Ba: I Endure Hardship in the First Week and Enjoy the Blessings in the Second Week.

The Granblue Files fan fiction in Tomato is definitely on a first-class level, and there is no threshold for those who have not played Granblue Files, because the author's own portrayal of the characters is very distinctive, and it is quite consistent with the characters in the original work. The rhythm of the plot is quite comfortable, the protagonist has obvious growth in combat power, and the structure and writing are logical. The main plot is not procrastinating, and there are also warm character interaction chapters, which are tense and relaxed. For me personally, I really like watching the interactions with the students of Abydos (it really feels like a family). The author's portrayal of the character's personality and psychology is very delicate, and he can accurately guess the spiritual core of a character. My two accounts combined have 50 hours of viewing time,

I saw it many times in the bookstore. The first time I ran into it was on the 12th, and the second time I added it to the bookshelf. But because I ate too much shit, I ran to the cat next door and never read it. The first few times I came back to the bookstore, this book was almost always at the top. After I clicked it, I wanted to take a few casual glances, but after reading half a chapter, I sat up. Finally, I got the guarantee and got gold from the shit [crying] Ambrosia! The new comer promised me that he must read this book. If he doesn't like it after reading a few pictures, he won't be in a hurry to leave. Don't let this book be torn up😱

Do you know the feeling of stuffing candy and a knife into your mouth? Two story lines are told in the first and second episodes at the same time, and the tragedy and pain of the first episode set off the beauty and preciousness of the second episode. The author has a good understanding of the ba worldview, but there are relatively few OOC words. Ba's knife writing feels a bit lacking. The knives in this book taste so good that the author felt melancholy to himself while writing it. [Cover face] The author is also very diligent. With such an update frequency, he can still write 20,000 words per chapter. Even if he asks for leave, he will still be punished. He really makes me cry to death [Like] Regarding the content of the book, the author's understanding of students is that students are the incarnation of gods, so this involves many mythological stories. The language style sometimes resembles Shakespeare's plays (although I have only read that article in the Chinese language book). I believe the author must be a person who loves literature. The author should take good care of his health and not stop updating [Sending Hearts]

As good as ever, the small theater is the main story (violent review)

It may be a bit routine at the beginning, but it becomes very interesting later on with a lot of foreshadowing. The emotional lines are not so random, the characters' personalities are restored, and the plot is also very interesting. I can't think of any more.

The words, as leisurely as flowing water, explain the universal truth in the objective world - deja vu is a prerequisite for the spring of literary thoughts. Everything in the book swears the beauty of weak virtue - light but not dazzling, still water runs deep. So when reading, immersion slows down with concentration.

It is a very good novel that combines the main character's first episode with the "second episode" story. The cadence of the article is pretty good. In a harem novel, the relationship between the characters is well handled; there is a light OOC; there is a knife, but the wounds can be barely smoothed; the protagonist has a rather embarrassing thing happen at the beginning, and a similar thing will happen dozens of chapters later, but I personally think it is not too much. The highest quality blue archive article.

Not bad, the emotional expression is handled very delicately. The various descriptions are also used very well. The personal theater part has a strong sense of statement, but while reading it, I felt a certain emotion swirling in my heart. Eat extravagantly.

It's a good book. Although there are many typos, it can't hide the sincerity and sincerity of the content. Although some places are crazy and the ingredients are very complicated, but as the author said, he is free. These things make the unique style of this book more vivid. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot, especially the story that fully enters the main line. Come on, author, don't let this crazy and beautiful story end.

The protagonist's character is real enough, rational with a bit of madness, the plot is coherent, and the writing is pretty good. Worth five stars!

Everyone is smiling 😂 Celebrating 10,000 readers🎉🎉🎉 March 29 I cried when I watched it 😭😭😭, the young man's first episode was so miserable, and the story about the helmet group was really well written. 4Th, 2nd

Needless to say, it is a book that suits my taste. I pieced together a week's story through some small theaters. The character of the protagonist is also relatively good, and the writing is not bad. Although I see some traces of AI polishing, it does not affect it. It is just a pity that such a good book does not have a good rating. It may be that it is too niche. However, I give great support. By the way, if you see this book review, can you read the novel I wrote? Hey-hey.

It felt a bit awkward at first, and the pace was very slow, but the author's style became more mature and better as he wrote. The extras inserted at the same time also adjust the narrative rhythm well to prevent fatigue. Then it's great to eat a lot and feel full.

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As an author who has been writing for several years, I give myself full marks for my shamelessness. I am very grateful to the readers who support me. I don't know how long I can keep writing, but as long as I am still writing, I will work hard to make the writing interesting. It is difficult for adults to have persistence in their stories, but there is often no lack of persistence. The author experienced the loss of raising a child in advance.

The Blue Files fanfics I have read (whether it is Tomato or others) are all considered first-rate. The interaction between the protagonist and other characters, as well as the relationship between the first and second episodes are handled very well. The plot, characters, and writing are all very good, and they are large and full. It is worth reading [Top post][Top post][Top post]

I personally like BA stories very much, and I really enjoy watching the first episode and various small theaters. I also occasionally give out some of my favorite knives to eat [eating melons]. Except that there seem to be a few non-BA characters appearing, which I feel are a bit inconsistent [exploration] (it seems to be Ming Chao). The teacher has not signed up yet, and I am looking forward to the follow-up. The favorability seems to be a bit high now, may it develop into a harem in the future? The author updates 10,000 to 20,000 a day and is very productive. Come on, my big brother who writes BA [Like]

The plot is very interesting, and the small theater is even better, but why don't many people watch it if it is so good? [Think]

I don't know what to say, but it's good to read. Each chapter is large and full, and you can see that the author writes it carefully. As long as it doesn't get blocked or unfinished, it will definitely be a high-quality BA second-generation novel! [Praise]

The most filling episode, there are many updates (10,000 to 40,000 words per episode), the first and second episodes are delicious, they all have different perspectives, bringing different feelings, the small () theater is also very beautiful, and the emotions are delicate and touching people's hearts. But too few people have read it. Come on, author.

It's great. It's the best BA article I've ever read on Tomato.

Prison years are not ordinary charm Although the plot is a bit delayed But the novel is written with true feelings Everyone in Abydos wrote so vividly Relations with other colleges are also handled with ease Summary, worth a look! The writing is very good, the emotions are delicate, and there are many interesting plots [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It's a good book. It has a good control over the plot and the number of words in each chapter. It's quite innovative, but some of the sentences are too complicated and too gorgeous to be understood [face covering] Anyway, it's a rare good book in BA.

It is a super interesting story about young people and students. The author uses a very good technique to describe the characters. Not only does it not deviate from the original line of the story, it also has its own original plot and original characters for the story.

The novel is so good. No, I listen to it. I usually listen to novels. Forget it, I won't write those reviews. After all, I can't write, but I still want to review this book. After all, it is a very good novel.

Isn't it 10,000 per chapter a day? Did you practice using a typewriter? Very excellent work, the quality is updated online quickly, I hope every sensei can come and take a look.

It is a very good book but for me, it is a very good book, but for me, I don't like to read more, mainly because if the name refers to a young person, for me, this may not be a good name. For me, the title of young man can only be used as a nickname, or a code name. For me, if I lose my memory, my name should be the last one to forget.

The author is awesome. 42 Chapters total more than 500,000 words.

To be honest, the popularity of Weilan Files is quite low, and related works are like limited-flow, but the author's writing is really great. I like the author's rhythm very much, both in terms of content and language. I have read many other excellent ba fanfics before, but those were either blocked or discontinued, which made me feel very uncomfortable. I am lucky to find this novel!

A rare good article among ba articles Super beautiful, highly recommended