Hmm..., Many people say that my writing is very similar to Murphy...
So...
Then let's do it together!
Re-reviewing Ai Wu and Po Shi from the perspective of Zhang Wei (and Hu Qiang), we will focus on Ai Wu and appropriately intersperse the plot of Po Shi.
Some plots may be slightly different and some adjustments will be made.
I don't have much confidence, I just want to write, my pen power is limited, it may be poisonous, don't enter it if you don't like it, don't enter it if you don't like it, don't enter it if you don't like it! Say important things three times!
PS: I am indeed a waste, try to start over.
Reader comments
Could it be possible that Dali would temporarily let go of Zhang Wei in order to study abroad, but could he give up his own principles for Lao Hu?
To be honest, if Dali is compared with Mo Fei, there is really no comparison between Dali and Mo Fei. Later in the episode, it was said that Dali did various things to Zhang Wei, such as: grading Zhang Wei at every turn, asking Zhang Wei to go on a blind date for the so-called blind date essay, and asking Zhang Wei to be a 'son' for his love rival in order to practice his frugality. It can be seen that Zhang Wei's In fact, Dali didn't have much place in her heart. No matter how important she was, her thesis and her physics were not important. In contrast to Mo Fei, although she often criticized Hu Qiang, she was the one who understood and cared about Hu Qiang the most in the entire department. She was a typical arrogant person. If I really had to choose, I still hope it would be a better choice. At least it really changed Zhang Wei's life. He was really tired. For the sake of family and friends, I gave up my face, money, and time. Although the drama didn't say that he was given a girlfriend like Dali, in fact, he still didn't see his counterattack. He was still so pitiful, inferior, and kind-hearted. I hope this novel really gives the kind-hearted man a perfect ending.
I generally have relatively low expectations for iPartment fanfiction, especially now that my tastes are becoming more and more demanding, and I only want to see Zhang Wei as the protagonist. Under such specific requirements, it is generally difficult to produce mature works. I have been seeing today's update of this book, and I think it is really good, so I came here to give it five stars.
As a long-time fan of iPartment, I have read more than 100 fanfics. This book has a very novel concept and connects the universe of iPartment and the Broken Elite in a very clever way; and the protagonist is definitely an old fan of iPartment. He understands the plot very clearly, unlike many fan authors who have read it on the surface, but fans who are actually familiar with the plot will find very simple mistakes; the image of each character is also well grasped, and there is no plot that conflicts with the characters in the play.
Come on author, this book is really well written. In the niche category of love apartment with Zhang Wei as the protagonist, this book is a rare food for me recently.
It's a very good fanfic. Although some parts are all from the original drama, other parts maintain the characteristics of the characters. Dali is like Dali, and Mo Fei is like Mo Fei. The two are very different, but the shortcoming is that the content is not long enough, resulting in not enough plot allocated to a single person. It is only a superficial taste. It would be better to write more. It should be pretty good if the word count is enough.
There is another shortcoming. Although Zhang Wei's character characteristics are maintained, the upgraded Zhang Wei's characteristics are not described too much. He only has a youthful appearance and high physical fitness, but the descriptions are not enough. The content is still too short, please write more. Word count makes up for shortcomings
What does it feel like? It's like using AI to convert the plot of Love Apartment 5 into text. In fact, my requirements are not too high, but later on I asked you to change 100% to text, which is a bit too much.
The reason why Dali and Zhang Wei are not suitable for each other was made very clear by Yifei from the very beginning. They are completely from two different worlds.
It's good to read. I read a lot of books like Love Apartment and Broken Affair. They all started at the beginning, but I couldn't connect in the middle, so I stopped reading. But I read this book from beginning to end. I will always be looking for updates.
I hope that in the end, Zhang Wei will have to deal with Mo Fei. She has too little strength and too much reason. She will not accommodate Zhang Wei for the sake of her studies, but Mo Fei will.
I still think Murphy is better, and I don't mean to blame Dali. The main reason is that they are really old, and after Dali simulated the family, letting the love rival play the husband and the boyfriend playing the son did not feel like something a girlfriend would do.
The writing is really interesting, just two chapters a day, which is a bit too little [laughing], I suggest reading more chapters a day, otherwise, I would have to stop reading for 10 days just to enjoy it, and keep saving for 10 days, only to end up reading it all in a while, so uncomfortable [crying][crying][crying][crying]
It's been a blast reading what I've read so far, but two updates a day is too slow. Can you update a few more articles? Otherwise, I would have to save several chapters to read every time, which would be so uncomfortable [crying]
Ask the author online for more updates, readers will do anything [crying]
I like the delicious food, Mo Fei's initiative, Rose's gentleness, Dali's agility, and Xiao Bao's gentleness. The protagonist of this book is Zhang Wei, who has more core and charm, which is much better than the previous one. The previous book was as powerful as Yifei.
Is the heroine Ruoyu + Murphy? [Laughing] I feel like Ruoyu is so miserable. . Being prostituted for free
It seems that Rousi can be a doctor with the first blood. She is a bit conservative to begin with, a conservative girl like Xin Ling [laughing]
Is it the law that great efforts can produce miracles? True love's companionship is the sure winner, and four generations live under the same roof!
The most classy man in Da Zhangwei's apartment! ! !
The following nonsense:
(Two forces fight, Xiaopei eats the chicken
Standing on three pillars, the Sa family returns to Jin)
The idea is very novel, and the portrayal of the characters is very realistic. The emotional lines are also written very delicately and naturally. It doesn't look like a novice. To be honest, it is already very, very good at this level.
If you don't like it, don't come in. The integration is quite natural. I look forward to writing better. Not giving it five stars leaves room for improvement.
This is one of the better Aiwu fics on Tomato. The author writes it very carefully. I hope the author can finish it.
I hope it's a double heroine
The integration is pretty good, but I'm just confused about who to choose in the end, Dali or Murphy.
The writing is quite good, especially after Ouyang Murphy came, it became more and more interesting.
To be honest, it's really beautiful, [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Very thoughtful, writing about love five + not much trouble
It's really good-looking, the concept is very clever, Zhang Wei is worthy of love, there are not many real men, really
Good. It's becoming more and more in line with my heart.
It's really well written, good luck to the author
After reading this book, I always felt something was missing when reading other related books.
Hehe perfect book
Does this book have multiple heroines or a single heroine?
It's a good fanfic I've read. Come on, the author.
Could it be possible that Dali would temporarily let go of Zhang Wei in order to study abroad, but could he give up his own principles for Lao Hu?
To be honest, if Dali is compared with Mo Fei, there is really no comparison between Dali and Mo Fei. Later in the episode, it was said that Dali did various things to Zhang Wei, such as: grading Zhang Wei at every turn, asking Zhang Wei to go on a blind date for the so-called blind date essay, and asking Zhang Wei to be a 'son' for his love rival in order to practice his frugality. It can be seen that Zhang Wei's In fact, Dali didn't have much place in her heart. No matter how important she was, her thesis and her physics were not important. In contrast to Mo Fei, although she often criticized Hu Qiang, she was the one who understood and cared about Hu Qiang the most in the entire department. She was a typical arrogant person. If I really had to choose, I still hope it would be a better choice. At least it really changed Zhang Wei's life. He was really tired. For the sake of family and friends, I gave up my face, money, and time. Although the drama didn't say that he was given a girlfriend like Dali, in fact, he still didn't see his counterattack. He was still so pitiful, inferior, and kind-hearted. I hope this novel really gives the kind-hearted man a perfect ending.
I generally have relatively low expectations for iPartment fanfiction, especially now that my tastes are becoming more and more demanding, and I only want to see Zhang Wei as the protagonist. Under such specific requirements, it is generally difficult to produce mature works. I have been seeing today's update of this book, and I think it is really good, so I came here to give it five stars. As a long-time fan of iPartment, I have read more than 100 fanfics. This book has a very novel concept and connects the universe of iPartment and the Broken Elite in a very clever way; and the protagonist is definitely an old fan of iPartment. He understands the plot very clearly, unlike many fan authors who have read it on the surface, but fans who are actually familiar with the plot will find very simple mistakes; the image of each character is also well grasped, and there is no plot that conflicts with the characters in the play. Come on author, this book is really well written. In the niche category of love apartment with Zhang Wei as the protagonist, this book is a rare food for me recently.
It's a very good fanfic. Although some parts are all from the original drama, other parts maintain the characteristics of the characters. Dali is like Dali, and Mo Fei is like Mo Fei. The two are very different, but the shortcoming is that the content is not long enough, resulting in not enough plot allocated to a single person. It is only a superficial taste. It would be better to write more. It should be pretty good if the word count is enough. There is another shortcoming. Although Zhang Wei's character characteristics are maintained, the upgraded Zhang Wei's characteristics are not described too much. He only has a youthful appearance and high physical fitness, but the descriptions are not enough. The content is still too short, please write more. Word count makes up for shortcomings What does it feel like? It's like using AI to convert the plot of Love Apartment 5 into text. In fact, my requirements are not too high, but later on I asked you to change 100% to text, which is a bit too much.
The reason why Dali and Zhang Wei are not suitable for each other was made very clear by Yifei from the very beginning. They are completely from two different worlds.
It's good to read. I read a lot of books like Love Apartment and Broken Affair. They all started at the beginning, but I couldn't connect in the middle, so I stopped reading. But I read this book from beginning to end. I will always be looking for updates. I hope that in the end, Zhang Wei will have to deal with Mo Fei. She has too little strength and too much reason. She will not accommodate Zhang Wei for the sake of her studies, but Mo Fei will.
I still think Murphy is better, and I don't mean to blame Dali. The main reason is that they are really old, and after Dali simulated the family, letting the love rival play the husband and the boyfriend playing the son did not feel like something a girlfriend would do.
The writing is really interesting, just two chapters a day, which is a bit too little [laughing], I suggest reading more chapters a day, otherwise, I would have to stop reading for 10 days just to enjoy it, and keep saving for 10 days, only to end up reading it all in a while, so uncomfortable [crying][crying][crying][crying] It's been a blast reading what I've read so far, but two updates a day is too slow. Can you update a few more articles? Otherwise, I would have to save several chapters to read every time, which would be so uncomfortable [crying] Ask the author online for more updates, readers will do anything [crying]
I like the delicious food, Mo Fei's initiative, Rose's gentleness, Dali's agility, and Xiao Bao's gentleness. The protagonist of this book is Zhang Wei, who has more core and charm, which is much better than the previous one. The previous book was as powerful as Yifei.
Is the heroine Ruoyu + Murphy? [Laughing] I feel like Ruoyu is so miserable. . Being prostituted for free
It seems that Rousi can be a doctor with the first blood. She is a bit conservative to begin with, a conservative girl like Xin Ling [laughing]
Is it the law that great efforts can produce miracles? True love's companionship is the sure winner, and four generations live under the same roof! The most classy man in Da Zhangwei's apartment! ! ! The following nonsense: (Two forces fight, Xiaopei eats the chicken Standing on three pillars, the Sa family returns to Jin)
The idea is very novel, and the portrayal of the characters is very realistic. The emotional lines are also written very delicately and naturally. It doesn't look like a novice. To be honest, it is already very, very good at this level.
If you don't like it, don't come in. The integration is quite natural. I look forward to writing better. Not giving it five stars leaves room for improvement.
This is one of the better Aiwu fics on Tomato. The author writes it very carefully. I hope the author can finish it.
I hope it's a double heroine
The integration is pretty good, but I'm just confused about who to choose in the end, Dali or Murphy.
The writing is quite good, especially after Ouyang Murphy came, it became more and more interesting.
To be honest, it's really beautiful, [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Very thoughtful, writing about love five + not much trouble
It's really good-looking, the concept is very clever, Zhang Wei is worthy of love, there are not many real men, really
Good. It's becoming more and more in line with my heart.
It's really well written, good luck to the author
After reading this book, I always felt something was missing when reading other related books.
Hehe perfect book
Does this book have multiple heroines or a single heroine?
It's a good fanfic I've read. Come on, the author.
Come on and work hard
It's written like a guide
Good looking. Love to read and write quickly.