Harry Potter: I Built Hogwarts, the City of Magic!

The subject matter is novel enough. There are really few related to the Big Four, and this one is so special. I directly participated in the construction of the version, and did not delay meeting the ancestors, relatives, and descendants. [Sending my heart] The key is to leave your name. There is no need to bother with Bala's explanation. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧ But I should get more food, otherwise the child will be hungry _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

I am Su Yue, the protagonist of this article, and I am going to express my opinions: Regarding the four founders, my opinion is to let the hazy friendship fade away. Regarding GGAD, my opinion is, make peace with me! Regarding little Harry, my opinion is, kid, you have done a great job, take a rest, what? Made paranoid by past trauma? Go move some bricks and it will be cured. Regarding Teacher Si, you... I have no choice. You are quite stubborn. Let's try to keep you alive, okay? Regarding Big Tom, my opinion... Forget it, you won't take it lightly, just go and move the bricks!

It's very interesting, the plot is very novel, and it's the first one I've seen related to the Big Four!!! Super surprising, the plot is also very good, I really recommend it. I am also reading another book by the author DaDa. It is also a very good one. Come on, author DaDa 😳 I will support you behind the scenes!!!

This book is serious and good, the heroine leaves her name in all eras, and rarely tells the story of building a building, from a shovel to a castle. At the same time, the story of the Big Four is rare, and becoming the Big Five is beyond imagination. Finally, it can be seen that the author of this book is very serious in writing, and there is no artificial intelligence at all. It is highly praised!

The subject matter is good and the content is average. I feel like it is all about what will happen in the future and how different it is from the original work. The switching of the timeline is also very stiff and deliberate, and it loses the characteristics of the basic text. However, the subject matter is novel, the concept is also very good, and the characterization is also more delicate and vivid. It is not bad in fan fiction 👍

Like like like! [Blows a kiss] Everyone is moving in a better direction! Even Filch, who no one cared about before, used a new future! A better life! Come on, author!!! 😘

Good. This is the first time I read an article by the Big Four. I was attracted by the introduction. It was originally because it was lighthearted and funny, but in fact it was not. Many readers said it was very warm, but I feel that this kind of warmth is only on the surface. When you push away the surface warmth, you will feel a deep sense of powerlessness. You know the future but can't change it, watching the characters helplessly. It feels uncomfortable to move towards a settled situation. Of course, it does not mean that the future will not change. At least Harry's parents are alive. In short, the article seems a bit depressing (of course, this may also be because the boss occasionally interjects Peking's words. After all, the story of the Republic of China is very sad, which may have some influence). The above only represents my personal opinion.

It looks okay, but there are some problems. The proportion of reality is greater than the proportion of magic. I personally feel that, especially when writing HP articles, it should be closer to imagining how magical buildings should be constructed in fantasy, rather than using a realistic structure and then imposing it on the surface of magic. My personal impression should be similar to that of fantasy, like a dream. It would be weird if it was too close to reality. This only represents my personal preference. And then there is another point that is Yum's writing about the future and possible interweaving. If this thing is well written, it will be legendary. It's not well written, and it feels weird. It's as if he did the task for no reason and was transported directly to the era of Harry Potter, haha. Generally speaking, when writing this, I feel that I should write about the impact, not the specific characters, but the dialogue. That wouldn't look good on paper. If you want to talk about a TV series or movie, it would be good to write these things in dialogue, but in terms of written look and feel, it is uncomfortable. At the same time, when introducing the story of Harry Potter, I don't think we should focus on this. It's good to write about movie watching or just briefly touch upon it. It feels indescribably awkward to write this now. You say something and they complain about it. This is very strange. Regarding the combination of magic and architecture, you can refer to the article I read about MC crossing over to Harry Potter before. I even forgot the name. They combined MC with Harry Potter in the first half, and the first half was really amazing. I couldn't watch the second half. I felt that his writing was a bit strange in the second half, but the combination and creation in the first half made me find it very interesting. I don't know if what I say will make you feel weird, but I feel like this is my idea and some views on the article.

I really... In fact, the heroine is a very pitiful baby, but she encountered the system. After reading this book, I really felt warm in my heart, but I don't know why, I always feel sad, especially the part where the heroine and the four founders are talking together. I can really feel the deep warmth between the lines of DaDa. I was really touched when I saw the four founders trusting the heroine without hesitation. I can also feel the heroine from DaDa's pen. Warmth in my heart, I really like the time the heroine spent with the four founders a thousand years ago, because I think their days together will always be happy, fulfilling and warm. Everyone is very good and everyone is sincere. Even if Salazar is a pure-blooded defender, selfish, arrogant and indifferent in everyone's minds after a thousand years, in fact everyone is very good, and you can always feel the warmth from the big pen. Maybe this is the beauty of micro-group portraits...🥺

There is so much to praise about this book. The writing is smooth and emotionally delicate. The content is in line with HP's world view and has the author's unique and ingenious design of architecture. While the main line is building a house, the sub-line has been interspersed with plots that warm the characters of parents and children. Even if I don't like Snape as a teacher who bullies students, I will still be moved by the scene where Selene went to cook for him when he was a child. In addition, whether it is the protagonist, the four founders, or even the old and young wizards who build a house together, they all come to life in the author's few words. Everyone is vivid, very kind, and very real. Thank you to the author for letting me see such a warm magical world.