MC: Become a Fox Girl, Become a God

It is known that the protagonist's ysm model is a fox girl The wine fox is a fox lady The protagonist's sword-drawing skills are quite good The wine fox is a master in the field of drawing swords … To sum up, the author dug two sets of diamonds for me, harvested the wheat... Then bred the cattle and sheep, and then cooked two vegetables for me... And then cranked the crank [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Yes, the shortcoming is that the plot is relatively bland and there are few climaxes. However, this is a common problem with MC fan fiction. This book tends to be classified as -daily-light novel. In this way, this book review should be a reference for all book friends.

The characterization is good and the plot is okay, so when will I become a fox girl permanently [smile]

Haokang ~ But I personally think it may be more convenient for the protagonist's two bodies to be combined into one. After all, Moore's fallacy is also mentioned in the article. If the main body is too weak, it will become a weakness that cannot be ignored. But the author doesn't need to worry about me. It's fine now, as long as the post-processing is done well.

[Sending Hearts] This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's love for Diao Cicada fights Sun Wukong for three hundred rounds. But Xue Baochai is really too strong Well, if it weren't for the Noxian guillotine + the Noxian guillotine, this The wave M4 shoots six times to kill, showing Zhuge Liang hitting the monkey with three sticks His indignation is dead, but I am more concerned about Zhuge Liang's 108 views on Huaguoshan What the monkey said: "Young man is proud, don't do it in front of your brother Liang" All in all, this book has an interesting plot and a clear system. There are a lot of foreshadowings, the fighting scenes feel like being there, and the character descriptions are also Very good! [Like]

The writing is lacking and the plot is acceptable. I originally wanted four stars, but since the new book is about to set sail, I'm adding one more star to show my support. I need to revise my rating and express my thoughts on the first 20 chapters of this book. There is a serious problem in the early stages of this book, that is, there are too many supporting characters. There are also too many plots for supporting characters. If it is controlled well, this is not a problem, or even an advantage. However, the problem is that the author's pacing is very confusing, and the early pacing is a bit too fast. This resulted in all the plots of the supporting characters being lumped together, leaving less space for the protagonist. This resulted in a lack of centrality, giving people a sense of "did I see it?" Usually the plot of a novel should revolve around a theme, that is, the main line. This theme can be the protagonist or various things, but it must not be without a theme. Taking this book as an example, you can use the world of MC as the theme, and temporarily write the daily reality in a more funny way until the pace picks up again after awakening. You can also use the element of sexual transformation as a temporary theme, and then slowly introduce the main line and so on. But the first 20 chapters of this book gave me the feeling that all the plots were lumped together, and I couldn't tell which ones were longer or shorter. The protagonist didn't have much of a role. It wasn't until the last chapters 19 to 20 that it was almost better. And at the same time, there is a very serious problem, that is, the author sometimes suffers from literary youth syndrome, and the secondary disease is very serious, and it is easy to be immersed in his own world and unable to extricate himself. The part where Uncle Wang kneels down on one knee is the part where I feel the most serious, because the author may have been writing about it at that time. This is a modern city, not an ancient fairy tale, and there are not so many happy and grudges. In a modern city, the way to express gratitude and life-saving grace should not be to kneel down and swear allegiance, not to mention that Uncle Wang is still an elder than the protagonist. The current rating of this book in my mind is 7.5 To 7.8. Normally, I should give it three stars because there are really many shortcomings. But considering that this is a new book, I hope the author can make improvements in the future, so I will add one more star [Like] Change 1: How come all members are Gufeng Xiaosheng? Change 2: It's much better at the back, you can watch it if you think about it

So why did the author update? Because they want to continue the breath of the story But it's impossible So, what do you think? Because of them, they must be updated When the perfect attendance deadline hangs high like the sword of Damocles Only authors who break the news can escape the fate of oblivion That's right In order to prevent the story from sinking into the sea of oblivion I dismantled ribs to make pen holders Forge moonlight into punctuation Compose heartbeats into chapter rhythms But if you want to witness a new chapter you... You You must endure me till the end of time These are after crossing the history of Internet literature The logic of the author Come on, everything I carry Nothing to do with choice Nothing to do with life or death At this moment, everyone's urging converges into the only ambition Brahma and beasts Add to this body Karma Demon enters the abyss Break the key step forward This is BackForgot

Click on the introduction and take a look, it's over There are too many known contents in the entire introduction. More content could have been inserted. After reading the introduction twice, I felt that it was bland. It was too bland and I could have added some crises and problems. Your introduction is very bland, but the plot of your main text is very fast. But it's not fun from beginning to end But you can still watch it, the fox girl is very cute, the characters have distinct personalities, and the plot can be watched.

This book is excellent. The content is exciting, the plot is exciting, and the knowledge is rich and in-depth. The text expression is delicate, smooth and readable, allowing people to immerse themselves in it and gain a lot. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

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Kids, here I go again After reading about twenty chapters, my first impression is that it is dull and a bit confusing. Maybe the author needs to label the group portrait? The reason for the dullness is that the rhythm of the plot is relatively average. I feel that this section of the plot has passed by in a daze, and I am not very impressed. The beginning and end of a plot are not clear and clear. The reason for the confusion is that the first twenty chapters are basically bound to the group activities of four people in the dormitory, which also leads to uneven distribution of writing between the main and secondary characters. For example, the author wants to express the emotions of an entire group, but the character traits of the protagonist of this article are not immediately highlighted. This may also be the reason why it is a bit dull. Including the author's writing focus, he did not express clearly whether it is a so-called group portrait adventure type or a single protagonist's sexual transformation type. All in all, in my opinion, I want to give this book 3.5 Stars. I give it four stars because of the new book, the writing style is acceptable, and the subject matter is good. It is a very good ration book during the book shortage.

Not bad. This book is mainly urban writing, and the part about the cube people is more of a source of strength.

It's a potentially good book. It can be said that as long as the author keeps the plot going and maintains this pace, with a few small climaxes, it should be able to attract many readers.

I haven't seen equivalent exchange yet.

It looks very good to me. I have been chasing it for a long time, and now that I have found it, I give it a five-star rating. I really like that this kind of battle is exciting and has daily heartwarming plot at the same time. Most of the good books I read are either bad or eunuch. They are really annoying. I hope they can stay with me for a longer time. [Laugh]

There's nothing to comment on, it's just okay to read, but I suddenly realized that the characters in the book are very similar to Cao Cao's true biography, drunkenness - singing, life - geometry... Silently reduce one star

It's pretty good-looking (so who is the heroine)?

Look, it's a new book from Minecraft! I'm saved (

Yes, the quality is relatively good for an MC story. I hope there won't be any more poison in the future. I feel like I can write a story directly. The presence of the female protagonist is too weak. It can be said that there is no one. So far, the name of the female protagonist has only been seen in about ten chapters. I feel that it would be better if there is no female protagonist. By the way, has the author considered directly cutting off the male form? I feel that the look and feel is not good.

Nice. Love watching, keep going [sending heart]

I Am Almighty 5 Five Book Reviews

There are swords drawn and Thai pants are spicy!

Come give me a good review

Good book, absolutely good book Look how long I've been watching.2

I can't eat anymore and I'm running away. Come on.

Teacher, I've finished eating (knock on the bowl) I've finished eating, teacher (knock on the bowl)

The protagonist is in the form of a girl, so I'm afraid she's not a drunk fox.

I'm a fan, so I'd rather give it 5 stars just because of the pink color, not to mention that I've been a MC prison player for 11 years.

This is the weakest Steve I have ever seen, bar none [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Let's let the protagonist develop quickly. Brothers, daily update