[Beast World+Transformation+Double Cleansing+1v1 Love Cookies]
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Because Bai Mianmian took a bite of fried pork with chili pepper and was inexplicably transported into the beast world, before she could find a way to survive in the beast world. A silent, sharp, and elusive snake quietly wrapped itself around my ankle.
Her long gray-black hair, impeccable face, generous chest, and strong and perfect mermaid lines were buried in the darkness in the corner.
When Bai Mianmian thought she was picked up by Dark Mushroom, Dark Mushroom quietly put all her belongings behind her and observed her secretly.
Dark Mushroom is puzzled: Why does she keep staring at me? Does she like me?
Dark Mushroom wondered: Why did she suddenly lower her head and stop talking? Is she hungry?
Dark Mushroom Panic: She didn't dare tell me if she was hungry! She was afraid that I wouldn't be able to feed her!
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Bai Mianmian didn't know anything but thought about her past and present lives, but she was frightened by the beautiful snake entangled in the "dowry" and fainted.
When she tried to communicate with the beautiful snake, the handsome and considerate young man crushed her heart so hard that she could not stick to her original intention.
What's wrong with the snake? Even a snake can't help but fall into this trap.
Reader comments
The author's setting is quite good. I read it just for the setting, and it took me a long time to finish it.
In some places, the sentences are really hard to read. I was reading this without thinking, but it made me feel uncomfortable. After reading it several times, it still didn't read smoothly [face covering]
I feel like the author really wanted to write every little character well and give them an ending, but I think the characters are still pretty flat. I don't feel much about them. I even think deleting them won't have much impact on the main story [laughs and cries]
According to the name of the novel, I thought it was mainly about the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, but I didn't expect that there was also a lot about the supporting characters. [Shocked] [Chigua] I think it would be better to write more about their emotional lines and the changing points of their emotions, because overall, the length of the male and female protagonists is about 40% to that of the supporting characters [Explore]
I read the author's comments and it's my first time writing a book, so I hope the author can work harder [Love]
This is the most existential beast god I have ever seen. It is not a vague belief. Beast god, you are really a practical person. You are always willing to ask for help. You are really willing to help me when I need it [Adoration]
The author's writing style is pretty good. Several sets of cp lines are handled well and not cluttered. This is my favorite style of writing. But if you don't like multiple cps, you can wait and see more, because there are still many sets of cps. I personally don't like to see the main cp and the deputy cp lines of each team interspersed back and forth. So I don't feel like I like it very much, but I really like the main CP written by the author, so I actually read it a bit awkwardly. If you like a lot of CP, you can close your eyes and rush in. If you don't like it very much, you can see if you can accept it, because the author's writing is really good, but it's a pity that there is no traffic.
How can I put it this way? This writing style made me, a bookworm of nearly 20 years, look at it twice and then again. However, I really like this setting.
It looks very good so far, and the male protagonist is also a very good snake. It feels a bit different from the snake settings I have seen before, which is awesome. Puppies come from snakes. And he respects the heroine very much. The heroine is also very bold, a straight-shooting person
It's quite interesting. The 1V1 young couple's daily life is very enjoyable. The protagonist and other characters are very vivid. There are different control groups. The short sweet story is not abusive. The fishing-type puppy Snake who is very capable and husband-like and can act like a spoiled child also won my heart. However, the extra story is a bit short and not enough to watch [Sending Hearts]
The pair of main CPs, Xia Qing and Mian, have a faint sense of cuteness, and the deputy CPs are also pretty good. The Beast God really does what he wants, which is great.
But I feel that the writing jumps too fast, and sometimes it is not clear who said what. You can learn from other authors and use an ellipsis to separate the scenes, or use * when changing scenes. Apart from this, there are no major shortcomings, it is still very accessible, and the world level is also perfect.
When I think of Qing and Mian getting married, Wu said not to save people, but Qing also strictly followed it (os: You can't ruin the relationship between me and Mian). Of course, Mian didn't mean to save, the little couple looked so cute [laughing]
୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ Come on, author
It's meaty and has a good plot, and it's very sweet~
I feel so comfortable watching 1v1 [Adoration][Admiration]
It's pretty good-looking, not too cruel. I recommend it. The male protagonist will make a lot of beautiful clothes for the female protagonist. There are basically no bad guys.
Beautiful, sweet and reassuring
Okay, okay, pretty good
Still very interesting
Who knows, it's so sweet, and it has a plot and flesh. I can't stand it anymore. I love the husband and the male protagonist to death. Author, you are so good at writing. [Love]
Good-looking, good-looking, delicious, delicious
It's beautiful, super beautiful. Good luck, author. I'm looking forward to your next book.
Although it only writes about one year of life, it is very sweet, and the group portraits are also well written. The emotions of the male and female protagonists are warm and delicate. It will be easier to read if you break up the long sentences [Blow Kiss]
At the moment, I think it's okay. It's a nice little sweet article. You can read it [I learned it]
The author's setting is quite good. I read it just for the setting, and it took me a long time to finish it. In some places, the sentences are really hard to read. I was reading this without thinking, but it made me feel uncomfortable. After reading it several times, it still didn't read smoothly [face covering] I feel like the author really wanted to write every little character well and give them an ending, but I think the characters are still pretty flat. I don't feel much about them. I even think deleting them won't have much impact on the main story [laughs and cries] According to the name of the novel, I thought it was mainly about the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, but I didn't expect that there was also a lot about the supporting characters. [Shocked] [Chigua] I think it would be better to write more about their emotional lines and the changing points of their emotions, because overall, the length of the male and female protagonists is about 40% to that of the supporting characters [Explore] I read the author's comments and it's my first time writing a book, so I hope the author can work harder [Love]
This is the most existential beast god I have ever seen. It is not a vague belief. Beast god, you are really a practical person. You are always willing to ask for help. You are really willing to help me when I need it [Adoration]
The author's writing style is pretty good. Several sets of cp lines are handled well and not cluttered. This is my favorite style of writing. But if you don't like multiple cps, you can wait and see more, because there are still many sets of cps. I personally don't like to see the main cp and the deputy cp lines of each team interspersed back and forth. So I don't feel like I like it very much, but I really like the main CP written by the author, so I actually read it a bit awkwardly. If you like a lot of CP, you can close your eyes and rush in. If you don't like it very much, you can see if you can accept it, because the author's writing is really good, but it's a pity that there is no traffic.
How can I put it this way? This writing style made me, a bookworm of nearly 20 years, look at it twice and then again. However, I really like this setting.
It looks very good so far, and the male protagonist is also a very good snake. It feels a bit different from the snake settings I have seen before, which is awesome. Puppies come from snakes. And he respects the heroine very much. The heroine is also very bold, a straight-shooting person
It's quite interesting. The 1V1 young couple's daily life is very enjoyable. The protagonist and other characters are very vivid. There are different control groups. The short sweet story is not abusive. The fishing-type puppy Snake who is very capable and husband-like and can act like a spoiled child also won my heart. However, the extra story is a bit short and not enough to watch [Sending Hearts]
The pair of main CPs, Xia Qing and Mian, have a faint sense of cuteness, and the deputy CPs are also pretty good. The Beast God really does what he wants, which is great. But I feel that the writing jumps too fast, and sometimes it is not clear who said what. You can learn from other authors and use an ellipsis to separate the scenes, or use * when changing scenes. Apart from this, there are no major shortcomings, it is still very accessible, and the world level is also perfect. When I think of Qing and Mian getting married, Wu said not to save people, but Qing also strictly followed it (os: You can't ruin the relationship between me and Mian). Of course, Mian didn't mean to save, the little couple looked so cute [laughing] ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ Come on, author
It's meaty and has a good plot, and it's very sweet~
I feel so comfortable watching 1v1 [Adoration][Admiration]
It's pretty good-looking, not too cruel. I recommend it. The male protagonist will make a lot of beautiful clothes for the female protagonist. There are basically no bad guys.
Beautiful, sweet and reassuring
Okay, okay, pretty good
Still very interesting
Who knows, it's so sweet, and it has a plot and flesh. I can't stand it anymore. I love the husband and the male protagonist to death. Author, you are so good at writing. [Love]
Good-looking, good-looking, delicious, delicious
It's beautiful, super beautiful. Good luck, author. I'm looking forward to your next book.
Although it only writes about one year of life, it is very sweet, and the group portraits are also well written. The emotions of the male and female protagonists are warm and delicate. It will be easier to read if you break up the long sentences [Blow Kiss]
At the moment, I think it's okay. It's a nice little sweet article. You can read it [I learned it]