Douluo II: the Moon Turns White Tonight

Little sister, the author, you are so awesome. You actually wrote such a masterpiece. After reading it, my feet were lifting off the ground and I was chosen by God. My heart was pounding. OK, I will give you a five-star review.

It's very delicious. I can't find the kind of meal replacement in Dou Er fan fiction. The genre is novel. Narcissus is the best, and the year is the best. In the beginning, I was actually a little concerned that Yan Qing's character was a bit flat. Later, I found that the author's writing is getting better and better. I just feel that time flies very fast. Yan Qing is not like other fan fiction. The protagonist treats the protagonist like a nanny. Yan Qing has always cared about his family, and he has always treated people sincerely and gently. Maybe I am a protagonist-controller, and I don't like Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong very much, but it is undeniable that the author did not deliberately discredit them. Dai Yueheng is simply a guiding young lover. Dai Huabin and Zhu Lu in the article are no longer the flat supporting characters in the original work. Their charm can be felt in this article. If I were not trying to squeeze the points, I would be afraid that the author's big book would be gone, so it would really not be just four stars, but five stars.

It looks good, but if it doesn't look good, I will eat it upside down💩, the writing is online, the plot is online, the characters are not OOC, Dai Yaoheng is a guiding lover, it really feels like a good match [love][love][love][love][love][love][love][][][ Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Let's control the points.

This article has a novel angle, is very smooth, and is also very sweet. The relationship between Little Moon and Little White Tiger is so delicate and natural that it makes people smile like an aunt unconsciously. Overall, this article is good ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺I hope the author will work hard.

It is considered top-notch among Douluo fanfics. It's just that there are too many knives and the different perspectives will make it very frustrating for those who like cool novels. The guiding lover has a growth element, and the supporting characters are not simply mentioned in one stroke, and there is no such thing as inducing war that worsens the personalities of the different characters in the original work. In fact, I originally wanted to give it four stars because some of the expressions were too blunt, or a bit offensive and artificial... But if it was a pure romance between a young couple, there would be no problem without discussing the plot and description. The narcissus is still delicious, but it took a long time to be in another place. The later emotional description made me cry, but it was very satisfying. Anyway, I really like the author's writing characteristics. [Praise]

In the previous description, both the setting and the plot are very smooth. Especially in the first two chapters, the speculations about the protagonist's setting are very novel and brilliant. In the middle part, whether it is team cooperation (making plans together) or interactions with other characters, both the supporting characters and the protagonist are well portrayed and the characters are very vivid. But after the game, the part where Huo Yuhao and the others started trouble felt very strange. Whether it was the psychological reaction process of the protagonist or the occurrence and results of the game itself, it was not very understandable (but in the chapter about the bet before the game, Dai Huabin's psychological description was really good). After reading some of the answers, I felt that this part was indeed connected with the subsequent growth, but it did more harm than good. The overall feeling is that Huo Yuhao and the others provoked trouble, and the protagonist felt that he was in a dilemma (guilty? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣), And then they won normally in the middle, and then Dai Huabin wanted to kowtow, and the protagonist came out to stop him (regret? ), And then Huo Yuhao and the others generously forgave, gaining a reputation as a good person, and Dai Huabin and the others may really have the reputation of being incompetent (who relied on the support department in their team to turn the tide, and relied on family resources to become the champion).

Very nice! (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡, A rare Dou 2 fanfic, Dai Yueheng x Yan Qing, were they brothers in the early stage? Dai Yueheng is very concerned about appearance. Their relationship comes naturally, is sweet, and is a growth story. Xiao Hongchen ended up taking the same path as the original work, what a pity! Huo Yuhao will not have a relationship with Chengzi Wang Qiuer, but his relationship with Wang Dong is very sweet, which is good!

It's super, super good-looking. It's the first time I've seen this type of film. Qingqing is super cute. Dai Huabin's change is also very good. I like the description of family love written by the boss. It's very warm. Everyone is a good baby.

I really can't find another Dou Er fanfic that suits my liking as well as it's not as cliche as other fanfics. I highly recommend it! I usually finish reading an unfinished novel and won't continue reading it until there is an update, but I've been waiting for this one, it's a really awesome one.

The relationship between the protagonists is really good, and I'm very touched. This is the best Douluo fanfic I've ever read so far. It's not very different from the main plot, but it's really interesting.

Beautiful... A very gentle article... Tenderness is rarely used to describe a novel, but this novel is really suitable. Both the writing style and the characters are so gentle, like being immersed in soft water, like being immersed in the moonlight, comfortable and warm, the gurgling stream wraps you...

The writing style is very good. I have collected articles and updated them regularly. I am so lucky to have a big foreign persimmon. I don't know how to evaluate the hardships I have endured over the years. It's really amazing. I'm so touched to see such a big miracle.

I quite like it. The writing is quite fluent. It's not a cookie-cutter attempt to please the original protagonist, or to make fun of the original protagonist.

Although many people in the comment area are talking about controlling points, I still feel that I don't want to go against my heart. The author's writing is really very delicate. When I read it, it feels like I am touching a heart. There is no sense of violation, as if it drives my thinking. All developments are very reasonable. This is the best Dou Er fanfic I have ever read. It made me feel the purity of love. Really good. [Praise]

Wow wow wow, it's beautiful [shy][shy], the author really wrote it very well, even if it's another type of making up for regrets in Dou Erli, really, this is the ending they deserve. The characters created by the author are really good. Although Dai Hao, the White Tiger Duke, had Yuhao with Huo Yun'er not long after he had Dai Huabin (although he didn't know that he had another son, but he later found out) , but it made the duchess feel conflicted and unhappy. As the duchess of the White Tiger Duke's Palace, she never disdained to harm Huo Yun'er, who was an ordinary person, so she gave birth to Huo Yuhao, and then let them fend for themselves, not harming but not interfering (Huo Yun'er was originally a servant). Later, she gave Huo Yuhao the expenses to bury his mother, and allowed him to come to the Duke's Palace to seek revenge/settlement in the future when he was able. Dai Huabin is the second son of the Dai family. He is proud and domineering, but he never lacks responsibility. Later, he became a man who could be proud of his family and his brother. Really nice.

The writing is good and the characters are well developed. Dai Yueheng's thoughts are eloquently told so that people can feel the emotions contained in them. From the moment I clicked on this book, I read it until the end (which is not finished yet). Highly recommended

Everyone here has a happy ending. The whole story is ordinary, but it makes people feel that this is how it should be. I have always felt that the Hongchen brothers and sisters are quite pitiful. After reading the teacher's article, I felt relieved🥹But the length is a bit short. Speaking of which, shouldn't the wedding be arranged? Can I still watch the extras?

Although the author said to control the score, I think this book deserves this score. When I first watched it, I thought Qingqing's character was bland and introverted, maybe because she only knew her brother. But in the later stages, Qingqing had more people who cared about him and got along well with his brother. I have to say that Qingqing is a very gentle, kind and sincere baby! There is still a little sadistic part

This is the best Douluo fanfic I have seen so far. Everyone has their own obsessions. The so-called villains are not completely bad, and good are not pure. Everyone has their own story, and they all have logic. They do not vilify or beautify the protagonist group. I hope the author will post more [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I read a few chapters before going to bed, but I was hooked right away. The author's writing style is naturally not stiff, the details are well laid out, and the characters' emotions are accurately grasped. Once I read it, I couldn't stop and delayed my sleep. I like this kind of book that doesn't have a word count👍🏻

It's very beautiful. I give it four stars just to keep the score high. This is the first Douluo fanfic I've read. I couldn't stand the others. To be honest, I actually wanted to cry when I saw the end. Qingqing, Dai Yueheng, you should have been blessed long ago.

It's really super good-looking. It's just to score points. It's the first time I've seen the cp group I want most.

It looks good, I recommend it [send heart][send heart][send heart]

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Me, why do you look so good?

Super beautiful, love it😍

Very good, very good. The score is already 6.7, So I won't lower the score.

So sweet 🍬 I hope ᵒ̴̶̷̥ ‸ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥ can come to his senses as soon as possible*͈ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈ෆ, don't let the little tiger wait too long [Love](￣y▽￣)~* Cover your mouth and snicker

It's really super beautiful, this book really made me cry😭😭

I really like the protagonist. The author really writes it very well. I also like the family relationship.