In Another World, I Established a Family by Opening a Shop and Becoming an Ancestor.

After all, I like fantasy store-opening novels. I remember the first time I read it, it was a store manager. I was attracted by it at the time. I read more than 1,000 of them and almost finished them. Later, when I wanted to find similar novels, I realized that there were very few of them [face covering]. Reading this book gave me the same feeling as before, and it felt like I was back to 6 years ago. Maybe you think it's too naive, or something else, but to me, it's very good and has the same feeling as before. I hope the author can work hard. After all, there are very few testimonials for this kind of novel [face covering], but if you persist, there will be many people. Also, there are very few recommendations. I came in because of the tomato pop-up window that recalled that it was very similar to what I had read before.

It's stable. There's no poison in the beginning and it should be about the same later on. It's just too common. In the world of cultivating immortals, selling things related to cultivating immortals can only be said to be very stable. Suggestion: It would be better to sell some things like All Heavens and Worlds, and add some ups and downs of the plot. The things that sell in the world of immortality are just the same, weapons, elixirs, talismans, exercises, and formations, which are really a bit boring. To sell something special, such as: character experience cards, plug-ins, technological brain machines, super powers, items or abilities in other animation movies [Thinking]

Invincible enchantment is not a useless setting. . . It is a necessary necessity. . . Prevent the protagonist from dying suddenly and inexplicably, so that the novel can be written smoothly. . . Let your fists speak here. If you are bigger than you, you can do whatever you want. . . After all, there are not only decent people here but also more evil and demonic cultivators. . [Make a face][make a face]

After reading a few chapters, I will support a wave of new authors.

The start is very stable, there is no unnecessary nonsense, the system settings are clear and not complicated, the protagonist's action logic is online, not aggrieved, not a virgin, and the refreshing points are given in a timely manner.

The current thinking is clear and logical

Very nice author, please keep writing.

Very smooth and easy to write,

After reading a few chapters, the flaws are not concealed.

It's relatively easy, okay

Good, good, good

It's not easy to write a book but... It's too novice. Please do your best, author.