Horror: the Devil Changes Pinocchio at the Beginning, and the Devil Is Torn Apart by Hand

This book is good, but the weird energy required to create monsters is a pitfall. Since it is the only hidden profession, how can you be subject to weird energy? You should input weird energy independently when creating monsters. If you input more, it will be stronger, and if you input less, it will be weaker. It is both quantity and quality. The weak has the advantage of being weak. The investigation can be left to these weak people. At least the autonomy of creating monsters is in their own hands. It is not like being forced to create now. After reading this, who will wait for you to update slowly? I can't compare to this book by my peers. I have read more than a dozen books of this type. None of them have survived. They have either been removed from the shelves or have been discontinued for a year or two [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Interestingly, this is the best thriller game movie, but there is also a game played by a Weibo anchor, which is a bit exciting, but not too exciting. So cool! This kind of game of upgrading and becoming stronger is really suitable for young people like us to watch.

It's good to read, really good. The characters in this book are not the type of mindless and condescending people, which is good. The protagonist is also very smart, with an online IQ. It's fun, thrilling, and a bit weird like a supernatural novel. Moreover, the book doesn't scheming with others, because the protagonist doesn't seem to have too many social activities with others. If you want to read intelligent and refreshing articles, you can read it. You won't lose money by investing in it! The combat power system is a bit confusing in the later stages. Later, it is completely sideways and invincible. The main reason is that there are too many "children". Even if you can't beat the later dungeons, you can still win with more people. In fact, you can set a limit. Later updated dungeons can only bring a certain number of "children". Otherwise, there is really nothing to see, and you can't clear the level at once. , There should also be some places that use your brain to analyze. You can't just look at the "children", you can write a place that requires teleportation to enter, but due to the instability of the space, it is separated from the "children", and then you have to rely on the protagonist to think about the rules to successfully pass the level. You can also find "children" in the process, but not too many, because if there are too many, there will be nothing to see.

This book is very well written, and I still like dark fairy tales, but the content is a bit short, and it's very good. ][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration ][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The author is really creative and has a lot of imagination. It is the first time I see this type of novel. I have never read this subject before and it feels very novel. Moreover, the writing is very beautiful and refreshing. Cinderella and Pinocchio are also more in line with the setting. Although the setting has been changed, come on author! I particularly enjoyed reading this novel you wrote, and I am very satisfied! I hope I won't stop updating after I finish writing it.

Not bad, not bad at the end, or, if you don't have inspiration, it should be a seven or more

The concept is very good, but the details are a bit lacking. And the pace is faster.

In my opinion, it is a work worth more than eight points

Not bad. The protagonist is good-looking and neat enough.

First of all, the material selection of this novel is very novel, and the pace is not laggy so far. I like this kind of novel without ink, just like the kind of level-breaking, it is very suitable to pass the time. I just listen to it while drawing or before going to bed. But what is strange is why the protagonist adapts so well to this horror game, and he also knows the detailed usage and level of many props. I think other passers-by can't tell the difference. Points, but the protagonist knows everything as if he has an encyclopedia in his brain, and there is no sense of discomfort in the character of the protagonist. He doesn't feel like a new player or an aborigine. The book says he has a withdrawn personality. I don't think this is described as withdrawn. It feels like a villain who has been waiting for a horror game to come, but at the same time, I don't know why he shows some sympathy. It's amazing for those ghosts.

As long as it doesn't suck, this is a new masterpiece in Tomato, come on!

Personally, I think it's quite good. The story characters are not limited to Andersen. There are also many Grimm's fairy tales. It's quite novel. I mainly want to see what kind of fairy tale characters he can write [exploration][exploration][exploration][exploration]

My eyes lit up after reading this, and I hope to strengthen the main character's identity.

The concept is novel, the content is overall good, and the pace is slightly fast. I would like to suggest that the protagonist should be strengthened, and I hope it doesn't end more poorly.

It's good-looking, with various dark fairy tales intertwined. The protagonist is decisive and decisive in killing and is not a virgin. He lives alone [Love] and doesn't sell sheep over others.

I think the subject matter is quite new for Tomato. At least I haven't seen much of it. I feel that if I keep it up, I will get good results. Also, don't stop updating. High scores are considered as encouragement.

It's good-looking, very good-looking. The subject matter is novel and the logic is clear. The protagonist's care for each family member, including each family member's reaction, is described in detail. It looks very comfortable. The author has to work hard. It's not enough.

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of subject matter. I really like it, but in fact some details are not handled properly. Maybe the author only considered the outline when writing. But in terms of the overall plot direction, there is nothing major wrong with it. The pace is relatively fast, and it is a practical and refreshing article. If more attention could be paid to the details and the settings that were not perfect before could be completed, I think it would be a better book.

Three chapters a day? It's very good, the style is quite interesting, but it just means that you are killing monsters every time. This kind of story is of a growth type, not a mindless and cool novel.

Creativity is 4 points. There are still quite a lot of copies. However, invincibility is too early and there is no room for improvement. Skill combination? Rule utilization? Props and equipment? Skill matching? Operational cooperation? None, just rush over, get a dungeon, say the name of the monster, and click, the summoned object is cleared. Chapter 10 to Chapter 20 are invincible, there are no restrictions, the summoned object will not be broken, and there is no weakness~

How should I put it? The early stage was pretty good, but the later stage was just so-so. I kept fighting monsters, and in the later stage, the protagonist group basically had no setbacks. '͜' The author may try to add some setbacks to give the plot a little more scope.

It's beautiful, I'd love to read more. The author writes four pictures a day, which is not enough to add more.

Now that I've seen it, I think it's pretty good. I like this dark style very much. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] I've been reading novels for so long and finally found a good one.

The protagonist is very smart and won't throw out the "Mother's Heart" randomly. He is calm and smart. The official is also smart and won't target the protagonist if he doesn't join. Moreover, the author has a very big imagination and can give me unexpected plots every time.

Yes, it looks good. I recommend everyone to watch it.

This book is very good, the only drawback is that it is too short. [Learned]

There is really very little written about this subject. This book is quite interesting. The themes of those dark fairy tales I read before. The shortcomings are too obvious.

It's very beautiful. If the author keeps at it, it will definitely be an 8-part work.

The subject matter is novel and beautiful. I like this kind of doll making the most. Can the author add some male fairy tale characters?

The plot is okay, not toxic. The language is also quite fluent.