Lost in the Beast World: My Humble Beast Husband Won't Let Go with His Snake Tail

The author's setting is quite good. I read it just for the setting, and it took me a long time to finish it. In some places, the sentences are really hard to read. I was reading this without thinking, but it made me feel uncomfortable. After reading it several times, it still didn't read smoothly [face covering] I feel like the author really wanted to write every little character well and give them an ending, but I think the characters are still pretty flat. I don't feel much about them. I even think deleting them won't have much impact on the main story [laughs and cries] According to the name of the novel, I thought it was mainly about the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, but I didn't expect that there was also a lot about the supporting characters. [Shocked] [Chigua] I think it would be better to write more about their emotional lines and the changing points of their emotions, because overall, the length of the male and female protagonists is about 40% to that of the supporting characters [Explore] I read the author's comments and it's my first time writing a book, so I hope the author can work harder [Love]

The author's writing style is pretty good. Several sets of cp lines are handled well and not cluttered. This is my favorite style of writing. But if you don't like multiple cps, you can wait and see more, because there are still many sets of cps. I personally don't like to see the main cp and the deputy cp lines of each team interspersed back and forth. So I don't feel like I like it very much, but I really like the main CP written by the author, so I actually read it a bit awkwardly. If you like a lot of CP, you can close your eyes and rush in. If you don't like it very much, you can see if you can accept it, because the author's writing is really good, but it's a pity that there is no traffic.

How can I put it this way? This writing style made me, a bookworm of nearly 20 years, look at it twice and then again. However, I really like this setting.

This is the most existential beast god I have ever seen. It is not a vague belief. Beast god, you are really a practical person. You are always willing to ask for help. You are really willing to help me when I need it [Adoration]

It looks very good so far, and the male protagonist is also a very good snake. It feels a bit different from the snake settings I have seen before, which is awesome. Puppies come from snakes. And he respects the heroine very much. The heroine is also very bold, a straight-shooting person

It's quite interesting. The 1V1 young couple's daily life is very enjoyable. The protagonist and other characters are very vivid. There are different control groups. The short sweet story is not abusive. The fishing-type puppy Snake who is very capable and husband-like and can act like a spoiled child also won my heart. However, the extra story is a bit short and not enough to watch [Sending Hearts]

The pair of main CPs, Xia Qing and Mian, have a faint sense of cuteness, and the deputy CPs are also pretty good. The Beast God really does what he wants, which is great. But I feel that the writing jumps too fast, and sometimes it is not clear who said what. You can learn from other authors and use an ellipsis to separate the scenes, or use * when changing scenes. Apart from this, there are no major shortcomings, it is still very accessible, and the world level is also perfect. When I think of Qing and Mian getting married, Wu said not to save people, but Qing also strictly followed it (os: You can't ruin the relationship between me and Mian). Of course, Mian didn't mean to save, the little couple looked so cute [laughing] ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ Come on, author

It's meaty and has a good plot, and it's very sweet~

It's pretty good-looking, not too cruel. I recommend it. The male protagonist will make a lot of beautiful clothes for the female protagonist. There are basically no bad guys.

I feel so comfortable watching 1v1 [Adoration][Admiration]