a book review. I have to say that the author's later writing was so enjoyable. As a person who likes Sakaki himself, it was so enjoyable to read. When I read it in the early stage, I was worried that the author's combat power would be broken. After all, the main character was too weak, but in the later stage, it was okay. I have read a lot of elf books, but there are very few excellent Sakaki templates. Other books start with civilians at the beginning, go to Devil's Island (that should be the name) for trials, and then the Viper Instructor. To be honest, they are not very good, including the main character who travels to the elf world and becomes Sakaki. As for the author's book, with the declaration in the heart of the protagonist in the later period, I can at least feel the resonance of the hero who emerges from the chaotic situation, and the sincere madness of his subordinates to set off his leadership ability is completely super beautiful. Because what I like is like Darkness Rises. The low-level trainers are basically lone wolves, and then use the Rockets as a springboard, which is more biased towards the alliance. Most of the ambitions of the boss Sakaki failed, and they all traveled through the Pokémon world, including Dodo, Daigo, Kikuko, etc. Sakaki's ambitions are not easy to realize. But as a fan of Sakaki, I really want to see him realize his ambition. So what the author writes touches me very much. I like to read dark articles, but I don't like to read the kind of articles that are too dark and cold, such as purely treating Pokémon as a machine for training and not writing about bonds. The author's writing is very good. The protagonist I like is the kind who is serious, has ideals, ambitions, and dares to risk his life. Therefore, the author must not abandon the article and stop updating it. The writing is really good, so keep up the good work. In addition, I think the author's rhythm is very good. It is more in line with the rhythm of the starting point. Just stick to yourself. Don't listen to others who say that writing is too fast. It is too fast and the emotions are not rendered in place, and there is no resonance at all. There is no time to lay the groundwork. It is very good at the current stage, and the combat power will easily collapse if it is too fast in the later stage.

It's not bad. It's a bit typical in the early stage, but it's better not to be too that in the later part. The article tells the story well. Come on, author. Don't deliberately write against the children of aristocratic families. The writing style is still good, but it always seems that the children of aristocratic families are superior to others. What kind of bodyguards are there? Looks down on civilians. It looks very disturbing. It feels like this aspect is too deliberately portrayed.

After reading it for a few days, I finally caught up with the progress. It's not bad. The only drawback is that the pace is too slow. I can believe that the time in the novel with more than 700 chapters has only passed a few months. The later stages are quite exciting. It is really decisive and decisive. I didn't expect to watch it for 60 hours. If you don't understand anything, you can ask me😀

Basically, I've read Pokémon pretty well. I feel like this book is dark, but it's not so brainless. There's no nonsensical dark plot. It's all based on the premise. How about the combat power? So far, I don't feel that it's broken down. But the family relationship is not arranged very well. I hope the author can fill in the gaps.

It's very good-looking, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is a bit better than Shuangwen's. There are many tearful scenes, passionate and decisive killing, and there is no female protagonist, but it is still very enjoyable to watch! Ready for the second brush!

Needless to say, it's great. It's updated steadily, with a large amount of content. The writing is online. The protagonist is decisive and unpretentious. He has his own bottom line and rules for doing things. It's very enjoyable to watch. The key is that he will make up for it at least five times a day. Where can I find such a conscientious author? I just fell in love with him [Admiration]

I don't know why, but I don't really like some cool articles about being invincible at the beginning. Although those can satisfy my fantasy self in the spiritual world, they are too far away from me. This book is different. It tells a story of companionship and perseverance, friendship and family affection, a common people versus class, and a story of growth. After the protagonist sees the nature of the world clearly, he and his partners continue to become stronger and improve themselves, and at the same time have their own bottom line and reverse scale. Turning the tide is about to fall, and the supporting building is about to collapse. I read Chapter 192 when I was reviewing. I don't know the plot behind it, but the first part is really good.

Purely personal opinion I feel that there is nothing wrong with the author's ideas, but his writing style is a little inferior. Also, it is better not to brag about the main character, but to describe it a little bit is enough. Finally, there is still room for improvement